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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chap 1 - astounding update! beautifully written! loved it! Geet lied she is Naintara! wow Maan mesmerized by Geet! loved how Geet handled Maan! Gosh he did not expect that! I am surprised Geet took the money! Omg Geet lied to Naintara that Dev died as he was bitten by a mad dog 😆 and then Dev appears with family incl MSK with a proposal for Naintara! liked Geet's reaction and her reply 2 Naintara! update asap

Thank you once again! poor maan he will be continuously geet-handled in the story😉😆 . Well, that's geet, see what she will do next... seriously I love her. really funny. I hope you liked next part too😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: samanvi
Awesome prologue and chapter 1 👏
love this Geet of yours❤️
plz continue soon 😊

Thank you 😳... I like this dabang geet too😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan
arrey a new ff.. this was so cuteee hahah love this Geet. Adorable.

Yes, brand new😛😆...she is cute character and someone mentioned in comments, an one of kind piece😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: deep002
Amazing update dear, loved it. ...

Thanks Deepa. I am really glad you liked it.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Geetdrashti
loved it
thnx for update

Thanks dear😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Hilarious update yaar 🤣 🤣
Ye geet toh ek number ki dramebaaz nikli kaha maan use sabak sikhane Aya naintara samajh ke aur ulta usi ka band bajadi gaya 😆
Can't believe geet ne paise rakh liye 😲
And bechari naintara ko bola ki dev is dead aur bhi pagal kutte ke kaatne se 🤣
Mujhe laga ab naintara ka kya hoga but thank god khurana's agaye 😊
And her reply to naintara at the end was epic 😆

Thank you. I am happy you liked it😳...Honestly, everyt ime I watched an indian drama where the girl is insulted for being money hungry, I wanted to write a female character who would give tit for tat, i guess geet has grown up from that part of imagination...she is spontaneous...i hope you like the second part too😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Can't wait to know what happens next
Wanna see maan's reaction after knowing who real naintara is

I hope you liked it in second part, so far he is totally under her charm, lets see how he will cope up with his cutiepie's mischievous nature😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
her reaction to maan so unexpected and damn funny
between maan deserve it first time he faced such thing I guess
geet too good
oops she took the money happily greedy greedy
dev jo maar diya seriously that too by mad dog
poor tara she did believe
baker in law geet come down don't be too greedy
now maan n his family here she is gone

I always wanted my heroine to be able to give back. This time geet is as dabang as possible😆...ohshe is greedy and possessive like a kid...Maan ate her rasgulla, she will not let it go so easily😆...Yes, her ras malai gone too😲...Maan is in big trouble😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: meerasaravanan
supper geet is soo sweet maan reaction is worth to watch.

Thanks for liking both of them😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
geet kis chege ka bana hai
she is damn cute and entertaining
maan got shock by her act surely it's first time
now its time for geet to get shock
her drama n marriage plan for backer totally flop

geet don't get shocked easily but maan managed to break her heart at the end😆