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Posted: 5 years ago

WOW that moved quickly, but glad it didnt go to far. Maan has a sad history and seeing him at a loss with the thought of having no one is depressing. Hopefully Geet keeps her word

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 60

emotional update!

feeling for Maan! sad that he lost his fiancee and his baby!

Liked Geet assuring Maan

wow Maaneet kissed!

lovely moments!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

That was quick superb update

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Geet accepting Maan in hr life and assuring him she will always with him

Maan losshis fiancee and baby in that accident wgom his sis get hurt

Maaneet kissed and both willing to b with each other

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Posted: 5 years ago

This was so touching... they kissed, and it was so beautiful. Maan has lost so much more than what we knew, a a pregnant gf and his baby 😥

I hope they realize they kissed out of love

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Posted: 5 years ago

superb update

maan recall his past with geet's questions how he lost his baby with fiance in accedent by akhil

geet responds maan but maan keep himself in control

geet asure him that she will be with with him forever

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Posted: 5 years ago

Poor Maan also had a painful past.

Geet promised to be with Maan.


At last they kissed.

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New update on its way!!

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wonderful update... oh no maan's fiancée & unborn baby died in a accident & his sis was suffering major medical problem which was made by Akhil who was safe without any claim.... loved maaneets closeness…. excited for next...!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 61

She looks at him quizzically...with eyes that ask...'is something wrong?'

He holds her hand and raises it to his lips, it’s better to be away from her tempting lips

He kisses her fingers, his eyes reassuring

Shes miles...feeling being loved

There was just silence between them but so much of feelings made words seem unnecessary

G-Turn off the lights

She whispers as she hides her face slowly into his hard muscular chest

Maan pulls away from her a little then gets up turns down the lights

Then goes to lay down next to her taking her back into his arms

She shuts her eyes...lost in comfort and warmth of his nearness

Maan ko neend nahi aa rahi; Kya pata fir kab mauka mile to have Geet like this in his arms

But Geet feels loved…really loved..safe...happy…protected really like a woman

Geet feels even if Maan has nothing…she would still stick to Maan

She slept in his arms

Par Maan soya nahi

He was feeling and cherishing every moment, her rhythmic breathing, her slender body draped in his arms, her hair tickling his neck and arms, her scent teasing his senses

Next subah Maan utha toh dekha Geet bed pe nahi hai

Maan ko bhi samjh nahi aaya ki kab gayi

He doesn’t feel as if he slept a wink but soya toh hoga hi ki Geet chali gai


Geet kitchen mein thi humming to herself

Maan aaya

M- Good morning

Geet bartaan dho rahi thi paani chal raha tha to suna hi nahi Geet ne ki Maan aa gaya

He comes up behind her holds her waist in a gentle grip and kisses her hair

M- Good morning

He says and moves away

She stiffens then turns and looks at him a coy smile

G-Good morning

M-Kya bann raha hai aaj breakfast mein?

He asks peering over her shoulder

G-Eggs and toast

She answers remembering ki kya bana rahi thi while looking at him adoringly

M- My fav

He says looking at her

She smiles again tilting her head

Maan is somehow feeling so happy from inside but somehow it feels like his happy bubble is about to burst and it would most probably be his fault too

Geet also feels so very happy, as if she is gliding in air in the wind of happiness

He smiles at her and chup chap sits at the table picking up his paper jo ki upside down hai

He pretends to read while all the time steeling glances at Geet

Geet plate etc rakhne idhar udhar aati hai phir dheere se Maan ke peeche aage...lean karti hai

She whispers on his ear

G-Newspaper sidha karke padne ki koshish karo...zyada samajh ayega

Maan blushe sa little

M- I wasn’t reading...

Geet raises a brow

M- I…mean I...main wo... picture dekh raha tha isme… advertisement hai ek

He says quickly closing the paper isse pehle Geet kahe ki mujhe bhi dikhao

Geet chali jaati hai

G-Mujhe dekhna chahte ho toh aise hi dekh sakte ho

She says casually putting the breakfast and sitting down

M-Fine...

He puts the paper away settles both elbows on the table and his chin on top of his crossed arms softly gazing at Geet

She starts having breakfast

After awhile she says as she glances at him…

G-Khao

Maan extends one hand, picks up his toast and brings it to his mouth, not moving much not looking away much

Geet looks at him and raises an eyebrow dramatically. It almost disappears in her hairline

M- Is there a problem?

She raises left and right eyebrow dramatically in rhythm with a naughty glint in her eyes then narrows her eyes

He smiles at her catching on to her light mood

She moves her mouth left right sucks in air and squeezes her nose cutely

Maan laughs at her antics

M- God!How can you be so cute?

He asks with slight tilt of his face as if in deep contemplation

G-Try me...I can be lot more things...

She says in a low sultry voice then suddenly breaks into school girly giggles

Maan looks surprised at her siren avatar…not surprised that she would be like that but surprised of the sudden change

M-I think I have a fair enough idea of what all you can be...

She winks

He grabs his heart and pretends a mock faint due to her flirtations smiling and laughing with her

Geet giggles more

Time kab nikla pata nahi chala

Maan ne achanak gadhi dekhi to dikha ki kaafi late ho gaye hai

M- I have to go get ready

He says pushing away from the table

Geet cleans the table and packs his Tiffin and all

Maan aaya bhagta bhgata

G-Tiffin le lo

Geet ne wave kiya..bye

M- Bye. See you in the evening and call me if you need anything

He goes hurriedly

Shaam ko Geet ko Maan ka message aaya ki party hai office ki, can’t get out of it. Late aunga. But I’ll try to get back as soon as possible

Geet to pura din sapne saja rahi thi, Maan ka wait ka rahi thi

Message padke thoda disappoint si hui

Ab idhar party mein the

It was Akhil ki I am cool party

Drinks were flowing, Akhil had got all the stuff that were termed as cool and happening

Sab officewale enjoy kar rahe the

Maan was waiting for the moment to sneak off

Geet was there thinking and thinking about Maan

She messaged him also...miss karte karte....

“u knw...I already miss u...w8in 4 u”

Maan also messages ki

“wish u were here.will try to come back asap”

Geet let gai mobile pe Maan pics nihaarte hue

Akhil ne party mein kaha ki

Akhil- Aaj toh party hai upar se Maan sahab bhi jaa rahe hain so it’s his farewell party too, toh aaj toh peeni hi padegi

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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago

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