~pari~ part 64 page 133 july 25th

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#841

So beautifully written as always...

Glad to read Geet's POV...

It was such a relief to know that it was all consensual... She was as much affected as Maan...

I guess majority of us were worried... That how will she react the next morning... But reading her feelings and the emotions that she felt the entire time... We actually took a sigh of relief...

After so long it was one of those updates where there was nothing negative or sad...

Yes we can feel that geet is fighting a battle within but being with Maan in all senses even that restlessness have finally settled...

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#842

Geet didnt regret their togetherness

Thats a big relief for us

But she is still fighting inside

Y she was restless

N y she is in peace when he is at peace

She has surrendered herself fighting against herself

N knew the next morning will change everything

Awesome part

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#843

Wow... wonderful ...loved the way you have written geet feeling... awesome... now her feeling for Maan changed... waiting for more... waiting for the best update...

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#844

She has began to accept him

That is good

Now what wil tomorrow bring?

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@Endgame

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#845

beautiful update
she accepting her dilemma accepting her feelings

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#846

geet maan ko phirse hurt maat karna...pata nehi subah kaisi hogi...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#847

waiting eagerly for the update ...

Today is Friday hope to get a new update today 😃

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#848

Beautiful is too small a word...This update was so emotional and blissful. It was like a homecoming for both of them...Something which I have been yearning for...Finally my wish is granted...Geet's heart, soul and subconscious is well aware of Maan...its only her mind that does not recognize him for now. But the way she feels seeing him, sensing him, feeling his pain & tears...the way she feels in his arms...Bliss...I love the way you beautifully capture the depth of their feelings, the beauty and divinity of their love...This update focused on Geet internalizing all that she feels...all the emotions she feels seeing and being with Maan. And I believe its crucial to set the tone of their relationship from hereon. It is going to be an amazing journey of discovery for Geet...of herself...of Maan...and of her love for Maan...Its going to be one truly amazing journey of rediscovering each other and their love...Amazing writing dearie. Hats off my dear. I truly love it:):):)