Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened]

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hottyangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

part 48 (part 2)

that was an superb part. the conversation between geet and pinky is really nice. geet is feeling guilty by making maan wait to move their relation to next step... both are missing each other a lot.

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

part 49

superb part.. maan came back and geet is very happy and shocked to see him.. pinky has to run from there seeing their romance... eagerly waiting for the next. interesting precap...

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

very nice update

love the way geet ask pinky about her all questions in her mind

pinky's answer make geet happy

geet think it dream when she collide with maan n when realised that he is there in real she kiss him shocking him

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Finally maan aa hi gayea nice update loved it

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Nice updates..

Thank you for pm..

Waiting for next update..

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@jssood

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

both parts are awesome

massaging part is just a brilliant idea

hate that sameera chipkoo...

precap is just la la...

thanx for pm

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mitaasen

@mitaasen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

wow beautiful update and loved the precap.

maan nad geet's chat was cute.loved the way they shared their feelings and longings.

geet 's desires are on rise. she s feeling alone among her folk.

the way pinky nd geet talked abt present day relations s so true. geet reminicising all her nd maans moments was beautiful.

ye samera kab samjege . she s going to lose her friend . hope koe bade problem na kade kar de.

waiting for nxt.

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Precap@
Intriguing
Loved it. It has made my interest piqued like anything. I hope you will update soon

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Chapter 48 part 2

So sweet that both are always texting each other and if not are lost in their beautiful memories together

As always loved how cutely both crib and rant to each other so openly

Aww bechari humari mishti Sharma gayi aur text delete kar Diya

I agree @ curtus here

Geet ko poora hak hai maan ko miss karne aur uske touch ke liye tadapne ka

All she needs do is share all her inhibitions with him 😳

Admire geet and Pinky's bond as well

She is sharing her inhibitions with her though indirectly

And at the end can't help herself feeling guilty

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Chapter 49

Part 1

Beautiful GIF's baby

Can't get enough of them ❤️

It's the best gift ever we could get on geet anniversary 😃

Thanks a ton baby 🤗

Geet is so lost while speaking to pinky

Wherever she goes she can't stop herself from thinking about their lovey dovey moments

Indeed geet is lucky to have maan as hubby and so is maan

Well both pinky and geet are correct at their POV

Aww so sweet of maan that he came

How can he stay away from his mishty for long

Geet is so shocked to react any thing 😆

baby kaha maan geet ko surprise dene Aya tha aur khud hi hairaan reh gaya 🤣

Oops pinky wrong timing ...

Let's see how she reacts after realizing what she did 😉

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