MEHBOOBA - NEW MG FF UPDATED THREAD TWO LINK ON PAGE NO.1 @ 5/10/18 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow.interesting story.waiting for next.
Edited by priyarthiroy75 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is ur 4th one which is going hand in hand wd all different platform n different thems good going
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Posted: 7 years ago
his wife still his mehbobba
Geet got everything but no happiness because she doesn't want all these
all things only making her sad and frustrated
she wants love but king not giving her this
interesting one
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Posted: 7 years ago
like rajmata n her talking
both are hot headed not give up
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Poor Geet felling all difficulties
Still all are trying to dominate her
And ask her to become puppet in the name of queen
Prince care for her
But his attitude is more than his care
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thank you di 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice start dear

Liked it!!
Geet was leading her life on others command and was irked by the way she is living her life. She didn't like being dictated and wanted freedom to live her life the way she wanted but alas had to obey others being queen of the kingdom. What's wrong with king's deportment??
Thanks for the pm!
Looking forward to the next update
:))


Thank you di 😃
Let's see about king in next one..😉
Will try to post soon next one
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

So this is a King and Queen type story. Interesting and different. Who is the King here? She seems like a neglected queen. I hope there's no twist in the tale and Geet is having an extra marital affair with Maan or something.. bunch of confusions. May be it will get clear with next chapters


Yeah but not much..i will not make it fully something like Queen and king..there will be only maneet. .😉
Yeah let's see in next chappy. .i think it will clear in next 2 chapters..😉
And yeah there is for sure twist in tale here..😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Awesome update madam plzzz at least give cs mujhe kych samaj nahi aaraha hai so geet is the queen who is being forced to live the life that is so fake and artificial that it breaks her every single day she resting as she was tired of long gruesome nighks she had this rani seems to know her weakness geet refused to be treated like a toy geet loves her king bbut he always leaves her hungry for more and desires for him remain unfulfill


Aapki comment se toh dikh hi raha hai that you didn't understand much about part 1 😆
Abhi cs ka time nahi hai di..
Again diya hota toh sab log shock ya surprise kaise honge after reading next 2 chapters..🤣
For that I will.add cs where it will fit ..and thar maybe I think after next 2 chapters or one also. .😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maherkhan

New concept it was superb update
It's like some royal history n like that more interesting...
So at first part we know geet as queen but who is king? Well let me guess geet is nothing without maan so it's defiantly maan sign Khurana but there is some thing wrong why geet not happy?
Update soon dear..,


Thanks di 😃
Its not historic but in recent century only .
You will know more as the story proceed further 😃
Let's see in next update who is king and who is maan..😉
Edited by mishty13 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi

Nice update... When their name will be removed... Are they maan n geet only or only one of them ... Poor rani is cagged in gold prison


Thanks di 😃

In next update there names will be known..😉
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