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Posted: 7 years ago
PRECAP : 1

"Jaan...Koi aa raha hain...Choro naa...Please..." Maan's senses did receive her pleading but isn't this how she always tries to get away from him!!


Hence he didn't give any attention and kept pestering her with his rawness, pressing himself more into her petite fragile frame as rounding his tongue on her nifty swell!!


"Maan...Daadimaa!! Omg!!"



PRECAP : 2

Maan could see the genuine anticipation wavering over Mohindar's hopeful eyes as he spoke,"Beta tumhe koi bhi aitraaz hain toh tum bol saktey ho..."Everyone there waited for his reaction with pin drop silence and nervous smiles floating around!!

"Kiyaahhh...Aitraaz... I mean... Mohi uncle...I mean papa..." Ending the muteness Maan ventured to speak but could stutter only!

However, taking a deep breath he eyed at Savitri Devi who was having a hard time muffling her own laugh, "Main zayada kuch nahin keh sakta iss mamle mein...Siwaye ek cheez ke..." His timid voice gradually turned itself into a confident one, "Saalo pehle...Rano maa ne mujhe kaha tha ke...Geet meri amanaat hain, meri hain woh...
Woh baat uswaqt mujhe samajh mein nahin aaya tha...But now I understand it Maa..." Rano nodded softly with a serene smile as Maan hold her hand, "Shayed pura nahin par thoda...
Aur maine kabhi kisi aur ke bare mein socha bhi nahin kyun ki hamesha se Geet hi meri sabkuch rahi hain...Bachpan se leke aab tak..."
Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Can't wait for the update baby 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much
Love you šŸ¤—
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Posted: 7 years ago
DONE - Avoid errors please!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Can't wait for the update baby 😃


Can't wait for your feedback baby!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update baby ā­ļø
Reaction of pinky and geet was so funny 🤣
Hayye so sweet these 2 besties are and so innocent
Adding to that was our Cutie's reply asking her to look other side as she want to scold her hubby šŸ˜†

Again their sweet banter started which is never ending lol..
Aww can't believe maan blushed again that too in front of pinky and geet which was noticed by geet or else this privilege was given to Dadi only šŸ˜‰

So elders are all set to get maaneet married as soon as possible
Poor dev baby he is lost in his own miseries to notice anything else
This would be such a sweet surprise for maaneet and Earth shattering truth for Sam šŸ˜†

Now that maan is here , I want geet to share all her inhibitions with him
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida


Can't wait for your feedback baby!!

Done with the feedback 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very interesting precaps
Precap 1

So maan is thinking that it might be just another excuse of his wifey to escape
What if she isn't fooling around this time šŸ˜‰

Precap 2

So mohinder has come to maan after their discussion after the dinner
Maan's reply would make both the parents so Happy 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very impactful DP baby
Love it ā¤ļø
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update. Geets innocense is the best gift for maan. She is very naive and her immense love for him is what attracts him to her. All are enjoying and the elders are talking about maaneets marriage. Why is dev thinking like that. Interesting precap

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