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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate Lizzi😡 😡 aur Maan bs muh dekhta reh geya so hate him too whatever the reason was hump...meri Geet ko chor bola... how dare she😡 my poor Geet was hopelessly in love with him...Maan k pyaar k bare me ni mujhe baat krni😈
Lovely to bilkul ni khungi😆 interesting story...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HateMee

Hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate Lizzi😡😡aur Maan bs muh dekhta reh geya so hate him too whatever the reason was hump...meri Geet ko chor bola... how dare she😡my poor Geet was hopelessly in love with him...Maan k pyaar k bare me ni mujhe baat krni😈

Lovely to bilkul ni khungi😆interesting story...


ohhh itni nafrat ..Liza is surely dead 😆
yes geet's love very pure
thnx for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful one shot ...
maan rejected geet's love still she loves him crazily ..
maan is so possessive of his watch ...!!
just because a little misunderstanding maan's friend humiliated geet so badly ...
that moment I just wanted to slap them hard ...
though maan later apologize to geet but she didn't forgive him ...good ..
because if she would have forgave him then maybe they wouldn't be together after 6 years ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful os... I hate lizz. Stupid maan, how come he doubts her, doesn't he knpw her?

Loved this os. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pop77

Nice story.. I read it in farewell thread..
finally Cinderella got her prince., Geet punishment makes him think about her.,


yup indeed her punishment works
thnx for reading again
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice OS dear

Liked it!!
Geet was in thoughts and was living a fairy dream with her prince charming Maan. Inspite of him rejecting her Geet loves and admires him. So, her life was comparatively similar to that of Cinderella but happy to be surrounded with Maan's thoughts and fantasy. Her desire was short lived when she was accused for stealing Maan's wrist watch. She had hope that Maan will stand for her alas his silence and his friends words broke her dreams and shattered her heart. She repudiated to forgive Maan. After years Geet was baffled when Maan gave his concern for their alliance but she was in quandary owing to Maan's demeanor. Finally all her thoughts were answered when he confessed his love for her and the moment he realised depth of his feelings for her.
:))


thnx for reading Anu
geet always loved maan his action did hurt her deep still that love never fade away and maan with her punishment got to realise what is love
thnx for your comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
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cute and nice os dear...
thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OK!! so Geet was in love with maan since long..
But that duffer rejected her..
Poor her.. step mother & sister were harsh on her..
If only her father knew about her condition..
Her love for maan was so pure.. he thoughts could make her forget her sadness..
loved her bonding with his family..
I seriously hated that Liza..
She was worried for her friend alright.. But she has no right to insult a person like this in public without any proof..
Even Rohan was not right in checking geet's bag..
Maan was such a dumbhead to not stop his friends..
Friends are supposed to guide of what is right & wrong & not support you in you wrong doings...
Though he apologized to her.. but it was only when he found the watch with his siater..
Geet did the right thing not forgiving him..
But after the leap of 6 years maan came with proposal & she said yes just like that.. I being a feminist did not like this a bit..
Plus I think you should have shown about liza & rohan.. did the regret their mistake.. did maan say anything to them for their deeds or simply let it go..
Even after the leap when maaneet married, you did not show them anywhere.. they being his bestfriends should have been there right??
If not, the reason of their absence should have been shown..
& I think it would have been fair if geet had a confrontation with his friends as well after the proposal..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

<font color="#FF00FF"><font size="2">OK!! so Geet was in love with maan since long..
But that duffer rejected her..
Poor her.. step mother & sister were harsh on her..
If only her father knew about her condition..
Her love for maan was so pure.. he thoughts could make her forget her sadness..
loved her bonding with his family..
I seriously hated that Liza..
She was worried for her friend alright.. But she has no right to insult a person like this in public without any proof..
Even Rohan was not right in checking geet's bag..
Maan was such a dumbhead to not stop his friends..
Friends are supposed to guide of what is right & wrong & not support you in you wrong doings...
Though he apologized to her.. but it was only when he found the watch with his siater..
Geet did the right thing not forgiving him..
But after the leap of 6 years maan came with proposal & she said yes just like that.. I being a feminist did not like this a bit..
Plus I think you should have shown about liza & rohan.. did the regret their mistake.. did maan say anything to them for their deeds or simply let it go..
Even after the leap when maaneet married, you did not show them anywhere.. they being his bestfriends should have been there right??
If not, the reason of their absence should have been shown..
& I think it would have been fair if geet had a confrontation with his friends as well after the proposal..</font>
</font>



her love was so pure that maan forced to fall for her
about friends yup I thought but my lazy hand actually OS was getting so big I give up writing more ..
cut short many things here n there
for geet I can only say she still loves him and his last word about her punishment.. melted her heart because even in her dream she never thought her lost Prince will remember her or her words ..
loves make us do many things geet decision is one of them +
sooner or later she have to get married why not here where his family loves her so much also
thnx for reading again 😊
its really big thnx
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Fantabulous
Such a superb OS
Finally she gets her prince
Prince was waiting for her return...

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