ManEet Os - Just a Crush

Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

Removed

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Edited by Ms.Lizzie - 6 years ago

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice concept.

Loved the story.

Can u continue the same

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

Wow lucky me ...i was badly waiting to read an os from you
thnx for it

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

The way Maan was desvribed and the way he didnt embrass Geet looked so cute. Actually it didnt need the ending. Lovely os.

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 7 years ago

Sweet one.

Now now, I am not one of those giving one word comments

But then that's what came to my mind.

And just that.

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sgmiss2003

@sgmiss2003

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

Enjoyed reading the story. You are amazing writer. Love all your stories.

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i rok

@i rok

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

nice...
interesting story...
geets crush on maan her senior..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

congrats on the OS!

lovely OS! liked how Maan respected her feelings...

hmm they meet again...and going for coffee!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

Fantastic OS

Yeah sometimes friends can just make things much more difficult

but it was actually great that Maan didn't want Geet to confess her crush

I suppose most times in colleges crushes are the norm but Maan didn't want

her to feel bad after letting him know because probably nothing would have came from it

the extended version

well that would also be kind of groovy meeting your crush and after two days going for coffee

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metromasti

@metromasti

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

awesome os . maan & geet studied in same college but their stream was different . geet had crush on maan & cos of friends (their truth and dare) she met maan . looks like maan knew that so respectfully he told her not to dream anything . after some years maaneet met at office & this maan invited her for a coffee . it seems maan's heart felt something... 😉