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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Amazing updates... Both were missing eachother ... Its so cute n their text conversation shoes the level of theor understanding... But i hate this sameera.. she is really gone mad.. she thinks maan. Loves her how on earth she can imagine them when maan was always sober with her... Idiot.. hope this trip clears her illusion n she let them be happy...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 48 part 2@
Amazing update with Geet's pov. Deep
Fantastic gif baby. Jitna dekhu g nehi bhar rha mera to.
Geet is such a cutie pie. I cam understand as she is still quite young. She is 19 or 20 right? Awe she is craving for her hubby n don't even want 2 tell him about her sexual needs because he will get worried.
In this story from d very beginning what i have noticed is Maaneet has always put each other's need at first priority like a selfless companion
Needless 2 say their relation is deep 2 d core. Nd this inhibitions geet has these r just so simple. Ekbar maan se keh degi to sab dur kar dega woh i am sure.
Aur apne pati ke lie aroused hona ya usko miss karna koi galat baat thodi hai. Pagli hai mishti hamari.
Maan n her msgs r deep funny dynamic so entertaining. They take care of each other so much.
Loved how maan demanded kiss 4m geet n how they can start their cute little banter at any time n turn d atmosphere light.
Y didn't geet send d first msg she typed in? Maan kitna khush hota ye janke ki uski doll b usko utna hi chahti hai
This is the beauty of mp. This ff has everything in a balanced way. Love care share bickering mu relationship dynamics, erotic, passion, romance, selflessness, selfishness, lust, lingering aur yad nhi aaraha but u get my point sab hai maan aur geet me isilie their chemistry sets them on fire.
Coming 2 pinky nd geet. Their bond is so so cute.
Oho geet ko lagta hai she is not a good wife? 😭 sach me jhalli hai geet.
Par acha hai she shared her problem with her bestie nd kept it a secret. Pinky ne apna view dia.
Lekin geet aur jyda guilty feel kar rahi hai. She should not becuz maan loves her extremely nd ye sab maan ko shayad hi matter karta hoga nehi 2 woh clear karta. Par this is a crucial point what u have raised kyu ki dekha jae 2 ye q uthti hai.
Thanks a lot 4 this amazing chapter. Loved each word nd don't even know kitna bar read ki hai
Fantastically written. 👏 hum 2 fan hai apke writing ki ye bat kisi se chupi nhi hai
Ch48 done now ch49
Edited by curtus - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Chapter 49 part 1@
super insightful dejavu update. crisp nd naturally flowing
👏 this is d 3rd one nd i still want more 😆
I know i know tu abhi dant rahi hogi mjhe 😆 par kia karu i just love this story so much nd maaneet uf outta world
What a gif baby 👏 maan k expressions hyeee nd geet ki eyes 😳
D update. Ispe me chalu ho gai to pages khatam ho jaega nd ud se b bada mera comment ho jaega
Lekin yar its too awesome. Our chirpy geet handa has a lot of guilt buried inside her.
Its basically her womanly instinct i feel nd i will not call her wrong bcz the way maan loves her nd treats her like a princess she is bound 2 think that way
He is a man afterall nd actually distancing himself everytime while make out must b difficult 4 him seeing at d level he is attracted 2 geet. He cant keep his hands out of her so it alone indicats how much he is sexually attracted 2 his mishti but but but there is a but he might not feel d same way as geet. I want 2 read maan's pov on this nd want their talk on this.
Pinky was not wrong on her place nd i do agree with pinky but its difficult 2 give opinions based on the little info geet provided 2 pinky.
Geet is quite clever asking her friends opinion nd keeping that as n alias. Bt that means she is thinking about it nd this alone proves her immense love 4 maan so aur kuch need hai hi nhi
Loved pinky's teasing nd the dejavu
Finally our maan is here yepie geet se jyda me khush hu 😆
Awesomely written baby just fantastic the way this dejavu taken place i indeed checked chapter 1
Thanks 4 d update nd pm
Love u too much 4 back 2 back awesome entertaining updates 🤗
Edited by curtus - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Awesome double update loved it geet was sad as maan didn't come but still she hid it well from everyone this sameera witch is blackmailing maan telling she will tell everyone about their so called time in Australia but maan knows his family and his jaan and he is msk he countered back to her saying to tell them he doesn't care loved maaneet cute phone msg both love each other so much and geet just wanted to be in maans arms forgetting everything as maan made her habitual of his kisses and touches pinky and geet conversation was interesting pinky going Gaga over the fact that a guy love is so pure that he stops himself from loving his wife just so she could concentrate on her studies just like old times making feet one side guilty for maan controlling himself for her sake but other side proud that his love is so strong that he stops his desire as for maan geet happiness means more than his desire finally geet is in maan arms and geet forget everything and kisses maan shocking pinky
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on new thread 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing, beautiful ,lovely n mind blowing updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
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read chapter 48 amazing update this sameera is so stupid she will create some problem for maaneet hopefully they will tackle it together. and love maneet chat.their missing each other and finally maan comes.interesting precap so rishta is pakka right
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Awesome update
Even though Geet was between lot of
People and lots of fun she still feel
Lonely without the person whose
Presence completes her existence
Managing with a smile she was just
Making others feel she was present
But her heart lies with her love who
Equally is missing her
Sameera she is going to an extent that
Maan has to regret being friends with her
Even Sameera is not aware of Maan being
So she thinks she might get him but she
Overhead dadima talking to Rano what
Did she hear
I loved geet answer for what is difficult than
Being in love Staying and Maan asking when
His baby had grown up
It's so lovely
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Posted: 7 years ago
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read chapter 49 love geet and pinky bond.finally maan came and feet forget about pinky and romance maan.will be waiting for next chapter update fast plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Chapter 49
Back to back updates
May be talking to friend helps us to know
Were We are in our relation
Pinky saying how much her friend is lucky
To have a husband who understands her
Instead of getting intimated and giving
Her chance to focus on her studies and
Career when she asked Geet about her
And maan because she knows he loved
Her not less than her friend's husband
Geet is so happy'to show the message from
Morning how much he miss her
Running away from pinky and running into
The man she love , kissing him
Hope pinky got her answer witnessing
Them together

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