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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Interesting Start

So Maan plans the accident just so that Ahkil gives
him a job at his company
seems like Maan wants some revenge from Ahkil
during the day he is dressed like a nerd while later he
dresses himself just the way he should with style and aura
so he will be now meeting Ahkil's girlfriend
waiting to see what has Maan planned
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Part 2

Baaki raat ko plan bana ki time to impress the Akhil's girlfriend

He changes his look from the nerdy middle class boy to the suave industrialist with stylish gelled hair, branded designer suit with the right fit to show off is muscular frame, designer shoes and accessories and the walk of a king all complementing his oozing handsomeness and effortless style

He got the flat in the same apartment as Antara (Akhil's girl-friend)

Antara was reversing her car in her parking lote, she was getting late for her date with Akhil

Achanak zor se awaaz aai kisi cheez se car lagne ki

She brakes immediately

Maan aaya bhagta hua holding a bloody tiny thing

M-You killed my pet! (That was just a toy in some fake blood)

Antara-I am sorry...I am sorry!

Maan ne ek look di lip tight...ankhon men gussa chalak raha

Agle din Antara lift mein chadi...door khula

Subah -Subah Maan is in his vest and track pants

Antara-Hi, Sorry for your dog...I really didn't mean to...

Maan ne total ignore maara aur kaano mein headphone laga liya

Antara found him intriguing. Usne dekha ki jog pe jaata hai roz. Usne ne kuch din try ki baat karne ki

Maan ne ignore mara

Maan ke liye delivery aayi...Armani suit ... 6th floor ki jagah 7th mein chale gaye

Antara ne le liya socha ki bahana mil jayega Mr dude se baat karne ka humein bhi to pata chale ki itna attitude kis baat ka hai

Aayi Maan ke apartment par knock kiya

Maan ne gate khola in crisp shirt and trouser

Antara-Your suit go-

M- Oh there it is! Wait a minute

Antara ko wahin chodkar gate kholkar he goes inside his room

She can sees the interior is tastefully and richly done...bada TV... sleek sofa and stuff

He comes back in a minute carrying a bunch of notes, takes the suit and hands the her the money and closes the door on her face

Now this is just insulting to ignore and act cold is one thing; to treat her like a delivery/laundry girl is...does she look like a frigging laundry girl!!! She is an actress!!!! And she is wearing designer clothes original designer clothes and not rip offs and how dare he insult her like this

Dekha ki rs 5000/- diye hain

She bangs the door angrily

Maan ne gate khola 1 min baad frowning..

She throws money at his feet

An- I am not a laundry girl!! Your stuff got delivered to MY apartment! Next time I'll just burn it

Keh kar mudh kar chali gai

Next morning

Antara gets this huge delivery of orchids with a simple sorry note

Anatara ko laga ki huh.. agaya na line par.. he is another fan of mine now

Incidentally raat ko club mein thi

Maan dikha

He was with a beautiful leggy girl too

Wo Maan ke paas gai atitude dikhane ki you are a manner less and rude person and no flowers can compensate for your behavior

She wanted him to grovel in person

Maan looks at her ki who are you...

M-So throw them away. You killed my pet; I don't care what you think of me or who you are

Kehkar He pass a charming smile to his girl

M-Lets go. The crowd is uncivilized here

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Wahan roz Maan chup chap subah apni achi gaadi mein nikalta hai; raaste mein ek badi building ke andar car parking mein switches his get up and vehicle and fir office jaata hai

Office mein everyone just says ki he is the new guy he is pretty uninteresting and boring and aloof too, bas apne kaam se matlab rakhta hai...kisi se baat nahi karta bakwaa naih gossip nahi koi joke nahi, koi joke mare bhi to hasta nahi jaise samajh naa aaya ho but he is polite and a hard worker

Udhar behcrai Geet...slavery; idhar se udhar ..udhar se idhar bhaage jaaye

Saare demand poore kare jaaye

But she likes the slavery she feel needed

She is always running around

Maan cabin mein Akhil ke saath baat karte karr raha tha when Akhil barked "Hungry!! picking up the intercomm

Geet bhaagke khana le aai

A-I am speaking to Maan, and would take notes; can't dirty my hands

She starts feeding him as he is busy talking

Maan looks at Geet ki kya bewakoof gadhi ladki hai

He can see the adoration in Geet's eyes for Akhil

Besides there is office gossip how Geet would give her life for Akhil and how he treats her lower than a Negro slave

There are stories...ki aesa hua tha...waisa hua tha Akhil ko and Geet did this did that...for him...

Akhil is a wimp too and hell moody, afraid of ghosts and dark

Geet would stay with him if he has to work late so that he won't be alone

Maan also plays small pranks

Akhil late kaam karke jaa raha tha beech mein light ruk gai batti gul

Geet peeche aa rahi thi lock karke, lift mein Akhil ke saath nahi thi

Jab 5 min baad lift chalu hui; Akhil bahar Geet ki worried bahon mein

A-I was so scarred...what if I got trapped forever in there

Geet dilaasa deti hai jaise 3 saal ke bachche ko samjha rahi ho

Maan ko mazze nahi aaye..

Maan ko laga ki it would be much better to take Geet away... he wouldn't be destroyed emotionally or financially but he would be helpless...like through a pampered kid out on streets and make him work

But Maan ke paas time and patience nahi tha ki wo Geet ko pataye

Ek din Maan araaha tha

Geet Akhil ke liye coffee le kar bhaag rahi thi

Ger di Maan par

G-Sorry-sorry...oh my the coffee...oh god now he won't get coffee on time

Geet bhaagke phir se coffee laane gai

Maan looked at her ki how...just how...he is at loss of words

He can't be himself, can't get a new shirt either, jo hai ussi mei thoda dho ponch kar kaam karta hai

Ussi din Akhil ne bhi bulaya kisi meeting ke liye

Maan ko daaanta ki dhang ke kapde pehnkar aaya karo... pay to kar raha hu main..

Maan ne socha ki chugli karu ki nai

M-Someone spilt coffee on me in the office...should I go home and change?

Wahin Geet aayi

G- Akhil sorry-sorry wo coffe gir gai thi tumahri...I am late...ye lo

Akhil tells Geet ki

A-You are becoming so clumsy these days. Thoda to dhayan se kaam kara karo aur Mr Singh ke liye ek shirt order kar do. He can't work in this

Geet ko gussa aaya ki meri chugli kar di...chugalkhor kahika... kuch pait mein nai pachta

She asks ki kya size hai tumahra

Maan ne bataya ki kya hai

She smiles veryyy sweetly

Adhe ghante baad she walks into his office and drops a paper bag on his table on top of papers he was working on

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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Nice update..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Nice part. So finally Maan started his mission to get Akhil's girl friend. N I guess she is already behind Maan now. Geet is completely mad for Akhil. She handles him like he is some kind of fragile thing. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Revenge is one at a whole other level. Seems like he really is playing his game well and no one is aware at all. Poor Geet is going to be stuck.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
great update! superbly written!

Maan's plan implemented! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
akhil's girlfriend is behind maan in few efforts
maan thinks it very hard to separate geet from akhil n think geet as stupid who is admiring akhil

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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Superb Chapter

So Maan is now on his mission plan Akhil's girlfriend
while she seems awed by Maan and I think this is his plan
to make her go crazy for him while he ignores her
Ahkil on the other hand does not value Geet at all while she has to be in love with him
doing each and every task and chore for him
Maan sees and realizes that Geet is Ahkil's slave even when the lights go out he wants Geet

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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Pakka Geet be kuch gadbad khi hui hogi
I mean khi itni sweetly smile kiya chugli khey baad
Maan was trapping Antara in his game
Nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
geet really likes akin a lot
he seems have many problem
but antara is his gf so maan in mood to make her fall for him

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