/\~ff:Simple love~/\NOTE Pg 117/\ - Page 22

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Haya1022bmw

I m loving it more

Thank you!

geet so innocent with naughty mind
hai her rasgolla...

She is really something.

I really loved it
for maan she is his rasgolla
but now he ate her rasgolla
waiting for beets reaction and revenge for her rasgolla
pls update soon
I updated, hope you like it😳



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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely part
Revenge Tasgulle ka😆
Poor Maan kitna kaam kiya par his hard work pay's atlast...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update... Maan is totally smitten by geet... Poor maan came with a plan to meet her n here our geet is planning revenge for a rasgulla... Its hilarious...
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Posted: 7 years ago
what a revenge
Poor Maan but at the end surely managed to win her heart
what more he wants right
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow update here
will read n comment soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
phenomenal update! superbly written! loved it! glad that Dev noticed Maan staring at Geet! Maan has an overactive imagination lol! Geet was sad cos he ate her rasgulla! Geet is certain;y possessive abt her food! nice that Darji was adamant Maan 2 stay there! Maan is just happy so he can be near his Geet! omg Maan certainly has a fan club! he is unaware of his female following drooling on him! seems like only Geet is unaffected! did no expect the great MSK to chop fodder! love makes u do crazy things! Geet was dng this to get revenge! liked that Geet admires Maan and has realised her revenge was so petty! she seems to b falling 4 Maan! continue soon 👏⭐️😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic update ...
Geet wants revenge from maan coz he ate her precious rasgulla 😆 and she got the chance pretty soon..😛
Poor maan he did so much hard work just to impress his angl ..But munde ne finally dill jeet hi li ...I mean to say attention kudi ki 😛
Can't wait for next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
ohhh suoerbbb
maan n his thinking ..she us sad because he is leaving
common maan don't hope so high
but he quiet smart move whole month with her
wah geet and her revenge what a unique way
aur trp baro Mr khurana she is just too cute
maan is gone case in matter of geet
last part very sweet
even um surprised seeing his caring side he was tried so didn't think he will help that goat but he did that was very nice
so finally our Queen see the worth of Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just came across this story today read all parts in a go
Loved the simplicity of this concept
The character sketch of Geet n Maan is also done in a simple manner
Geet being all revengeful for one single rasgulla😆
While Maan being all the rich n arrogant helping her to prepare fodder for all the cows and then simply feeding baby goat till it's full

Liked.the way in first chapter Geet retaliated to Maan's irrational behaviour
Maan was flat since then

I m waiting for next update already, on 16th Jan. Please do PM me buddy

Raahi

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