MEHBOOBA - NEW MG FF UPDATED THREAD TWO LINK ON PAGE NO.1 @ 5/10/18

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mishty13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: jssood
poor geet in pain
stil rajmata and maan try to dominate her

Yes it is..though still names are not reveal 😉

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mishty13

@mishty13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: jasika08
Congrats for new story
Nice update
Waiting for next update

Thank you di 😃

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mishty13

@mishty13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
Interesting start lovely update

Thank you di 😃

I am glad you like it😛

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mishty13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: ambeern
Nice

Thank you 😃

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Mg13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Confused part...
Rajmata seems dislike rani...
Rani was being tired of orders
Raja us concerns for rani...
Will b waiting

Yeah I made it confused deliberately 😆

Things will be clear in next update 😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: aparna3011
nice update

Thank you di 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE
SUPERB UPDATE
GEET IS NOT HAPPY IN MARRIGE

Thanks di 😛

Yeah let's see..what is it..😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fabulous Start

So Geet is the Queen and it seems that she is very unhappy in her marriage
and living in the palace
Rajamata seems very stern and almost it seems like she dislikes the queen but why
the queen refers to herself as the King's mehbooba so does this mean he also has other women
though there was possessiveness in his speech , he was also concerned for the queen
but it seems like he is always leaving her alone
the queen feels like she is just a doll in every ones hands and they dictate her lifestyle whether she
likes it or not
already the first chapter holds some mystery and its very interesting

Thanks bro 😃

I am so glad you like it..

Yeah i didnt having this intention to make it mysterious but it's happened without my notice or efforts..😆

Things will be clear in next 2 chapters atleast. .😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: AYAZU12
fabulous and intriguing part dear...
everything seems confusing here as no names were mentioned was the rani geet and raja maan this is really making me curious now and just cant wait for the story to unfold...continue soon dear...

Thank you di 😃

I am happy you like it..

Yeah things will be clear in next 2 chapters. .names also😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 1

intriguing update! well written!

Feeling for Geet! she is suffering so much! she can live her life on her own terms!

is she married 2 Maan?

update soon