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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#611

thanks for updating!

Chapter 7

Part 1

lovely VM!

tremendous update! superbly written!

can understand Geet's thoughts! surprised that she called Aayan! why did her dad not tell her anything?

liked how Maan handled Geet! he knew she was furious!

hmm Maan does not waste time lol! wow Maan is flirting with her!

Geet was a bit rude to Maan!

finally Maan tells her about their marriage!

wished that they would have asked Geet! she now rejects the marriage!

whys does she hates Maan?

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#612

Chapter 2

Part 2

splendid update! greatly written!

while I understand Aayush's concern but they should have asked Geet! hate Aayan's mom's response!

great that Maan's dad spoke up!

Aadarsh should have spoken to the Handas and not asked Madhu to do it!

angry that they say Geet is unsuitable and accuse the Handas! glad that Geet is not getting married in this family!

Aayan's mom is so mean!! her son did make a blunder!!!

liked Maan's comment!

hmm Garav drops a bomb! nice that Madhu supported him!

at least Maan is happy!

Loved Maan's thoughts!

so Mohinder agreed! but why did he not ask Geet?

Maan is ready to accept her hatred!

Geet is stunned with his behavior!

first time seeing an angry Maan!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#613

outstanding VM and precap! already waiting!!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 6 years ago

#614

geet is very much confuse by what is happening around her

now she is going to marry maan her love instead of aryan

to hind that she is affected by this she is behaving very oddly

maan remember how things change next day of sangeet

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maanshi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Yes I want to update MP...Hopefully very soon again...

Doubt - Hmm I got one sharp and intelligent reader...Also must be that after Predestined you are expecting such !!! 😉

hahahah...I alwasy update huge chapters..Asked for more comments cause I updated 3 chappys at once..

Being Regular on If - Trying my best...Also wish that you too be here...😊

Doubt- thanks 😉

Yes u always update huge Chp ... N i also comment looonnnggg 😆

I come on if almost everyday

If u hv protected Ur 3rd story DTE ... than i need ur pm for pw

I didnt check its on IF only or some parts on blog also ???

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#616

awesome update...loved that maan's papernts were so supportive...maan koto paki pakayi khichdi mil gayi...but how will he handle geet now?

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 6 years ago

#617

wow lovely vm...if dis d precap...m already loving it...

geet kitni bhi nakhre dikhao...shadi toh honi hi hai...

lovely update...

loved it...

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gbhat

@gbhat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#618

Read all the parts and it was superb. The precap is awsum. Waiting for the updates

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: anu5
Welcome back baby.
@Chapter 4
Nice Gifs and beautiful VM.
Lovely update dear
Beautifully written.
Maan was lost casting his mind back to Geet's engagement day. He was reminiscing the time Geet put ring on Aayan's finger but was brought back with Geet's words. Maan is attracted to his little brat and couldn't stop thyself from adoring her words and antics. On other hand Geet was hell bent in breaking his patience and control with her tipsy cute behavior. In drunken state Geet wasn't conscious of her deportment. Its seems like Geet is attracted to Maan too. Aayan didn't even to keep watch on Geet whilst Maan was protective about Geet and was besides her. Maan had tough time controlling Geet in her drunken state. So, it was Aayan and his friends who spiked Geet's drink and made her drink too. Aayan and his friends are jerk. Maan hit Sagar for his comments on Geet.
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Hey Anu baby,

I am so so sooo glad reading your amazingly beautiful comments after so long... Delighted that you like the update GIF and also the vm...

The attraction between maaneet - Indeed he does admire that little brat and so does she. I find a naive brattish Geet and mature reserved Maan heavily fascinating...

Thanks for reading and commenting this beautifully...

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: anu5
@Chapter 5
Nice Gif dear
Beautiful update.
Well written.
Maan being protective of Geet, took her out of Aayan's friends reach. Geet couldn't understand what's happening around her apropos to her tipsy state. A lady took Aayan with her. Why did Maan's face turn pale seeing the lady who took Aayan with her?? Geet was curious to know about the lady's whereabouts as Maan's gestures changed seeing her. She was least bothered about Aayan accompanying her. Liked Maan's concern and care for Geet. Geet was letting her heart out and was sharing her emotions to Maan. She was missing her mother and felt miserable that everyone hates her. Why was Maan in quandary when Geet said he is CA!? Maan was regretting his decision as he was falling for Geet terribly. So, the lady was Aayan's GF and seems like she wants to reconcile with Aayan. Hope she isn't pregnant r something. Khuranas were in tension apropos to return of Ayan's GF in Ayan's life. They were in thoughts regarding Geet nad Ayan's marriage. Whilst on other hand Geet was sharing her time and thoughts with Maan and Maan was reconsidering their equation.
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Geet was not that much tipsy yet but yes at a very confusing state...Everything became a blur...

I guess your questions are answered at the next update itself...

Pregnant - Hmm such a sharp minded baby I have got here lol..

Thanks a lot for this excellent comment..Made my day indeed❤️