Maaneet FF - Qayamat Se Qayamat tak - Page 2

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Part 1

Maan & Geet are studying in a college.

Dhanraj had killed Vikram for dumping his sister Chaya. She had killed herself for not being with her when she needed him the most.

Dhanraj is in jail. Jaswant Singh had sold the property & shifted to Delhi. He had joined Kamal's textile business & had become a well-known industrialist.

Flashback

Dhanraj and Jaswant are working in a field. One day, a man called Totaram from Raghuveer's side come to give Vikram's wedding invitation card.

Jaswant: That is the great news.

Totaram: You have sent your younger brother Dhanraj to the city side for further studies and got him married. He got a child. You got your younger sister married. She too got a child. Even you get married taking God's name.

All of them laugh.

Jaswant: I have another younger sister named Chaya. Once I get her married, I will marry.

All go home.

At Khurana Mansion

Jaswant meets his friend named Kamal at his place.

Jaswant: How are things in Delhi & how is your business?

Kamal: Everything is fine by God's grace. I suggest that you leave the farming business & join my business in Delhi. You get more money.

Chaya: I don't want to go to Delhi. I am quite happy here.

Jaswant: Don't worry. We won't go anywhere. Kamal, why don't we go for hunting tomorrow?

Dhanraj comes in. He said, "Tomorrow is the wedding."

Jaswant: Oh, I forgot. Tomorrow is Raghuveer's younger brother Vikram's wedding. Just check the time."


Chaya gets shocked.

Meanwhile, at Handa House, the family is selecting jewelry for their future DIL. Dadi selects 3 necklaces & one of the rings. Everyone accepts it. Vikram takes the groom attire for his wedding. He is shocked to see Chaya.

Vikram: How come you are here?

Chaya: I have come to congratulate you on the wedding.

Vikram: Listen, I love you & my family is getting me married to someone else against my wishes.

Chaya: But you have to refuse firmly.

Vikram: They won't listen.

Chaya: Will they not get us married after knowing that I am carrying your child?

Vikram: I know that I have put you in trouble because of me but I have an idea.

Chaya: The idea is I will kill myself. You can freely marry anyone you want.

Vikram: No Chaya, you won't do any such thing. I heard your brother's friend had come from Delhi. You go with them. My friend is there. He knows a doctor & will take you there. The doctor will abort the child. Here is the money for your expenses.

Chaya: I knew that you are spineless but today I came to know that you are a wicked man.

She throws the money on his face & leaves.

Saraswati (Dadi) overhears their conversation & is dismayed about Vikram's action.

At RM

Chaya tells her problem to the family & cries. Dhanraj gets angry to the extent of killing Vikram.

Jaswant: Calm down. I will talk to Vikram's father. He will agree once he gets to know the reality.

Both go to Handa house.

Jaswant: My sister Chaya is pregnant with Vikram's child. I have come here to ask for his hand.

Balwant: Vikram, is it true that you have an affair with Chaya?

Vikram: They are lying. I don't know any Chaya

Dhanraj: She is our sister.

Vikram: She might be but I don't know her.

Jaswant: Is it true that she is carrying?

Vikram: She might be but it is not my child.

Saraswati comes. She said, "I have overheard Vikram's & Chaya's conversation. Vikram had accepted his mistake in front of her & had suggested aborting the child. But since you guys won't believe, why does Vikram undergo a test?"

Vikram: What are you talking mom?

Saraswati: I have heard everything. If you are so sure, what is wrong with getting yourself tested?

Balwant: Fine, the wedding will be postponed. I suggest Vikram & Chaya will undergo the test.

Raghuveer: But one condition. If the child does not belong to Vikram, don't ever show us your face.

The next day, they have the test. The results are out but it proves that Vikram is not the father.

Raghuveer & Vikram talk about the forged pregnancy report.

Vikram: I love Chaya & want to marry her.

Raghuveer: How do you know that she is your child? She is a characterless woman. The child might belong to someone else. You get ready. I will take care of the rest. I have changed the report.

The wedding preparations begin. Chaya kills herself. Dhanraj carries her in front of all & finds Vikram guilty. Dhanraj shoots Vikram & kills him. He gets 15 years sentence.

Flashback ends

Maan is in his final year. All of them are having a farewell party. Geet is in her second year of her degree college. There is a celebration of the farewell party. Maan comes to the stage & sings

Papa kehte hain bada naam karega

Beta hamara aisa kaam karega

Magar yeh to koi na jaane

Ke meri manzil hai kahan

Papa kehte hain bada naam karega

Beta hamara aisa kaam karega

Magar yeh to koi na jaane

Ke meri manzil hai kahan

Papa kehte hain bada naam karega

Baithe hain mil ke sab yaar apne

Sabke dilon mein armaan yeh hai

Baithe hain mil ke sab yaar apne

Sabke dilon mein armaan yeh hai

Woh zindagi mein kal kya banega

Har ik nazar ka sapna yeh hai

Koi engineer ka kaam karega

Business mein koi apna naam karega

Magar yeh to koi na jaane

Ke meri manzil hai kahan

Papa kehte hain bada naam karega

Mera to sapna hai ek chehra

Dekhe jo usko jhoome bahaar

Mera to sapna hai ek chehra

Dekhe jo usko jhoome bahaar

Gaalon mein khilti kaliyon ka mausam

Aankhon mein jaadu, hothon mein pyar

Banda yeh khoobsurat kaam karega

Dil ki duniya mein apna naam karega

Meri nazar se dekho to yaaron

Ke meri manzil hai kahan

Papa kehte hain bada naam karega

Dhanraj has been getting the updates about his son in these years from Jaswant. He gets released after the term. He goes to Maan's college & meets him. Both hug each other.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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