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Posted: 7 years ago

#311

Chapter 15

This is outstandingly dramatic. So many things happened. Ow the childhood maaneet is too much adorable. So geet was actually very much protective of her pooh. No wonder why maan is hell bent on getting her friendship back. They shared a really unique strong bond. I loved the way you have shown the childhood innocence and love between them. Oh no maan saves a junior kid from some bully and he was beating up his seniors. Geet screams and maan stop only after that. It shows the control she has over maan.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#312

But i am still confused about maan's relationship. What is his deal with sasha? He is really mysterious sometimes. He loves geet but doesn't admit dont know why. Maan is punished. That is awful. He saved that boy. Why is he being punished? Maan's relationship with his father is unexpected. Seems they share an utterly bitter bond. My god hoping adarsh not scold geet. He seems so scary. Geet witnessed everything.

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1135582

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Posted: 7 years ago

#313

Chapter 16

Shocking mind blowing chapter. Loved the twist and turns. I thought there is some animosity between adarsh and geet. But it turned out the complete opposite. Adarsh is very fond of geet and Geet has a beautiful father daughter bonding with him. Love the way she fixed his broach. But then why is his relationship so bitter with his own son. He seemed to be a strict father at last part but in this one he is a chilled out father. May be maan and he are the same type and that's why the ego clash. But i admire how geet has a lovely bonding with khuranas. Even maan is also close to geets family. Geet goes in maan's room. He is hearing loud music. Their encounter is another fiery one.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#314

I love this sarcastic maan. He is awesome with his wits. Truly amazing how you are shaping their characters. Geet is here to actually see maan lekin bahana taiyar hai. Those songs he is listening to is reminding him of geet? He is in love but not realizing it. Jago maan jago. Ye dosti nahi pyar hai. Pata nahi dono ki ziddipana inko kaha leke jayegi. Geet is taunting maan about pari? She is trying to play cupid in pari and maan? Seriously geet? Ab ye jayada ho gaya na. Lekin i so love maan's reply, was waiting for his counter attack. So he says to give demo or tell pari how they have kissed. That means he knows the significance of lip kiss between two people.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#315

And their kissing was not even some casual carried out moment. It was hot and passionate. That kiss represented lingering and the way both souls missed each other. Butsadly this story is on HOLD???? Plz update it. Want to know what is maan saying.Specially precap sounds so much fun.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#316

Awaiting for next part. Loved reading this so much. Please include more of their childhood moments. You are one fabulous writer I have read that i need to admit. Keep writing. Hats off. Trully entertaining.