Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi (3) New Ch - 170

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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#181

finally she told her family
her family reaction was expected

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Part 63:

dadi & tara were nice to her.. but chachi was taunting her..
well the woman had a bitter tongue, we came to know from past updates..
she thought she was able to forget about hiom but was she really??
Maan's childhood & teenage years were not very happy..
The way dadi explained it all to geet, it was very effectively written..
geet could visualize his childhood while in his room, going through his belongings, but we could visualize by the way you described it so effortlessly..
sometimes I am really jealous of your writing skills..
Even though I try my best I can't express half of what I feel for this amazing piece of work written by you..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Part 64:

Maaneet convo something to read..
both are struggling with their emotions being bottled up & not being able to share their turmoil with anyone..
Both end up hurting each other by their words unknowingly..
Geet is not ready to understand him making her own assumptions, whereas maan is blaming her for not understanding when he is himself not ready to open up to her..
I felt maan was right in not letting geet stay there..
with current scenario, geet is making things complicated.. she does not know what she exactly wants.. in her confusion she is making things worse..
if she wants separation she should come clear about it in front of her in-laws..
staying there for long & pretending everything is fine & then leave once she is settled ..
this will hurt them a lot more in future..
she is not realizing that it can also destroy her sister's relationship as well..
leaving maan because he loves another & because she wants to pursue her career was fine..
but this pretense not correct.. she is being utterly selfish here..

The song mora saiyyan is my favorite one.. i just love it & seeing it being used here in my favorite story was a treat..
but whom is maan thinking of while the song plays.. geet or jasleen??

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Part 65:

Nandini again!! is this any indication towards future plot??
is she any kind of threat to dev's relationship??
coz he doesn't seem effected now & is very much in love with taara..
not sure of future though..
Dev& taara do love each other a lot..
it could be seen in their every gesture..
would not want them to be separated..
Geet saw their intimate moments & is very likely thinking about her own married life..
Getting thoughts about maan evertime..
That sketch had a great effect on her along with witnessing dev-taara..
she did not understand the look.. was it lust, desire??

P.S: was the girl in the sketch jasleen?? considering maan was very close to her in past.. did they get intimate?? Then it would actually be unfair of him to hide it from geet..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Part 66:

So geet had been dreaming about her husband that night..
so much that she did not even want to have dinner..
she was actually snuggling into maan..
He too realized she might be dreaming something of that sort..
It amazes me that she could recognize him even in sleep,
yet she does not realize she cannot stay without him, that she has already fallen for her husband..
the description of this scene was again very beautifully & creatively written..
it was just a plain & simple scene, but your words & way of narrating it made it extraordinarily beautiful..

P.S: what was maan doing there at this time of night.. & i was shocked that he actually chose to be that close to his wife.. also his comment was something really not expected by me..

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Secret

@Pqwert207

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Sooo many updates

Thank u for dat

Loved all of it very much

Ge3t s beeter of at maans home than her own house.

She s getting to know more of him

Maan had not allowed her to stay at his home because he want her to come back to him? i hope its like dat only

Confused with maans behaviour

He want jasleen back or continue his marriage with geet?

Loved d last update most

Maan s back

Soo glad.

Hope their misunderztanding get cleared up

Loved dev nayantaras romance

But wat s nadinis role here?

Eagerly waiting for nxt updates

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Kaha geet or kaha wo jd. Lots of differences. And most importantly one should agree for marriage after closing their past. They need time but should help the better half to understand each other.

It hurts big time when after marriage they shut u out. Her family just trying to send her to her husband anyhow.

Dev is in love with his wife. Child or no child... they should be faithful. What nandini and her laddoes are doing?

Daadi intentionally gave her maans mother's sharee?

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#188

great updates

reading n knowing about maan from his books n daadi geet call maan but both talk with dryness towards each other

geet is very much confuse

maan is trying his best for the relation

hope every thing become ok n smooth between maan n geet

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Veil

@Veil

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#189

I've read the last chapter thrice. And I'll read it a thirty times more.

Just today morning I was talking to my best friend, who has told me some very good advice about writing. She asked me to stop writing fluff and write slice of life writing. I told her then writing fluff is easy. Writing slice of life, relatable stories is hard.

I thought giving someone butterflies in the belly is easy. Just create a couple of characters that are too good to be true. But nivi, I'll be honest. Today I got to know how you still can give butterflies with characters that become as real as it can get.

If i was crushing on Maan earlier, it is full blown saccha pyaar now. He's vulnerable dude. And sarcastic too. That's after my own heart.

"I don't want to be with anyone else"

Yes my heart stopped at that else and then started functioning again after a beat.

I'm not saying he is in love with Geet. But it has started now.

You know these series of updates especially the last one bought some very fond memories. Oh no, not regarding my life.

I've told you sometime back that one of the authors I love in IF is Devi and she always will be one of my most favorite authors. There's a beautiful quality to her work. The story flows. Scene by scene, you get pulled in and there's also so much of Indian Ness in it you know? And after her, it's you that has become a master in mastering all of these qualities.

You broke my heart once Nivi by waving off when I asked you to publish but Nivi listen to me. Listen to me... I am not saying it as a measure to flatter you. Really, this story... It's worth being published. It is f**king good.

Let me go back in reading the entire story from the start.

PS: again, not an empty statement but you inspire me to write better girl. Thank you for the inspiration. Thank you for good stuff to read. Thanks for this story. I can't tell you how much this story means to me.