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Loved the story so far. Nice concept. Maan accepts to marry Geet so prem can get a mother. And prem is such a cute child very disciplined.
Geet rejects her marriage to look after her sisters child. But life is too long to stay alone. And accepting Maan's proposal will get her both a husband and a father for pari. But for a father to accept a divorced boy for his daughter is tough. Geet is still young.

Please pm me. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely Teaser
waiting for the chapter
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Lovely Teaser
waiting for the chapter



Thanks
Will update soon 😊
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Originally posted by: preyasekar

I THINK GEET AND PREM WILL GET ALONG WELL WITH EACH OTHER
WAITING FOR UPDATE DEAR



Let see now will she decide
As she had met Prem 😊
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Loved the story so far. Nice concept. Maan accepts to marry Geet so prem can get a mother. And prem is such a cute child very disciplined.

Geet rejects her marriage to look after her sisters child. But life is too long to stay alone. And accepting Maan's proposal will get her both a husband and a father for pari. But for a father to accept a divorced boy for his daughter is tough. Geet is still young.

Please pm me. Waiting for the next update.



Thanks u like the story
Let see what will Geet decide
Also her father is worried for her future
As he has seen her elder daughter suffering so he doesn't want this for her
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awesome teaser!! update soon



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Posted: 7 years ago

Humsafar
Part. 5.

G. It's okk bhai he can call me with my name as he is such as cute baby (she said while cupping Prem cheeks who give her best smile and then say said) and bhai Pari and dad will be alone and it's late so I will eat eat ice cream another time but now so, you all go enjoy and you can come and eat halwa or kheer wherever you want (listening to her all were sad but Prem cutely said her

P. Plese iet {Geet} say yes plese (seeing him like this Geet nodded her head then Armaan said.

Ar. That like my buddy (but Prem said him.

P. Yes buddy like aunty kiss you, she also kiss me on cheeks (listening to this, Armaan closed his eyes, Ridhima gave him glare but Geet smile then Ridhima ask to Prem.


R. Prem baby tell me what happen and who was the aunty who kiss your buddy (listening to her voice Armaan gulped his saliva but Prem give her big smile and then said her.


P. Lidhima chachi me and buddy coming to you, aunty saw us she hug chachu and said Armaan baby Armaan baby, buddy held me but then she kiss me on cheek also kiss buddy and said him to call her poor buddy he made bad face seeing aunty as aunty was looking like a ghost like susu aunty (listening to this Armaan Ridhima laugh seeing them laugh, he also smile but Geet smile listening to his talk then they all had ice cream later they drop her to house after that they left to their house where Prem sleep with Armaan and Ridhima and he tease Armaan as his Lidhima chachi love him more than him, it make all happy seeing him happy and Armaan also loved Ridhima more she love Prem like her own son.

Later she was making the diner and remembering the time with where they all were having ice cream also Prem sweet talk but then she remember about that her father told her what his mother tried to with him and thinking of this it make her sad, then she remember what her jejo did and thinking about it make her scare, she closed her eyes and took deep breath then went call her father for dinner and then after the dinner she took Pari to room where she make her sleep also she remember about purposal also about Prem.

Geet smile when she Pari was sleeping peacefully without having any tension she kiss on her forehead then she went down milk for Pari where she saw her father room light was on, when she saw it hurt seeing her father looking at her sister picture also she remember somethings then enter his room then she took her sister picture from his hand and then make him sit on the bed and what she said him it make shock, he again ask her but then she giving him small smile again she said what she had told before also hugging him she left the room, but her father kept looking at her daughter who become mature and sensible after her sister death.

Other side Prem call Maan and tell him what he did also it make Maan happy that his son is happy but in his heart he was scared what if Prem again ask him about his mother. It was late night Maan was in his room looking at the Prem picture there was small smile on his face as he was missing him but other side he is happy that his child is happy so what for few minutes or for few days he forgot his mother topic also he is worried that how will he handle him in future when he again ask him about his mother, thinking of this he closed his eyes and thought.

M. I hate you if I had I would have killed you as I can forgive you what you did with me but I can't forget what you have done with my son, if you again tired to come back in our life then I promise myself I will never let your shadow fall on my son (he don't know thinking of this when he slept.

Next morning Maan was coming back to office after attending the meeting when he receive the call but what he hear it shock him and he closed his eyes then went went to office where he said to his secretory no one disturb him. He was in his thought as he closed his eyes where he remember that her bua call him who said her that girl {Geet}is ready to marry him.

He open his eyes and tried to read some files but still his thought were about his marriage and he know he again had to get marry but for his baby Prem and with him he will again become father of someone else baby also with that he will again become someone husband as it will be his second marriage but that girl will be first also not much but still she will have little expectation from him as her husband and he don't know is he ready for this or not but now one thing he know that for Prem he can do anything also now that girl is ready to give her mother love to Prem then he will also give her daughter father love also MSK never back from his words and about other can things he leave it on time.

It was a night time Maan was in his study looking blankly to the file but his thoughts were about his marriage also he some where scared that what if Prem doesn't get proper mother then what will happen but his thought were broken by his uncle who put coffee on the table where Maan look at him and pass him small smile, he also sit sit with him and then in silence they had their coffee but then his uncle ask him.

An. Maan what are you thinking (Maan look at him but he continue) I mean do you have second thought about the marriage (Maan slowly said him.


M. No uncle it's not but (he closed his eyes after few seconds he open his eyes and said) nothing uncle I am just little worried about Prem also handling new responsibilities (Anurag smile at him as he understood his concern for Prem.


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