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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


WOW...really loved this story...completely different. Best part is its a fairy tale...A love story between King Maan and Mermaid Geetakshi. 😊 😳

Maan gets a dream continuously for 3 days where a beautiful girl appears asking for help and his sleep gets disturbed. The priest suggests him the way but also gave him the warnings of the risks as he will be leaving behind him his kingdom without a king and hence crowns his brother Dev as a King before leaving...

He finds the girl...but she is not a human...she is a mermaid. She had come into his dream to seek help as some human wizard had stolen the life stone of the mermaid world and this life stone has to come back to the place where it belongs within 7 days otherwise, the entire mermaid world will get destroyed...Maan has been successful in bringing the stone fighting it out with the wizard and also installing it in the right place and on right time.

Loved the ending where Maan marries Geetakshi and he becomes kind of Mermaid world now and they live happily ever after in their new world of love..

Amazingly written and loved it 👏

Thanks a lot dear... I am glad you like it. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
O re Piya Part 4 - thanks for updating!

dynamic update! superbly written! glad Maan has realised and wants to meet Geet! dadi happy and hopeful! she is right that he has a tough task ahead of him! Maan hurt Geet beyond repair! Poor Geet! she thought she will have some peace but she is taunted! hate these ladies and their low thinking! Geet upset and rightly Geet feels guilty for lying to her mom! so! Ridzy knows Geet is faking her happiness! Geet cannot even share her pain with anyone! glad she was able to sahre her pain with babaji! Past well inciprated! Geet shattered Maan is in love with Pari! she is willing to leave Maan for his happiness! Geet went for an interview! seems like its Maan's company! Geet lies 2 Ridzy! Geet friends are worried abt her! Maan is at HP! Geet stunned seeing Maan and he is shocked and happy that she is his Pari! Geet wishes to hold but recalls his words! she is in tears! Geet has accepted everything is over so now Maan will have to earn her love, trust and forgiveness!


Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
shall wait for next part of O re Piya
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Wow Part 4 of O re Piya.

Indeed a beautiful and painful update. Geet was bearing so much without any fault of hers. What an irony she came to her parents for some peace but here she to got bad treatment. Oh these old ladies with sick thinking 😡 I wish to slap these kind of jerks like her aunt(taiji). Her mom trying to compose but deep inside all having a doubt regarding her married life. And she have no answers to their questions. I know how she must be feeling. It's like you are trying to breath but all strangling you. Sometimes situation made all doors closed. But Geet find a way. She gave an interview. Lagta hai babji b maze le rahe hai. 😆 she is again to get struck with her devil pati 😳 😆 koi nahi aise nahi to waise sahi. I think Jin do logo k bare me Adi ne kaha unme se ek to Pakka Maan hi hone wala hai.. it's all my assumption. Rest is up to writer sahiba's wish😳😉
Ridzi sense tension in her behavior but Geet lieng to her like she do with others. Ridzi introduce her love to her and other friends. Even they to sense through her changed behavior... It's like they meeting a new person. Their Geet lost somewhere.
Because of his over drinking now Geet too know he have someone in his life
Kya museebat hai. Geet apni hi sautan bann gai.
Now I don't get hasu ya rou... It's complicated😭😭
😕
Finally Maan is with his wife and Pari. Finally Amna samna with lot of wait...
Hayee worth it...
But Geet step back and hold her emotions on time while Maan gotboth his wife and Pari on her...
Now I want to see what he will do to make his mistakes.
Let's Geet play with him this time.
Maan baby bahut stay hai now it's pay back time..
Devil me 😈 heheheh Thoda to meant ab karni padegi na 😉


Thanks for your long comments dear...

Yeah...Geet is not having peace at her maternal home too...😭.

Ek point main main ne khudh dyaan nahin diya...Geet apne app ki Sautan ban gayi 😕..yeah..seriously

Not commenting on the second round of interview...as you have already said it...lets wait and watch 😆

Maan has really hurt her beyond limits...it wont be easy to patch up...but he will 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

O re Piya Part 4 - thanks for updating!


dynamic update! superbly written! glad Maan has realised and wants to meet Geet! dadi happy and hopeful! she is right that he has a tough task ahead of him! Maan hurt Geet beyond repair! Poor Geet! she thought she will have some peace but she is taunted! hate these ladies and their low thinking! Geet upset and rightly Geet feels guilty for lying to her mom! so! Ridzy knows Geet is faking her happiness! Geet cannot even share her pain with anyone! glad she was able to sahre her pain with babaji! Past well inciprated! Geet shattered Maan is in love with Pari! she is willing to leave Maan for his happiness! Geet went for an interview! seems like its Maan's company! Geet lies 2 Ridzy! Geet friends are worried abt her! Maan is at HP! Geet stunned seeing Maan and he is shocked and happy that she is his Pari! Geet wishes to hold but recalls his words! she is in tears! Geet has accepted everything is over so now Maan will have to earn her love, trust and forgiveness!



Hey Chetna...more than you, I am even more greedy to get comments from you 😛😉

Loved your encouraging comments...
Yeah right...Geet is really loosing it...she is not finding peace anywhere...apart from her babaji's company.
Lets watch wat's in store 😊

Thanks a lot dear 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


Thanks for your long comments dear...

Yeah...Geet is not having peace at her maternal home too...😭.

Ek point main main ne khudh dyaan nahin diya...Geet apne app ki Sautan ban gayi 😕..yeah..seriously

Not commenting on the second round of interview...as you have already said it...lets wait and watch 😆

Maan has really hurt her beyond limits...it wont be easy to patch up...but he will 😳

I know he will but I want Geet throw tantrums this time...😉😆 and he will run after her... Us taiji ki b or jal jayegi... All will see their damad is Majnu and lattu on their daughter...😳😆😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

I know he will but I want Geet throw tantrums this time...😉😆 and he will run after her... Us taiji ki b or jal jayegi... All will see their damad is Majnu and lattu on their daughter...😳😆😉


😆😆


Well with the things comming up, Tayiji will burn away from tip to toe..😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


Hey Chetna...more than you, I am even more greedy to get comments from you 😛😉

Loved your encouraging comments...
Yeah right...Geet is really loosing it...she is not finding peace anywhere...apart from her babaji's company.
Lets watch wat's in store 😊

Thanks a lot dear 🤗


Hi u r welcome... thanks for sharing this story with us... looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds...
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


😆😆


Well with the things comming up, Tayiji will burn away from tip to toe..😉

waiting waiting😉
One suggestion if you feel okay... Dear make it FF... Bahut scope hai story me... Or make it SS at least.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

waiting waiting😉

One suggestion if you feel okay... Dear make it FF... Bahut scope hai story me... Or make it SS at least.


waiting as well...

I agree with Richa...

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