SS: Maid of Honour - Completed with Epilogue

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Flame_of_Forest

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#291

sounds interesting..reading :)

Part 1 and 2

liked the whole setting of the characters..
there is a tint of sadness with the past for Geet, but in present there is feel of liveliness and chirpiness with Geet and Naina around.
the plane crash has instilled the fear in Geet, but Naina has been a good friend to support and take it away along with the loneliness she had been into since childhood. Dadima is sweet as well.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#292

Part 3

cliched meeting? not at all.
rather it was a wonderful one.
the smile I had from the starting line did not fade till the last line.
the goodbye had been not so friendly in the past and it reflected in the meeting now, and made it all the more interesting.
loved how his funny side was back while meeting her, even without knowing it was her.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#293

Part 4

fabulous chapter..
specially the way the perception of the Prom night was taken through rumors to reality and then back to how it caused the rumors to spread.
Maan punched the boy who called her names based on her looks, then again in the present he felt happy with everyone's reaction
and Geet is unknown to all this.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#294

Part 5

I got a little confused initially, because I was still in the present of the last chapter, but understood it to be the past then..
may be few, but she had some friends then, good that Adi too is there in the Party and they could reminisce and rekindle their friendship again with the party and the upcoming internship.
ohho the dance, want to see Maan's reaction now

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#295

Part 6

that was hilarious...🤣
next to Sherlock Holmes skills.. reduced to an amateur one and then to None..😆

not many girls, but he definitely is keeping tab of one..
He is taking too much interest into her activities and her in particular..what happened to Sam and him.

the coffee part, very well used in the story to give a different perception to Maan.

fabulous update, even I was getting doubt if Adi is turning into some evil guy or what.

@Raji - awesome description of the coffee

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#296

Part 7

dho dala..I mean Naina ne Sam ko...coffee se dho dala, a befitting response.
such petty tactics by Sam to show her position and power..
she is acting like Sasha (from the show)
how come Maan was ok about it, something fishy..their relation does not seem to be that deep, but good in a way for Maaneet.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#297

Part 8

As expected, Maan did not care..it was a relation meant to be broken and it did.
all the plans by Sam back fired..but because of her Maan and Geet came closer.

He was already protective towards Geet since childhood, it took no time to turn into love like feelings.
what about Geet, the not so friendly goodbye. the anger for him..
was she already in love with him?

loved the updates..you have written the story in a wonderful way..
waiting to read their feelings to bloom more..the next updates that is.

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#298

@Flame_of_Forest, thank you for reading and liking the story

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#299

Will try to update somewhere in the mid of the week, I give in to your demand of making it a 10 part story😛

Sorry for this long wait, I've been caught up with a lot of work🤢

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum
Will try to update somewhere in the mid of the week, I give in to your demand of making it a 10 part story😛
Sorry for this long wait, I've been caught up with a lot of work🤢

hey take your time no problem
if I knew tum itni acchi ho...i would have said 15 parts total 😆
oops my mistake