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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for your new story..
Welcome back..

Interesting concept...

Character sketch...

Prologue...

Maan n geet meet , he thinks her to be naintara n insults her...

But geet gives him back n leaves him embarrassed in front of his whole office...

He realises what she said was true n they were At fault...

He convinces the family to accept dev n naintara's marriage...

The wedding is fixed..

Maan comes to know that geet is naintara's sister...

He falls for her big time ..

N comes to live with them at the pretext of business, so that he could know her more ..

Geet makes him chop fodder for the cows..

Maan feeds the goat ever so lovingly...

Geet starts noticing him ...

She is an innocent devil ...

Note ..

Devarani is devar's wife ... As in co sister ... Devarani n jethani...

Naintara is his bahu , but not devarani , she would be the devarani of maan's wife..

Sorry if I hurt you .. just wanted to correct u ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
chalo geet ko akkal toh ayi...bechara maan...

lovely n cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi will u b updating today?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update dear Maan is really sweet but geet is prankster when will they understand their inner feelings
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Posted: 7 years ago
So Maan is happy that the girl he likes is not marrying his brother
and decides to come and stay in Hoshiapur just so he can get a chance to talk with Geet
while she still remembers him stealing her rasgulla
wow what revenge when Geet makes him do manual labour but in a way she learned a different aspect to Maan she saw just how kind he was with the goat and maybe her pov about him will change too
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for the update
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Waiting for the updates dear
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16 january to gyi😭 ab 2 updates ek saath
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Posted: 7 years ago

A/N Sorry girls, I was really busy with real life. Just got free, so posting 4th chapter. I will try to write some more today and post 5th chapter too but it will depend upon if I got the chance to write.

chapter 4


Oblivious to Geet''s looks, Maan was playing with the little sheep. After sometime when Geet had finished giving the fodder to the cows, she and Maan went back home. On their way, he saw an old man who was walking ahead and following his steps was a woman.

He heard a little laughter and looked at Geet who looked around to check if there was anyone else present but the alley was totally empty. She quickly moved forward and started to walk behind the woman copying her. She did it for few minutes and then, she stopped. Her eyes full of laughter she looked at Maan.

Maan looked at her confused,'' what was that?''

Geet,'' I always do it. I find it funny how some males walk in front while females demurely follow the steps. I won't ever do that with my husband. I will walk side by side with him.'

Maan couldn't understand the issue but her last sentence made him smile,'' We are already walking side by side.''

Geet felt her mouth open in astonishment, the nerve of this guy. Seriously, the way he looked at her was like she was his rasgulla which she kind of liked...No, she did not like it...Not at all.

She looked up at sky and said, baba ji, he speaks too much. Can't you do anything about it? And almost ran toward her house.

Maan was angry at himself, why did he had to say it so bluntly?

...

Geet was washing dishes when peeno who had just come into the kitchen asked her,'' Everything alright?''

Geet who was thinking about the way she had been feeling toward Maan said defensively,'' Why? I am fine.''

Peeno,''Then, why are you washing clean dishes?''

Geet stared at the plates and then said,'' Amma ji told me.''

Peeno nodded wisely,'' bibi ji, why do you always do weird things to make Amma ji angry?''

Geet didn't answer her. She was not weird.she liked herself very much but that MSk...No geet stop, don't think about him, or him with that baby goat, don't wish he had picked you like that goat and fed you. Don't...wait a moment, did she just thought...stop...no thinking geet, no thinking

...


Please, scroll down for more

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Maan was feeling really heartbroken because his angel may never speak to him again. She had trusted him so much, she was comfortable in his company so that's why she had asked him for help. That too for her beloved pet, but he had broken her trust with being too forward. Although, there was nothing wrong in his intentions, he wanted to marry her. Nothing wrong in that. But she was so innocent, so traditional. Why maan, why?

At that moment there was a knock on door, it was servant with his dinner. He was not in the mood to eat more traditional food. He opened the door to refuse the servant but the pasta on tray caught his attention.

He took the tray and thanked the servant. Pasta, here?

He tentatively took a bite and the taste exploded in his mouth. It was made exactly the way he liked it. He ate heartily. Within 15 minutes, all his food was finished. He almost purred with satisfaction. There was another knock on door. The servant was back earlier than normal.

He got up and opened the door to find his angel standing on door. Yes, he was being sappy but she was just so out of the world.

Geet felt nervous and this made her even more nervous. After thinking about everything she had come to the conclusion that may be she had been too harsh. He did not deliberately eat her rasgulla and he never complain about cutting fodder for dhano. It was her guilty consciousness which was making her think about him again and again. Nothing else, not his dark eyes or big lashes or those bulging muscles or ...Geet focus, she told herself angrily.

Maan stared at her and she stared right back. Both kept staring at each other, finally Geet spoke,'' Thank you for helping me feed dhano and her friends. I made pasta for you today, I know you don't like eating spicy foods.''

Maan felt his heart do a little bhangra in his chest,'' No, I like every type of food. Spicy, mild, depends on mood.'' His voice deepened.

The way his eyes looked at her. Was he talking about food? Or..geet she chided herself, of course, he is talking about food.

Maan controlled himself,'' Thank you for the pasta but how did you know I love it?''

Geet,'' Jiju told di.''

Maan nodded.

They again stared at each other.

Geet,'' I should go now, good night.''

Maan couldn't think of any way to stop her,'' It's only 7 in the evening.''

Geet was quiet for a moment, then she said,'' I sleep early.''

Maan,'' That's good. And what time you get up?''

Geet,'' why?''

Maan replied honestly,'' Just asking, can you stay a bit more to talk.''

Geet looked down at her feet,'' I should go. If someone saw us it would give wrong impression.''

Maan nodded.

Geet turned to go and then stopped, turned to look at him and then left.

Maan wanted to go after her but he knew he couldn't. Think Maan think of a way to keep her.

An idea came to his mind.

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago

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