Mortal Promises!#T4!*UPDATED CH 47@Pg111[Note@Pg100]2nd Apr

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#331

Nice update now geet going to meet her mother and maan is absent about it nice update waiting for next part

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@jssood

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Posted: 7 years ago

#332

thanx for update dear

the idea of 2 parts is just awesome

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#333

both parts are good

geet said london ka mop haa ha...

maan explain her that what was that

she told her journey to her home towm feeling very guilt for not telling maan before

maan want to tell about sam

precap is realy good

dadi leg pulling maan

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#334

Part one and two

loved it ..

Geet is too cute.

Geet Ghar ja rhi h..Poor maan

Precap seems interesting...

Edited by Ashdevil - 7 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#335

Awesome update loved how innocently geet describe a sexy dress as a mop but masn knows his jaan inside out he doesn't want her to be uncomfortable geet was feeling guilty for hiding the fact she is going to hp maan give another name to Gert how cute he could see she was upset so ask her Geet told how she was angry at him so she called her mom told she wanted to come home though she wants to cancel but couldn't as now Dadi also coming maan now shocked he has to tell about sameera proposal as dumb girl isn't getting the msg that maan isn't interested in her but he understands geet and isn't angry at her but now he is worried how he will handle geet and overall Sam madness increased hope he at least tells Dadi abt Sam proposal

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#336

lovely update...great o see the story moving forward... still confused...are they already husband and wife. How come no one knows? Greatpart...waiitng for the next update...Maan is angry with geet for telling him things so late...he is doing the same

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#337

Chapter 45

Part 1

tremendous update... wonderfully written.

beautiful moments! liked Geet's description of the lingerie! she is hilarious! nice moments!

enjoyed the comment about the writer and the phone call. glad Maan decides 2 tell Geet abt Sameera! but again destiny is not on his side!

he notices that Geet is tensed! Geet is his life! admire the love he has for her! Maan tells her he will take her to see her parents! his comment makes her sadder! she is awed by his care! Geet feels guilty.

she finally breaks the news abt her trip.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#338

Chap 45

Part 2

dynamic update. brilliantly written!

Geet feels guilty! hated when she says she is a bad wife! Maan angry not cos she is going but cos he she only told him now! can understand his reaction!

his anger is at its peak due to other reasons! glad they understand each other so well! its sad that he will not be able to join her die to his hectic schedule! nice that Maan is being direct with Geet! loved that he never lets his anger rule over his love and care for her!

great that Geet is trying to appease him! at least she managed to calm him down!

lovely moments!