SS: Maid of Honour - Completed with Epilogue - Page 8

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

chap 3

tremendous update! superbly written!

fab entry of MSK! Gosh Maan is full of himself lol!

so she does find him handsome!

can understand why they have met since now!

even though Maan was young and just lost his parents, I admire his determination to help his dadi and Dev and make Khurana Industries successful.

Proud of Maan and his achievements!

Maan made Geet scared! seems like he was just teasing her!

at least he noticed her eyes.

Geet annoyed at Maan and Naina!

Maan stunned as she is Geetika!!

Indeed her looks have chnaged but now her personality!

I did not find it cliched!

enjoyed the update... already waiting for next

hmm u mentioned that there will be only 4- 5 chaps?

Originally posted by: taahir004

This Chapter was Awesome Wow it was Superb

Maan coming home and meeting a strange girl yes he realizes she is a plain jane but could also be very beautiful , he seems very much social and holds humour too when at home

circumstances has made him tough in the business world but indeed its admiral that he took up his responsibilities

so Maan remembers Geetika and he knew her as been a nerdy geeky but he also realizes though the drastic change in her the innocence is still there

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

Cliche but very lovely

Originally posted by: anu5

Interesting update dear

Liked it!! Well penned.

Maan was obvious about Geet's thoughts about him and his utterance made Geet feel off guard yet astound that he unravel her thinking. Liked Maan and Geet's thoughts and stance about the happenings that took place in their life. Liked Maan's determination and strong mindness to help his family out and to achieve success on his own and also took up his responsibilities to support his family. Loved Maan's humorous and light hearted deportment . Maan and Naina had good laugh on Geet's expenses which made Geet get annoyed of them. Maan was surprised to know she was Geet and remember her too apropos to her past personality. Indeed Geet is changed when it comes to looks bit still holds the same innocence she was once blessed with.

Thanks for the pm!

Looking forward to the next update

:))

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum

Thank you! I felt it was cliched as it would be as some(including me) would like to call it a "typical meeting"

Yeah I had hoped to end it in 4 parts but this looks like it's gonna be more than that😆