REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159)

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#331

wht r u doing maan...geet ko sambhalo...uss chudail ko chhodo aur jao geet k pass...uss akhil ko maat chhodna maan...

lovely update...

Edited by love2_soma - 7 years ago

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#332

Well at least Maan has some sense of how hurt Geet is. He doesnt want her to get hurt yet she is indirectly getting hurt oh boy this is going to be eventful because he cant get her out of his mind. Antara needs to stop two timing or whatever she is doing.

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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#333

Part 20

Maan waits outside phone stuck to his ear talking to customer service...aise hi time pass kar raha hai

After half an hour he comes back in

Antara thodi irritate si ho rakhi thi

Maan aaya half hour baad andar looking busy and opening wardrobe pulling out a suit

Antara-Where are you going?

Maan ne Antara ko dekha and goes ohhh'

He looks depressed and then frustrated and irritated

M-Oh Antara...I completely... I am so sorry that was so rude of me

Maan says looking appropriately sorry but still not genuinely caring if she forgives him or not

Antara-Hmm...where are you going?

M-Video conference with father.. .he is...well he is... used to ordering around and having every order followed immediately. I am sorry...this came up so suddenly

Antara-When will you be free?

M-Frankly babe...I don't know. If its business maybe an hour if it's one of his moods...well he needs a long time to get placated

Antara-emm...

She walks to Maan and puts her arms around his neck

Antara- Doesn't matter don't worry...may be tomorrow

She kisses him

M-Instead what about the weekend? We can go out somewhere and I can say I have no internet connectivity

Antara-wow...great idea...but but but...we are going to this movie tomorrow

She shows him tickets

Antara-I really want to see it

M-Babe I don't think i can get away on weekend if I take my evening off tomorrow

Anatara-But I really wanted to see

M-So if you want the movie then we'll have to postpone the other plan

Anatara- Not, don't cancel

M-We will get a DVD of the movie. Alright?

He pulls her clue and gives her a last hot kiss

M-Thanks for making the welcome home special

She grins

He tells her then moves away and starts putting on his shirt and tie

Anatara chali jaati hai dress up joke

Maan bhi gate band karke wapas apni underwear mein aa jaata hai

Khatre se khaali nahi hai ab yahan wapas nahi aana yahan

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Raat ko socha Maan ne ki Geet ko call kare pooche is she ok? Since she took half day

Par fir nahi kiya

He didn't go with her to the movie, avoided talking to her not to ultimately call her now

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Ghar jakar Akhil marched to the outhouse and banged the door demanding to talk to Geet and then shouted at her jo poore din ka tha

Aur dhamka bhi diya ki aisa phir hua toh she can move out and look for a job elsewhere

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Agla din hua

Office ki morning

Maan aake baith gaya hai office mein

Geet enter hui

Jahan jahan se guzre wahan wahan people are laughing behind her back coz of the office jokes that were forwarded on her

Kuch to saamne bhi hass rahe hain

She looks around perplexed

She feels uncomfortable with stares

Sab kuch kuch-khus phis-phusa rahein hain aur hass rahe hain

Geet chup chuap sar neeche karke aake baith gai apni desk par

Wo chup chap koshish kar rahi hai kaam karne ki but her face gives it all

Chehre se to lag raha hao ki abhi nervous breakdown ho jayega

Kuh log gaye Maan ke paas ki-yaar tu bhi to wahin tha...bata na hua kya tha...batao batao...ki exactly kya hua

Maan bohot der tak chup raha , ab logon ne nahi choda to bola ki

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Note from the author:

Today i want to share something with you all, you are so close to my heart and even with my married life, household work, job search, certification preparation and all I make a point to write for you all readers. Some readers are wonderful they read my story, wait for updates eagerly and comment on it diligently, some are silent readers, for whom i what for to interact with me.

But today something happened that broke my heart. I PM every reader to notify on updates. Some readers read the fic without PM or some see the notification and read...I dont PM people coz I have nothing better to do...or I want to spam somebody's inbox...today i got a PM from a reader who might have been a reader at some point and this person was my PM list. I used to PM this person on every update...but I got a PM from this reader saying very rudely to not PM his/her with my updates so much and she/he is very busy in ones life.

I felt so belittle and ridiculed and sad...i felt am I spamming people...as a writer isnt it enough that i make an effort to think write and edit the story, post it and then PM people out of my duty but then people take it this way...I am sorry if i said too much...I am genuinely sad and heart-broken

Thanks for reading

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#334

Nice part. Finally Maan got rid of antara.i don't know what would he do in weekend now. Feeling bad for Geet. I hope Geet leaves this job. She deserves better. Waiting for next dear

It was really rude of that reader. She could simply deny to send pm. Anyways leave them. Don't feel bad for such people.

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#335

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#336

Very nice update, well written.

Maan is dilly dallying right now but I wonder how long he's going to procrastinate like this, won't she get a doubt that he's intentionally avoiding her? She seems so desparate to make out with him, lol.

And Geet, oh this Akhil needs to be taught a lesson & its high time Geet starts thinking about her self respect, she doesn't have to work like this! He's ridiculous. Poor thing I feel miserable for her. Wondering Maan ne kya bola at the end. Waiting for next.

Its very rude of that person to reply to you like that. So insensitive, but that's how it is, different kinds of ppl with different behaviors, so please don't get upset with it and take everything to heart. She could have simply unfriended you rather than msging like that. I felt really bad reading your note. Cheer up :)

Edited by babelicious - 7 years ago

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#337

hai dear..i feel really bad for what have happen to you.some ppl fail to recognize this forum writers effort.but most of us really love your work. please ignore the negative people..take care

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#338

Awesome part. Maan escaped from antara. Maan wants to talk with geet but he stays away from her. Everyone is making geet as laughing stock. Hope this time maan supports her firmly. I think geet will not forgive him if she came to know about his revenge. Akhil is rude and cunning man.

Don't bother about others. If should have politely replied back to you regarding pm but she chose other way. I would say to ignore her and move on. Your an amazing writer

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Mkd

@mkd.70

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#339

Nice update , keep writing ,you y stories are simple which I liked, and about note don't sad about those who are rudely with you ,duniya me sub tarah ke log hote hai unse khude per effect mat hone do, Jo tumhari story Ko read karte hai or update ka wait karte hai unke liye khus ho😊 be happy