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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update here maan was bringing geet to his home while his mom is so colorful she fake her I'll news and call him home in order to shock him by calling girls parents for maan to select but all were shocked to see masn carrying geet so cute they wanted maan to do love marriage maan told them everything about geet and his mom was proud of him and support him fully
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Posted: 7 years ago
His mom planning to intro him to girl but seeing girl in his arm she was stunned but happy to but Maan bursts their babbles by revealing the truth his dadi siblings thought something else
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow really different story can't wait to find why is geet in this state
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Posted: 7 years ago
his mother waa faking
but liked their reaction seeing a girl in his arms
they are very nice
Edited by Drashtilove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely Update
Maan,s mother faked her illness to call Maan back and invited a girl,s family already, love marriage is their family tradition, loved it, the whole family supporting Maan for bringing Geet at home, loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sweet part
They are so nice they don't know anything about geet still let her stay
His family want his love marriage that interesting but yup he is too young
But I like his entry mast wala
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Posted: 7 years ago
between happy that match making didn't work
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 5





It was night around 8 pm

When geet open her eyes . Her head was spinning and she felt pain as soon she moved her hand & leg.
It was dark . Her room was dark totally . With no light coming in her room .

A fear ran down through her spine .
No
She don't want to be in dark again .
She spend years in a dark room .
It make her feel alone . NO

She start sweating even AC .
She want to shout but the voice nvr come out .
Her hands start shivering .
Thinking about her life . She spend 10 years of her life in a single dark room . Like a prisnor . When she introduced to world only with purpose to get killed .

In panickness she move her hand causing glass fell on floor that was placed on side table .
But without even caring shd get up shivering . Her hands turning cold

Is she prisoned again?

As soon she step on floor she fell down immidatly . As her fractured leg won't support her any more . But she tried to hold something but nothing come and she fell.


Nakul immidatly rush downstairs to inform he heard breaking of glass in guest room .
Causing maan to get alert immidatly and rush toward her room
Ram & janki too get up and followed him with all behind them

..

As soon maan switched on lights he found her body on floor . She tried to get up with her single hand but nothing helped her with pain & fear incresing.

M- geet

She was getting panicked when lights turned on suddenly .
She look toward him as she heard his voice calling her . He immidatly come by her side and pick her up
Her dress turned wet due to water on floor but thank god she doesn't injured herself with broken glass pieces .

She hugged him tightly in fear feeling safe . Not even letting him go . When he tried to get up
No she isn't prisoned !
Light finally

And tears make their way out from her eyes .
Sensing her panicked state he let her stay like that . Keep patting her head to make her calm down .
Not like he knew why is dhe so scred but at that moment he thought it will calm her down .
M- hey
U are safe .
No need of getting panicked . Someone by mistake switched off lights.

But she was not listnining at all . Not ready to leave him .


Janki , savitri & Ram when enter in their room .they find geet hugging maan and he was trying to calm her down.

J- maan
Maan looked toward his maa . Who look worried
He blink his eyes in assurance . But she can see that the girl was too scared to respond .


They all enter in room .
Janki come forward putting her hand in her head to calm her down .
But geet become more panicked seeing do many person .
Start nodding her head in no no
Hiding her face in crook of his neck . With her tears wetting him .
Getting panick again

Maan look at his mom & dad

R- janki come we need to go

Saying so Ram come out with all

S- that girl look so scared. I think something drastic happen with her .
Y- bhai told she can't even say anything . I don't know how she manage .
Ram loom toward janki
R- are u fine ?
Don't wry she will be okey .
Janki just nodded.

..

M- look they went . They mean no harm
Her sobs finally died

Maan held her face in his hands wiping her eyes
M- u are safe ok?
Here no one will harm u . U are in my home .

She look at him blinking her eyes .
Now i'll send someone u need to change

She held his hand panikingly noddinv in no .
M- dekho u'll fall ill.
She nodded in no again trying to get up

M- ok fine
Just lay down . I'll tell someone to bring food for u
She again nodded in no
Doesn't want to be in darkness & in that world of fear again .

Why won't she trust him?

When once he saved her life unknowingly before too and her destiny again push her toward him .
Definatly she is not gonna let him go this time .
Call it destiny but he come as a light in her life .
She don't want to be in pain now!
She don't want to stay in darkness. It scare her like a monster trying to consume her existence .
She don't want to be prisoned yet again.
He saved her once unknown to him .
So she can trust him that much he will do it now too.

..

Okey all
Here arise some confusions & questions
But all i can say is keep patience .
Thjs story have villans too . But let the time come !

Do support people . Bcoz lack of responce surely demotivate .

Recently i am just too demotivated with everything . So i definatly need motivation for keep continuing .
Gud night)

Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
very short but amezing update.

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