Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi (3) New Ch - 170 - Page 36

Hi there, @Commelina and thanks for sharing CB's writing! I'm looking fwd to read her stories now!!!


How is your hybernaion going? I hope not gained any weight but have gained a lot more wisdom! Sometimes I feel writers and creative peoplegrasp much more from their surrounding than others... we just go with the flow. Lol!

Nivi, finally seeing green light

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 54

oh my god...the first quote and the way you have beautifully related it to Ayush, his feelings..
he is like the moth to a flame, just that the burning is inevitable irrespective of he touches the flame or not.

all his thoughts and emotions were laid out like a beautiful canvas painting, which the readers can see and feel the depth of it, and Geet cannot!!
be it his feelings for Geet or bitterness for Maan..there is so much there confined in his heart, that is not expressed for he knows he is not allowed to do so for her sake, for the sake of their friendship.
even today he let it out, but wraps it back in a fun talk.

Sometimes I feel Geet is a little unfair to him, even as a friend. Why send the messages which will put him in worry, and then hurt him more by saying do not involve yourself in my matter.

Hope he finds someone, whom he is able to love with the same fervor and it gets reciprocated too.

this is one beautiful update Nivi. Its commendable to have written a character like Ayush in the story that takes almost equal importance as the leads and manages to tuck the heartstrings.

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Hi there, @Commelina and thanks for sharing CB's writing! I'm looking fwd to read her stories now!!!


How is your hybernaion going? I hope not gained any weight but have gained a lot more wisdom! Sometimes I feel writers and creative peoplegrasp much more from their surrounding than others... we just go with the flow. Lol!

Originally posted by: hermosoanu123

Nivi, finally seeing green light

...update is on the way ??? missing...

Originally posted by: Commelina

if all goes as planned. Sunday the upadteS would be up.

Sunday ke intezaar mein

Originally posted by: Commelina

Hi Tarana,

I have been taking out time and trying to bank chapters. Will again post 4-5 chapters together. At the latest by Sunday.

I don't consider myself to be a writer, tbh.

The other day it was friend's birthday. So I thought now that I have written almost 70 chapters, that means I must be definitely a creative person and I thought I would write for her a poem or a quote and she will be so impressed by my writing skills( look at my thinking process, I was more concerned about showing off my writing skills 😆) so I picked up a pen and paper and sat and sat and nothing came to my mind.

In the end, I put a pictures of ours as my whats app status, copied a quote from net and pasted it below the status and wished her bday.

She knows that I write so she asks, that quote is beautiful. Did you write it?

As much as I wanted to say that yes, I have written it, I wrote nahi google se copy paste kiya hai😆😆.

So I am no different. I go with the flow too. Half of the time I don't notice anything around me unless someone points it out to me.

Haan handsome ladka ho toh woh alag baat hai😳

You are too funny and I totally relate to being clueless when you have to wish someone on their important occasions, i'm the same. But I remember writing looong letters and then emails to cousins in hostel and pen friends growing up. Yes, there was an era when pen friends and writing letters on paper was a real thing!

All I can say is that you just have a great sense of humor and thoughts about life that are shown in your work and we are lucky for that!! You are indicating that its not that creative people are like that at everything they do... and that makes sense.

Regarding you noticing things around you - of course beautiful people/ minds are worth a second look/ chat and when you are attracted to them, God only help then!!!


Looking fwd to sunday!!!! I'll read some recent chapters again now!!!

Originally posted by: Commelina

She is and a very good one at that. But sadly, she doesn't write as often as she should. I guess it's because of lack of time.

CB, I am taking the liberty of posting the links of your works here. I hope you don't mind.

An Arranged Date

A Secret Valentine

Originally posted by: Commelina

if all goes as planned. Sunday the upadteS would be up.

😃😃