MG FF Myth: a timeless journey~Thread 2~ PART 39 pg 137 31st May 2018 - Page 3

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Oops RES 😆

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Wow!!
geet's dilemma was so well written.. the decision was difficult one for her.. but she had to take it given the circumstances.. marriage is the most important event of a girl's life, but she had to go through this just to save her & other's lives.. That with someone, she knew was not even alive in her timeline..
The vampire part really cracked me up🤣 how is she hoing to act around them when she returns back??
Amba & malti were nice girls.. Geet had finally decided to accept this life.. the teasing was fun, if only it was all happening in her timeline..
Maan became so bold to check out geet😲
OMG!! they were getting so intimate before wedding.. given the timeline he is in plus his image there, this was not really expected from him..
But I thoroughly enjoyed the romance, so no complaints😉
He was really very clever to get the measurements without even her noticing it..
Geet finally acknowledged her feelings.. It will at least help her accept the reality better..
& ya she is right, who will ever leave the golden opportunity to have such a handsome hunk with such gentlemanly qualities.. not me at least😳
So many thoughts going on in her brain.. I felt it would burst anytime due to over load😆
But her escaping will only complicate things in maan's life & humiliate him.. & i don't think she will do any such thing that will hurt his pride.. She loves him after all😉
Maan's thoughts were so beautifully described.. his feelings so pure.. If only he could cherish his love for a lifetime.. He is unknowingly moving towards his impending doom by trying to untie the two timelines..
sameera here did not seem that bad of a person.. she accepted her reality & decided to leave with her self-respect..
I really respect her decision.. she is one strong woman..👏
Maaneet's pov regarding the wedding was different, their emotions were different but their feelings for each other were similar..😊
I must say, it was all written in such effective way, that it could create a magical effect on the readers..
It was like a ride to the wonderland, full of fantasies.. so beautiful, so enchanting..
The mysterious aura of the story, the flowing emotions of the characters, the tasteful description, it all enamoured my heart..😳
Seriously dude, how do you manage to write something like this??
Hats off to your writing.. I am totally speechless( after such a long speech though😉)

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

please give me some tips on writing dude.. I really need them.

Originally posted by: madhubala123

With that post I turned from green to red. I'm a Rockerz now🥳🥳