New MG FF-Love..Hate...Revenge..???Remove Note on pg21

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mehrunnesa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

i think geet will be his prey

he may be mistaken her father as enemy

let's see what happen to maaneet here

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

thanks for the pm!

Chap 2

amazing update! well written!

Maan will punish the person who killed his parents! eager to know who killed them?

Liked how Maan knew that Annie wanted to go the pub!

Maan also wants to join them! dadi, Dev and Annie surprised!

update soon

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sanum23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Maan in revenge mood he want to destroy whom snatched his parents

Annie get excited when Maan gave hr permission to go pub and he also b there to celebrate hr b'day

Dadi and Dev pulling his leg

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Congratulations on your story

title sounds so Interesting

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Prologue is Captivating

looking forward to reading this story

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Interesting Character Sketch

Maan and Sam are dating while she and Geet are cousins and she hates Geet

Naintara and Geet are sisters and she loves Geet a lot she is also in love with Dev

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Part 1

Superb and Emotional Start

Maan lives for his family now his Daadi and his siblings but he does not believe in emotions

anymore as he thinks it makes a person weak

he has changed after the death of his parents with their death his happiness to went

he only believes in his business and to be the best so his family never has to beg for anything

its sad that Annie's birthday is on the day her parents died

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Part 2

Fabulous Chapter

Maan wants revenge from the person that took the lives of his parents

he speaks to their portrait telling his dad that he has fulfilled all his dreams

but now its time to fulfill his very own dream and that is to destroy the man

take what is most precious to him

Maan has allowed Annie to go to the pub and he also ask her if he can come along surprising the family

for some reason I think the person that Maan is after must be Mohinder Handa and probably he will take revenge by harming Geet

looking forward to the next chapter

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kabslocks

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Nice updates. Maan wants revenge for his parents death and want to destroy the person who is responsible for his parents death. Annie wants to go to pub on her birthday. Dev and dadi are not allowing her. She is afraid to ask from Maan. But Maan allowed her even wants to go with her. Whole family is happy to see this change in Maan.