Magical Love updated P 8 on Pg 106 / 21-4-2018

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jasika

@jasika08

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+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Congrats for new story

Nice start

Love it

Waiting for next update

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saadi88

@saadi88

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Wow..that was really nice..awesome i would say..kinda different...witch, magical powers, wicked clan..and maan forced himself on her..that was cruel.both dont have power's..i liked it very much...plz do update soon...will be waiting.

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Wowww what a start... Superbbb... good vs Evil...Nanda vs Khuranas...and Handas r Nandas supporters...sad defeated Geet trying to save Shivangi... Khuranas r so cruel...Maan did wrong but he was helpless but why...His Aunt omg she is so cruel and Heartless...

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Wonderful concept..

Very different one..

It's very interesting too..

Like reading magic stories..

But here there is a lil twist to it..

The story does have magic but the leads don't..

Maaneet doesn't have magical powers..

N this reason will bring them together in future..

They will create a new history for their Clans.. ;-)

Maaneet r sad that they couldn't do magic like everyone else..

N due to this only.. Geet could save the lil girls live..

She could hid her.. But she got caught..

Maan under his aunt's spell did something really awful ..

He realized it in the mrg.. N tired to protest too but couldn't succeed in front of that evil preetha..

Maan's dad too doesn't love him..

How bad is that..

Preetha is really very evil.. She planning to read geet's thoughts..

Now what will Geet do?? How will she save the girl.. ??

After Maan's deed.. How will maaneet fall in love???

Curious to read more...

Continue soon...

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Congratulations for the new story yaar

Wow awesome update yaar

Kya different concept hai

Maan and Geet both are not witches and sorcerers but normal people

Well maan's aunt is really very cruel she made maan do such a bad act and then tortured him too

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

nice
Maan behaving like puppet as his bua did evil magic on him and he Forced Geet But Geet Want To Protect Shivangi From Hr Khurana's not happy with Maan gud nature they trying tp make him like them evil

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Interesting one and Concept is different ...

Name goes perfect with story cause magic is surrounding them all around...

I love Geet in Here being young she had tried facing all and She's really brave...

Khuranas Are after shivangi as she's last heir and Handas being loyal trying to protect her...

Geet doesn't have any power is she normal woman or will have power later...
Though she needs her power so much but khuranas Are evil they had tried all things when not worked forced upon a girl shame on them...

Maan he doesn't have power too but what's he doing being a puppet of their hand??
How could he listen to them while they have no value for him...

even in Geets family she's a not being treating well except her mother...

khuranas has kill all?? Geets whole family too??
what will happen now... Maan should help Geet I don't think anyone help Geet to get out of here if she doesn't get her Powers also he should help cause he's hero of this story na 😛😉

All though I'm damn angry with Him cause he forced geet he better help both of them ...

what's This FF?Ss?

well I'm waiting for more...

di update other stories too...

well I'm waiting.

take care...

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

congrats for the new story

in a magical world both maaneet don't have the magical power.

maan forced himself on geet because of his father and aunt pressure.

geet is doing everything she can do to save the small angel.

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Nice update dear Geet family is protecting nandas clam but Geet is not having any magical power all thinks that she is cursed but her mother is boosting her she is caged by Khuranas for getting information about Shivani but she not revealed there called Mann and he forced himself on Geet still she not opened her mouth