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priya : Tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
kalpi : Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
priya : Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
preety : Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
sanju : kya baat hai aaj
bda romantic ho rhe ho teeno
priya : wo kya hai na sanju
sanju : ha
priya : chod
tujhe smjh nhi aayenga😆
preety : before one more fight start😉
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Part 1

Two young heart when meet, love blossom... falling in love is written of both one destiny but then why pain in this heart... This pain going reside you for forever...

Let's go few years back, when he is just 21 and she is just 18...

I belong to rich family, my parents loved me so much, I always want to go village but my full family living in cities... our college gone in trip to pune, here I get chance to see one village plus I met with her first time here

I never forget that day , that trip which changed my whole life

Vyom , shiv let's go

.

Maan just wait few hours

We just reached here

And you ready to run for outing

Maan : common shiv

Now no another excuse

You both know we have only two days, which teacher given us to explore here

Vyom : and you want to go to Village

Maan : so what wrong in this

You both coming or not

Shiv : coming

Vyom : ok

*********

Morachi Chincholi

A famous village in the midst of non-descript villages! Morachi Chincholi village the names means peacocks and tamarind trees. This village is famous for its tamarind trees (which no one is interested in) and hundreds of free-roaming peacocks and peahens (which everyone is interested in).

We just start taking pictures ...

The village is not very big i.e. the one road which runs through it is probably a 2-3 kms long. But, the peacocks are everywhere...


Vyom : it's looking beautiful

Maan : hmm

Shiv if you want I can drive slowly now

And you can explore here

Shiv : no you enjoy

We come here for you most importantly

We ventured into the fields a bit and managed to see quite a few peacocks. But the problem was that they were extremely fleet footed and often went into the tall grasses literally becoming invisible. Once, we were just looking around standing near the edge of the road and suddenly a peacock rushed out of the bushes just a meter ahead of us. He was there all the while and we hadn't even noticed him. Probably, a sudden movement by us startled him


.

Vyom : now what next

Hope hume yaha raat ko rukne ka kuch mil jaaye

Shiv : let's see

There is also a small temple in the village where it seems bhajans happen in the evenings.

Bhajan voice make us stop, and we enter in temple...

Maan : nice voice

.

Why you looking me like that

Voice is nice

Vyom : kya baat hai

Yaha aate ladkiyo ko notice krne laga

Maan : common

I just talking about voice

.

But his words stopped in mid, she turn to give aarti to all, he just lost to see her face, her black eyes, long hairs which flowing in air, and she trying to put hair behind the ears in mid while giving aarti to all... Her voice which make him to enter the temple... And her glowing faces...

She come and stopped near him...

She waits few seconds, he take aarti, but he lost so much in her... She looks another two boys...

Vyom : hum le lete aarti phle

Vyom & shiv take aarti, then again her step stopped near him...

..

Inhe kya dikhayi nhi deta

Her voice like melody songs in his ears, he blink the eyes slightly...

His friends nodded absently... both not excepting she going ask something like that

Poor boy

She round the hand on fire flames and touch on his both eyes one by one... and left...

Maan touched own face and smiled to feel her...

Shiv slapped on his shoulder and said ye sb kya ho rha hai Maan

Maan : kya huya

Vyom : kya huya

Usse laga tumhe dikhta nhi hai

Maan : uske aange mujhe kaha kuch dikha waise bhi

Shiv : maan let's go back

Maan : shiv

I like her

Shiv : maan we not know her

Maan : ek pal hi kafi hai Shiv

Jaise ek pal mein sharanya ne tumhe dil de diya

Asa lag rha hai

Mera dil ye le gyi

Vyom : ye toh gya

***********

Trio come down , and maan again seen same girl, he take step towards her, his friend try to stop him...

Hey

.

Namastey

.

Aap kya bta sakti hai

Yaha koi resort ho

Raat ko rukne ke liye

.

Chaliye mere sath

.

Mere dost bhi hai waha

.

Vyom , shiv come

.

Aap dono kaise dost hai inke

Inhe dikhayi nhi deta hai

Aur aap dono ko ye puchna chaiye

.

Aur aapne bechare inhe bej diya

.

Maan : what

Kisne kaha mujhe dikhayi nhi deta

.

Aapke dost ne

Vyom & shiv : no

Humne nhi kaha

Aapne khud maan liya

.

Then MR. why you staring me

.

Vyom : wah

Village me English girl

.

Oh village me rhte hai

Iska matlab ye nhi

Anpad hai hum

Smjhe aap

.

Aur aap

Hume kyun gur rhe the

Maan : tumsa hasin maine aaj tak koi nhi dekha

.

Sandle padi na

Toh ye lofarpanti sbhi utar jaayengi

.

Kaka chaliye

She sits in bullock cart and left...

***********

She enters in resort and seen worried face of Kajal...

Kajal kya huya

Kajal : yaar aaj bhi kaka ne hume nhi chuna us room me jaane ke liye

Wo Moni hai na

Is week wo us room me jaayengi

Aur usse wo sb cheeze milengi

Hume kb wo sb milenga

Jb hume bhi achi dresses

Bhut se jewellery

Milengi

.

Kajal abhi hum 18 tk nhi huye hai

Jb ho jaayenge

Tb hume bhi kaka

Wo sb denge

.

Kaka : shi kaha meri geet rani ne

Geet : kaka

Parsad

Kaka : khush rh

Ab jaake tum dono apna kaam kro

Khana banayo raat ke liye sbka

Geet : ji

**********

Hume three room chaiye

.

Tum teeno yaha ke toh nhi lagte nojawan

.

Ji nhi

Hum yaha bs gumne ke liye aaye the

Aur raat ho gyi toh

.

Are achi baat hai

Humara ghav hai bhi bhut pyaar

.

Ji wo toh hai

.

Waise aapne is resort ko acha maintain kiya huya hai

.

Beta ye rhi tumhari chabiya kamre ki

Kuch aur chaiye toh bta dena

.

Dinner

.

Kyun nhi

Abhi bejwata hu kamre me

.

Thanks

**********

Three girls enter in different room taking food tray...

She knocked on door and after getting permission, she entered...

Sir your dinner

.

He turn and both shocked to see each other...

Tum yaha

.

Aap yaha kya kr rhe hai

.

Tumse milne aaya tha

Ye kehna galat honga

Kyunki mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha

Tum yaha mil jaayongi

He takes steps towards her, she take step back, before she run from door, he pinned her to nearest wall...

Daro mat

Bs ek baar meri baat sunlo

.

Mein waisa nhi hu jaisa tum mere bare me soch rhi hu

.

Jis tarah se aapne hume pakda abhi

Usse hum kya soche fir

.

He take step back and said sorry

Dekho mein sch mein tumhe pasand krta hu

.

Kitna jaante hai aap hume

Jo pasand krne lage

Ye sb lines apne sehr me jaake kehna

Hum nhi maanane wale

.

Ye toh bta jaayo

Mein kaise yakeen dilayu tumhe

.

Wo toh dil dilata hai

She runs out from room...

********

Around 12, maan come out from room, he not able to sleep, his heart is restless, her face coming again and again in front of him...

Maine toh usse uska naam bhi nhi pucha

Kaise pata karu uska naam

.

He walking in corridor... And come out in garden... One room little far from main resort, caught his attention, he feel some movements here... but due to darkness he not able to see anyone...

His step stopped when someone pressed his shoulder...

Aap yaha

.

Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

Wo mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi

Toh bs ase gum rha tha

.

Beta

Ye ghav hai

Yaha raat ko bahar gumna khatre se khali nhi hota

.

Aap bhi toh

.

Hum toh issi mitti ke hai

.

Ab jaake so jaayo

Maan nodded and left inside...

***********

Next day, another girl come with coffee, he not like totally...

Suno

.

Ji sir

.

Wo jo kal raat ko dinner dene aay thi

.

Kaun sir

.

Mujhe bolne toh do phle

.

She nodded

.

Uska naam kya hai

.

Sir mujhe nhi pata kaun aaya tha

.

Nhi pata toh pata kro

Aur mujhe batao

Wo kaun thi

.

Dekhiye

Mein asa kuch nhi krne wali hu

Smjhe aap

Mein kaka se aapki shiqayat kr dungi

Aap aur aapke dost abhi yaha se bahar ho jaayenge

.

Sorry

Wo mein usse pasand krta hu

Par wo yakin hi nhi kr rhi

.

Pasand krte hai

Aur naam tak nhi jaante

.

Usse kal hi toh mila mein

.

Tum ab sb smjh hi gyi ho

Thodi si madad krdo meri

.

Maaf krna sir

She left saying this

********

Kajal : geet tune mujhse chupaya

Geet : kya

Kajal : wo ladka tujhe pasand krta hai

Geet : ye baat usne tujhe bhi kh di

Ab mein usse nhi chodungi

.

She enter in his room without knock and shouted tum hote kaun ho

Maan : tum subh se kaha thi

Mein kbse intzaar kr rha hu tumhara

Geet : aapko smjh nhi aata ek baari me

Kyun mere piche pade ho

Maan : I like you

Geet : but am not interested

Maan : give one chance

Tum jo kahongi

Wo mein karunga

**********

Vyom : maan are you gone mad

Shiv : maan hum yaha se jaa rhe hai

Just stop dammit

Maan : shiv, vyom

You both can go

First time I like someone

And I want she believe me

Vyom : doing cleaning work

She gone mad

I have to make her understand

Maan held his hand and said no vyom

I can do myself

Shiv : par maan

In sbse kya wo maan lengi

You are nice person

Nhi yaar

Try to understand

It's just infatuation

It's passed with time

.

Yhi toh hum aapke dost ko smjhana chahte hai

Ye bs ek khichav hai

Aur kuch nhi

Aap koi hume pasand vasand nhi krte hai

.

Aap sb ye rehne dijiye

Ye kaam aapka nhi hai

Aap jaa sakte hai

Maan : mein khi nhi jaa rha hu

.

Tumne vadaa kiya hai mujhse

Ydi maine pura resort clean kr diya

Toh tum mujhe apna naam batayongi

Aur mere sath bahar gumne jaayongi

Geet :kyun bina baat ki zid laga rkhi hai

Maan : tumhare liye khichav honga

Par mere liye usse badkar hai

Saying this, he again starts the work...

His friend feeling bad for him, want to help him but he denied and pushed both out from resort... vyom & shiv don't want to go but know own friend to very well, if he take decision both can't change...

And another side geet knows cleaning full resort alone is not easy task, here 5-10 girls clear full resort only on week basis... guests also come here less... by chance anyone come..

But after that kaka support the girls and taking caring all like own kid... From village many girls come here for working... kaka provide the food and clothes... and any small girl want to take education, he sponsor too up to only 8 th class...

She lost the parents when she is 10 years old , her chacha-chachi hit her, one day her uncle pushed her out from home... that moment kaka help her... give her shelter, food, education... in return of this favor, she help kaka in farming and resort work too...

With time, kaka starts helping many girls... Some girls married in small age and groom family just want heir as soon as possible... small age, no idea what family wants, kaka helped kajal and many girls like that... and give a better life...

He is very kind person, this is not only one village but nearest many villagers knows him and give respect to him...

.

Geet look towards maan, who trying best...she come near him and held his hand and said mera naam geet hai

Maan : par abhi

Geet : koi jaroorat nhi

Chalo mere sath

Maan : abhi

Geet : one hour

Maan : thanks

**********

Geet : toh aap delhi se hai

Maan nodded

Maan : am studying in college

Geet : hmm

Maan : yaha sb kitna acha hai

Here so many peacocks

Geet : Morachi Chincholi is not just about Morachis, but also chincholis! There were lot of tamarind trees around ...

Dhyan nhi diya aapne

Maan : nhi

Geet picked up few seeds and placed in his palm...

Ghar le jaana

Yaha ki yaadein smjhkar

Maan : mein tumhe apne sath leke jaana chahta hu

Geet : aap mere bare mein kuch nhi jaante

Na mein

Maan : I can tell you each thing about me

Geet : jaise aapne apne college ka naam bataya

Aur ye ki aap delhi se hai

.

Maan smjhiye

Hum dono bhut alag hai

Aap kuch din me bhool jaayenge

Aap kissi geet se mile bhi the

Maan : tum kyun nhi smjhti

Geet : kyunki smjhna aap ko hai

Maan : geet

Geet : bs maan

**********

Not only maan, geet also have some feeling for him, when she come near him in temple, she feel his eyes catching her each expression, when she get to know he is blind , she feel bad, his eyes not seeing her... But when he tells truth he is not blind, she feel happiness and his confession, he seeing her only and like her... She feel special.. But she knows the limit... she is uneducated girl, like his friend gets shock with her few words only... She learned in school after that sometime she use resort computer for studying... she is simple girl of village, and he is modern boy from city...

She can't lose own existence in dream world...she can't

***********

Kaka called kajal in cabin and give new dress to her and said aaj raat ko 12 bje tumhe us room me jaane ka mauka milenga

Ready rehna

Kajal smiled and run to share with geet... here maan following geet...

Geet ek baar

Kajal : Mr.

Apna samaan pack kro

Aur jaayo yaha se

Aur geet tu chal

Aaj meri baari hai

Waha jaane ki

Maan : kaha jaane ki

Kajal : tum gye nhi abhi tak

Geet : maan hum baad me baat krte hai

Please go

He nodded and left both

**********

Kajal is so excited to go in that room, geet smiled to see excited friend, kaka come and take kajal with her, geet following both...

Kaka : geet tum abhi waha nhi jaa sakti ho

Geet : kaka

Waha asa kya hota hai

Mujhe bhi dekhna hai

Kaka : kuch din aur

Fir tumhe bhi wo mauka milenga

Geet : kaka aap kbhi kuch nhi batate

Kbhi toh batao na

Waha kya hota hai

Bs humesha yhi khte ho

Guru ji aashirwaad dete hai

Kaka : geet jaake so jaayo

Geet : ji

.

Geet have no habit to sleep without kajal, she come to back garden area, here already maan sitting, she don't want one more argument...but before that he take her name...

Jaanta hu tumhe yakin nhi mujhpe

Ek baar ajma ke toh dekho mujhe

.

He stand from bench and said tum baitho mein chalta hu

Geet : hum baith sakte hai

She come and sit beside him, make him smile...

*********

Next morning when kajal not come back, geet go to meet kaka

Kaka

Kaka : ha geet

Geet : kaka wo kajal abhi tak nhi aayi

Us room se

Mein jaake dekhu kya

Kaka : geet tum jaante ho na

Guruji kripya jispe ho jaaye

Wo wapas nhi aata hai

Uski zindai guruji badal dete hai

Kajal kismat wali hai

Guruji ne usse chuna aur aange bej diya

Geet : bej diya

Wo ase kaise bina mujhse mile jaa sakti hai

Kaka : geet jaake apna kaam kro

Do din ke baad tumhe jaana hai

*********

Around lunch time, maan get chance to talk with her...

Kya huya

Sad kyun ho

Geet : wo kajal mujhe chodke chali gyi

Maan : kaha

Geet : wo guruji usse le gye

Wo ab waha maje karengi

Usse na waha bhut se new dresses milenge

Aur necklace

Uski life to set ho gyi

Par apni dost ko wo kaise bhool sakti hai

Maan : geet kaun guruji

Geet : tum nhi jaante

Kaka ke guruji hai

Jb humari ghav ki ladki 18 saal ki ho jaati hai

Toh guruji usse vishesh aahsirwaad dete hai

Aahsirwaad me wo kapde, gehne dete hai

Sirf is ghav ki nyi

Balki dusre ghav se bhi ladkiya aati hai

Unke maa-papa leke aate hai

Jinhe guruji chun lete hai

Unki life set ho jaati hai

Uski family ko bhut paise milte hai

Maan : ye guruji baithte kaha hai

Zara hum bhi mil le

Geet : maan wo room hai na

Waha kaka unhe bulate hai

Wo unki puja ka place hai

Waha koi bhi nhi jaa sakta

Sivay kaka ke

Kaka baramchari hai na

Maan : fir ladkiya kaise jaati hai waha

Geet : maan bs aashirwaad ke liye

Jaati hai

Maan : kajal kaha gyi

Geet : guruji ne usse koi kaam de diya honga apne aahram me

Maan : aashram kaha hai

Geet : mujhe kaise pata

Ek toh I missing her

And now you

She angrily left

.

Maan (kuch toh gadbad hai yaha)

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Part 2

Around 1 A.M, he come out from room ,and check the place, seeing all are sleeping , he take deep breath and come out from resort, now his main target is that room, which is little far from main resort and in mid parking also given plus long garden... He ready to take step , but feel someone hold his hand...he turned and seeing her, he take relax breath...

Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

Maan : I also can ask same question

Geet : maan bolo na

Maan : geet ye guruji wagarh kuch nhi hote hai

Mujhe us room me kuch gadbad lagti hai

I have to check

Geet : no maan

Kaka ko bilkul nhi pasand

One time rupa trying to cross the line of garden area, kaka ne usse bhut data, aur yaha se nikal diya... wo guruji ko bhut maante hai

Unhone hum sbke liye bhut kiya hai

Jitna kamate hai

Hum sb pe kharch kr dete hai

Maan : geet mujhe jaana hai

Tumhe nhi

Geet : maan jaroor koi karan honga

Isliye kaka jaane nhi dete

Please smjho

Maan : geet tumhe smjhna hai

We are leaving in 21st century and you believing on false believes

Please grow up

Geet : jaanti hu

Mein tumhari kabil nhi

Isliye khti hu

Chale jaayo yaha se

Maan : geet please

Asa mt kaho

Do din tumhare sath ne ek ehsaas ko janam diya hai is dil me

Geet : maan ek din ki baat hai

Kal mein waha jaa sakti hu

Kal mein 18 ko ho jaayungi

Fir mein aapko aake sb bata dungi

Maan : ydi tum kajal ki tarah nhi aayi toh

Her heart misses the beat, thinking about this...

Maan : please

Mere liye

Humare liye

Mujhe jaane do

Wo jagah mujhe thik nhi lagti

.

Both hear some footsteps, maan twirl her and take to behind another wall...

Aaj raat ko hi us ladki ko yaha se le jaayo

Ji hajoor

.

Kaka hai ye toh

Maan placed hand on her lips and denied to speak...

Kal geet ki baari hai

Sb ready rakhna

Uske aange piche koi nhi hai

Isliye boss se kehna

Jitni raatein chahe wo uske sath bita sakte hai

Maal acha hai

Aur boss ko uski pic bhi bhut pasand aayi hai

Daam ache milenge

.

.

Hazoor hume mt bulna

.

Bula hota toh tujhe aaj bulaya nhi hota

Jaa jaake ash kr kajal ke sath

Aur wo teri huyi ab

Jb dil bir jaaye

Kya krna hai uske sath tu ache se jaanta hai

.

Ji hazoor

Both men left in different directions, her tears wetted his hand...

Maan : sshh

Hume yaha se nikalna honga abhi

Geet : kajal

Maan give helpless look to her...

Geet : mujhe meri kajal chaiye maan

Wo usse aaj raat ko le jaayenga

Mujhe usse bachana hai

She tries to run, but maan caged her in arms and take inside to nearest room...

Sshhh

Chup

If someone get to know

We knows what going on here

Bhut bdi musibat me fs jaayenge

Geet : wo meri dost hai

Meri sb kuch

Maan : aur tum meri sb kuch ho geet

Please smjho

Tears fall down from both eyes; she cupped his face and said maan mujhe usse bachana hai

Aap sath ho ya na ho

Mujhe ye krna hai

Maan : nhi geet

Geet : before going here

I just want to say something

I like you too

Her lips touched his lips

Tere pyar main mar jawa

Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa

Oh tere pyar main mar jawa

Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa

Maan : tum akeli nhi jaayongi

Dono jaayenge

Geet : nhi maan

Mein aapko khatre mein nhi daal sakti

Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana

Maan : jaise mein tumhe khatre mein daal sakta hu

He held her hand and takes her out ...

Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana

Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

*********

Tears fall down from his eyes, remembering those days with geet, one hand wipes his tears...he turned and seen her...

Maan I also missing my friend Geet so much

Par kb tak tum ase khud ko kasoorvar maante rahonge

Kb tak uski yaado ko yu kaske thame rahonge

Maan : kajal I love her

And I can't forget her

Saying this he left the room...

Kajal picked geet photo frame and hide her in arms...

You can't go like that geet

Mujhe marna chaiye tha

Tumhe nhi

When maan loves you so much

How can you go

Kyun tum hume chodke chali gyi

Why you died

.

.

Kajal beta

Kajal hurriedly wipes the tears and said hanji

Mujhse aansu chupane se kya honga

Mujhe pata hai

aaj geet ki barsi hai

tum dono usse bhut miss krte ho

mein kbhi usse milli toh nhi

par itna jarur jaanti hu

tum dono ki jaan thi wo

.

Aur dekho har baar ki tarah maan bina pooja mein baithe chla gya

Tum toh baithongi na pooja mein

Geet ke liye

.

Ji mummy

*********

Kajal fearing to enter in room, but kaka hold her hand and both entered inside, full room is empty...

Kaka yaha toh koi nhi hai

Kaka : darya rakho

He pressed one button from behind the photo, in mid of room, floor parted and some stairs showing inside...

Kaka : chale

Kajal nodded...

When she reached down, here one man sitting on sofa and one bed also placed in mid...

Kaka : boss here she is

Boss come near her , and lift her chin and said beautiful

Acha hai

Is baar toh humesha ke liye hai na

Kaka : ji

Iske aange piche koi nhi hai

.

Boss : us ladki ka kya huya

Jiski pic tumne beji thi

Kaka : do din ke baad boss

18 saal ki ho jaayengi

Fir aaram se nath utarna uski

Boss hand slipped around his waist...

Kajal : kaka

Hume kuch nhi chaiye

Hume jaana hai yaha se

Boss : now you can go

Kajal tried to reach near kaka... but he left... next only her screamed rings in room...

*********

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Part 3

Another side , in somewhere, in dream city of youngsters, one girl selling the things door by door in Chawl, her fairy skin darken in hightemperature of Mumbai... for survival she have to do this work... her small sister also needs her support...

*******

Late night Maan come after spending good time with children in Anathashram...now his mood is better...

But memories still lingering and disturbing him...

Maan & geet take slow steps hiding own self in bushes, trees, and at last reached to room... room is lock... geet give him hair pin, after few tries he able to unlock the door...

When both come inside, whole room is empty... except one wall, which fills with many pics of guruji...

Geet : ye sb kya hai maan

Maan : geet kajal yaha nhi hai

Geet : wo yhi hai

Abhi humne suna na

Maan : sshhh

Kuch awaaze aa rhi hai

He put ear on wall try to hear but at end he put ear on floor..

Yaha se

It's mean niche basement hai

Rasta yhi khi se honga

.

Both check each corner, floor, but not able to get from where both get entrance...

Geet : maan pics ke piche

Nhi dekha humne

Maan : yes

At end both get the button and from mid door slides... both can see the stairs...

Maan : geet call police now

Aur Tum yhi ruko

Geet : mein

Maan : nice kitne log hai

We not known

So please call police now

She nodded...maan give own phone to her and said isme shiv, vyom ka bi number hai unhe message drop kr dena

She nodded again...

**********

He also fearing to go down, what you can expect from 21 years old boy, but for geet, he have to take this risk, before going he take heavy photo frame in hand, as weapon...

.

Chodo mujhe

.

He reached to down and look all around, it's small room, one bed, one sofa... one man laying on bed and kissing someone forcibly, girl trying to move, maan take fast steps and hit on head hardly, he screamed in pain, glass break in pieces, and some pierced his skin...maan pushed her another side, but seeing her naked girl with so much bruises, he closes the eyes next moment, he just take out shirt and throw on her

Wear this

.

Man trying to stand, but maan again hit him with frame, he is double from him in body... he look around and pick vase which placing nearest sofa of table, hit him again on head... man fall down on floor losing the consciousness...

.

Kajal try to stand , but falling badly, only pain left in her body... he give her hand and said geet upar hai

Come with me

.

When she not moved, he calls geet name loudly...

Ha

Come down

Geet come down, seeing best friend condition, she break in tears, maan held her close and said we can't waste the time here, we have to run, just help her...

Ye admi kbhi bhi hosh me aa sakta hai

Geet nodded and run to help kajal...

*********

That day we save her geet, but I lost you ...tears slipped from his eyes...he just have some pics, which he take without her permission... This is only remembrance he holding to till from many years...

Geet helped kajal in wearing the cloth, both friends crying in pain...

Maan : geet little fast

Koi bhi aa sakta hai

Geet : hmm

Maan : tumne call kiya na police ko

Geet : ha

Mein unhe saja jaroor dilayungi

Maan : hum ye sb karenge

Par uske liye hume bachke yaha se jaana honga

.

Yaha jaroor koi rasta honga

.

Kajal points towards at one direction, maan run to check, some stairs going somewhere... now all have no another option, trio enter in this...

After stairs, single path come and trio reached little far from cottage...

Maan : ye kaunsi jagah hai

Maan held kajal tightly saving her from falling...

Kajal kuch der aur

Hume yaha nhi ruk sakte hai

Hume highway dundna honga

Geet you ok

She nodded...

********

Night turn into morning but trio just not able to come out from this jungle

(note : no idea , in that area have any jungle or not, just imagination)

.

He feel some cars passed out from nearest... he makes it both behind some bushes and left to check...here he seen one big centre, he hide behind tree when once again one car passed, he look once and notice, some girls hitting the car glass... like crying for help... he felt bad...he feared for geet safety... he take step back and feel someone behind own...he take relax breath to see shiv & vyom here...

Maan : tum yaha kaise

Shiv : tera hi toh message aaya tha

.

.

We both reached and seen police already asking many questions from owner... and at end we get to know you and geet are not here...police check each corner of resort and at end we reached in one room... and police arrest that wounded man ... we both tired best and get the gate and reached here

Maan : geet and kajal

Chalo

.

He come back to same place but not gets both ...

Maan : geet

He screamed to taking her name...

.

His friend also checks all around at end get kajal...

Maan kajal hai yaha

.

Maan patted her cheek and asked geet kaha hai

Kajal : wo usse le gye

Maan : kaha kajal

Kajal please open the eyes

Kajal : wo ____ Rajmachi (Udhewadi)

She fall in his arms...

Maan : tum dono isse hospital leke jaayo

Dhyan rhe

Ye pura bayan de

Us kaka ke khilaf

Mein geet ko dundta hu

Shiv : maan police apna kaam karengi

Tu kaise

He not listen anything and left to search her...

*********

Kajal : aap so jaaiye mummy ji

Maan ki itni chinta karengi

Toh aapki tabiyat kharab ho jaani hai

Maan MOM : kaise chinta na karu mein iski

Mujhe laga tha bhool jaayenga

Aange bad jaayenga

Par iski zindagi whi simat ke rh gyi hai

Kajal (sb meri wajh se huya, usne toh mujhe zindagi dedi us din )

Kajal bs kuch der aur

Maan aate honge

Someone pull her hair harshly make her stand...

Tu kamini yaha chupi hai

Aur ye

Kaka please hume chod dijiye

.

Hard slap come on her face

Tujhe kya laga

Police ko bula lengi

Aur wo mujhe pakad lenge

Ek ganta nhi laga mujhe bahar aane me

Aur ab mein dekhta hu tujhe aur isse kaun bachata hai

Wo ladka kaha hai

Geet : hum akele hi hai

Kaka pressed her cheek hard and said tu usse bachana chahti hai na

Dekhta hu kb tak bachta hai wo

.

Kaka throw her in goons arms , isse Rajmachi (Udhewadi) pucha do

Aur iska toh mein

Geet : kaka usse chod do

She bite on goon hand and hold kaka feet

Please kaka

Usse chod do

Kaka : chod dunga

Par

Geet stand and asked par kya kaka

Kaka : tu cheez hai toh bdi mast

He touch her upper private part, she take step back and said kajal khadi ho

She helped kajal and said kajal tujhe meri kasam bhag yaha se

She pick dust and throw in goons eyes, before she run, kaka hold her by waist and at end when he hear someone coming here... He left with goons taking her with own...

**********

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Part 4

Around after 4 to 5 hours, he reached Rajmachi (Udhewadi), Rajmachi (Udhewadi) is a small village in the rugged mountains of Sahyadri in India. There are two forts which were built by Shivaji Emperor during the 17th century. It is a famous spot for trekking. It is about 15 km trekking distance from Lonavla. Rajmachi can be reached by 2 ways, the tough route from Kondivade village near Karjat and the other easy but long way route from Lonavala. In rainy season this place is filled with giant waterfalls and greenery.

Rajmachi town is home to another important village of Udhewadi. This village is situated at an altitude of 700 m above the sea level and at the base of the twin peaks namely Shreevardhan and Manoranjan. This village is also an ideal place for the taste of authentic Maharashtrian cuisines.

He not gets from where he starts of searching her ... He called at home once in mid, feeling uneasy likes something going happen bad ...

He buys some food items and one shirt from local market and left to search her...

He tried to ask in mid some people... he feel uneasy like many eyes only staring her...he knows coming here alone is not going easy for him... he left message to shiv and vyom with location ...and switched off the phone for saving the battery...

*********

Next day, as usual all are sitting together for breakfast...

Maan : maa mujhe Mumbai jaana honga

Mom : maan waha nhi

Maan : it's for business

Am going mom

Mom : maan par

Maan : Mom mein jaanta hu aapko meri fikr hai

Par kaam jaruri hai

And am totally fine

At end she nodded and he take aashirwaad from both Mom & daadi , then left to office...

Hearing his plan, his dad also gets angry on him, but he wants some break, he want to go once again at same place where he seen her last time... he knows it's going painful for him...

But he wants to do this...

***********

Another side in somewhere in Mumbai, Naina struggling to fulfill daily needs, from this selling things , she get so less... no one ready to buy at first place...after so much struggling she able to sell 5-6 quantity only...

She cried hugging vanshi...

In same place, little far from her place, one girl also live like her... some time she come and give foods both...Naina and kanu become friend with time...

Kanu try to make her understand many times, in this she not going survive, she also can join as bar dancer like her... today seeingVANSHI suffering, she agreed this time...

********

Maan flight land in Mumbai Airport, from here, his friend shiv pick up and both left to his house...

********

Shiv : common Maan

Has le yaar

Sharanya ko dekh

Kaise has rhi hai

He pass small smile to him and said mujhe thoda rest kr lena chaiye

He left saying this...

Shiv : dekha tumne

He become robatic after going geet

Why he not forget her

Sharanya : kyun na hum usse bar le chale

Thoda location change honga

Sayad

Shiv : koi fayda nhi

Sharanya : common shiv

We can't stop try

Shiv nodded

*******

Kanu : sir ye Naina hai

Ye yaha kaam krna chahti hai

.

Manager looks naina up & down and takes a round around her...

Manager : smjha diyo isse sb

Kanu nodded and drag naina to green room...

********

Kanu select one dress and give to her, seeing sort dress, naina take step back

Kanu : naina

Vanshi ke liye

Dekh ache khase paise mil jaayenge

Krna kya hai

Bs dance

Jaise tune bahar abhi aur ladkiyo ko dekha krte huye

Naina : wo kaise un ladkiyo ko chu rhe the

Kanu : naina

Kuch pane ke liye kuch khona pdta hai

Jeena hai toh krna honga

Jaise mein krti hu

Bhool jaa koi tujhe chu rha hai

Bs ye dhyan rakh

Raat khatam hone pe

5000 tere hath me honge

5000 naina

She nodded hugging kanu...

*******

Shiv : maan hum jaa rhe hai bs

Maan : shiv

Shiv : bs sb kuch whi thi kya

Kitne din rha hai tu uske sath

Maan : ye zindagi usne mujhe di hai

Usne meri jaan bachayi hai

Shiv : yaar mein jaanta hu

Par ab tu meri sun

Hum jaa rhe hai bs

*********

Maan entered in bar with friends, dim light, loud music disturb him more... but for friends he take step inside...

He not like when girls fall so low and ready to do something like that, here girls falling on man , and man also not less than , touching the girls openly... he give glares to shiv and sharanya...

Shiv : common Maan

Ye unki khud ki chuni huyi zindagi hai

Maan : ek ye ladkiya hai

Jinhe bs paisa chaiye

Ek geet thi

Jisne ye sb rokne ke liye

Jaan dedi

He going left... But while turning something catch his attention...

Mujhe tumse mohabbat hai

Deewangi ki hadd tak

Deewana mujhe banao na

Deewangi ki hadd tak

Ae sanam mujhse poocho

Kitni chhahat hui hai

One girl in sort dress, which covers her only assets and all another parts showing from net, dancing in mid ...his step move forward towards her...

Oh ye..Oh ye..
[Ye khel nahi hai
Dil kisi se lagana
Tum dil ko laga ke
Mujhe bhool na jaana]

She falling in man arms one to another one... he come in mid and held her hand pull closer... her sweet hand touch his cheek...

Ae sanam mujhse poocho

Kitni ulfat hui hai

Ae sanam mujhse poocho

Kitni ulfat hui hai

He entangles fingers with her and kissed on her knuckles... he going take her name, feel some another man hold her from back and she happily take step back and land in another man arms...

Mujhe tumse mohabbat hai

Deewangi ki hadd tak

Deewana mujhe banao na

Deewangi ki hadd tak

He feel , he dreaming her once again...he take step back without noticing back stair, he again feel soft hand around own, which save him from falling...

You ok sir

He touched her cheek and whispers GEET

.

Some girl held her hand and drags her in front of him...

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It's not done
it's not complete poor me...poor us
we not sure when this will complete
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
Thanks for posting

will try and read over the weekend
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#8
thanks for posting again
waiting for next parts
love reading again
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thanks for the pm!

read and anniversary thread!

waiting for next parts
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#10
hope to read it
because it needs to end
poor maaneet

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