MG FF- Someone Like You THREAD #11

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#301

Wow, a new story a new world!! Tempted to read it right away but I need to give this heart some time to gather some courage to dive into another world. Don't worry, I can't stay away for too long... I know you and you know me 😉

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#302

Beautiful update

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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kansya

@kansya

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#303

A tear droped when i read maan saying geet that he can't see her going...u just used simple words but they are magical words...sida dilko chutha hai aish...superb update...

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#304

Aaj Jumma hai... aaja, aaja, aaja...

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#305

Fabulous update. U r simply magical in your writing. So Aayat & Kabir. Oh Kabir was so lost in her hazel eyes. And Maan is feeling so lost after Geet left. Geet worried as Maan not picking up the calls but Geet has Anna to her rescue. Their conversations r so good. At least it makes Maan to come out of the sombre mood. Btw distance makes the hearts grow fonder.

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#306

Marvelous update. It seems this long distance is hurting Maan more than Geet or else he wouldn't seek solace in Dadima's room. Ana being a good observer informs Geet making her worried and with Ana's help she could talk to Maan and the conversation showed their love and care for each other. About Kabir and Ayat, is there a new love story blooming up? Curious to know who is Ayat whose magical eyes have blown away Kabir. Beautifully written. Loved it.

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#307

wonderful update...loved it...on the way kabir was remembering geet's word about getting a woman to love him back & hope he found ayaat as his gf...nice Turkish verses... very happy if kabir-ayaat side story with maaneet to read...oh no maan was not answering geet's call so she called ana who contacted them... he was surprised to hear from geet about visiting dadima's room when geet told not to visit their as he got depressed...awe loved geet's care for maan...wow he teased her gf which geet became redish.. last part was emotional when he finally told for his not to see her off as he was not ready to see her leaving him but loved this long distance romance(very well described)...excited for next... thanks for pm...!!

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#308

Tummm... pukaar lo. Tumhaara intezaar hai!

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Madhubala

@madhubala123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#309

Yeh dooriyan...in raho ki dooriyan..fana he sabhi dooriyan... 😳

Oh I so love this long distance love story of Maaneet!! I love the fact that it is not cheesy yet there is that romance which resonates with you. And then in the end, you just leave us swooning for more...

It was so easy for Geet to leave NYC. Stupid girl, now come back soon!! 😛

And *drumrolls* Ayat is for Kabir!! Phewww such a relief. I was fearing that you were planning for some MU between Maan and Geet but Thank God!! Kabiraaa is now in love.

It would be so cruel to see their separation now... That prologue is still lingering around.

The way you still manage to make dadima a part of the story is commendable. It makes you feel for Maan and the realisation comes that she is still the moral compass that draws Maan more towards Geet because it makes him realise how much pain she herself is in.

Lovely update it was. Enjoyed it!! 👏

Edited by madhubala123 - 7 years ago