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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 33

M-You are beginning to sound like a lesbian. Are you sure there isn't anything more than just admiration going on here?

G-Chup raho!

She pushes him

He laughs

G-Maan

M-Hmm?

G-Chaand pe jaane ke liye kitne paise lagte honge?

M-So Africa isn't far enough?

She looks at him

M-Sorry...I didn't mean to bring that up. Chaand pe jaane ke liye...I dunno...I guess about a crore in Indian rupee

G-umm

M-I've heard it isn't much scenic there. Mainly just sand around. You know you can see better sand in our regular deserts and not wear the hideous bodysuit

G-umm and stars? What about stars? How far are they?

M-They are really very far away... like hundreds of years of travel time

G-emm...par wahan to free pohonch jao naa

M- Free how?

She takes her tongue out and closes eyes..gesture for death

M-You think that where they go after death?

He asks philosophically gazing at the stars again

G-Hmm

M- I dunno... I can really believe that's where they go

G-Why?

M-I just don't. Why do you think that's where they go?

She shrugs

M-But you know it doesn't really matter where they go coz they are gone and they leave people behind who care about them and that's the worst part...no matter where we go after we die...we leave people an relations behind...and hurt people. So I don't really care where we go...it's still sad when someone dies

G-But we meet naa, in next birth

She says optimistically

M-There's no guarantee for that... and who knows how our relation to that person maybe in next birth. What if you end up hating them next time? What if there is no next time. Maybe one of you turns up as a cow and the other one beats it to death. You really can't leave important stuff on next time

G-But...I so hoped...even if I don't get Akhil in this birth I will wait till next birth and surely get him then

Maan pauses to look at her

M- I don't really see why you are so into him... to even want knowing him the next time

G-Huh?

M-What part of the question you don't understand?

G-Nothing...tum nahi samjhoge. Let's go in

Geet walks

Maan follows her

He doesn't want to end the evening in a sour note...although its already gone bad with mention of Akhil between them. He doesn't wanna make it worse

Geet andar chali gai

G-Good night

M-Good night

He goes into his room

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
geet is still in thoughts of akhil which hurt maan
geet is not ready to face reality how selfish akhil is n using her as per his needs
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Posted: 6 years ago

res

Interesting prologue. Geet in love with Alkhil, and Maan in revenge mode with Akhil..
that is an interesting combo and theme. It will be interesting to see if Geet will be able to stop Maan from harming Akhil or really fall in love with him..and same goes for Maan,

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi, thanks for PM
Geet still love Akhil ,she should khow about Akhil & come out from her dream world , she expects reunite with Akhil in next birth, Maan told reality about life you write very well
Edited by mkd.70 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
is geet mad or wht...still thinking of akhil...geet come out of ur obsession...think beyond akhil...try it atleast...

nice update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Cannot believe geet still likes Akhil. What does she see in him like maan says
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is sad. She's talking abt getting Akhil in next birth andtalking about death. Why she still hung up over him? Hasn't he humiliated her enough? 0 self respect.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 33

perfect update! well written!

when will Geet realise that Akhil was using her? sad that she is still in love with Akhil after what happened!

Maan is upset!

continue soon, thanks for the pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Geet is so much in to akhil hr every thought end on him it's hurt Maan but he let it go
Geet k mind se usse ka bohat utarna hi ho ga akhil usse kuch b nahi samjta

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