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Precap : "Oye dono ke dono dost ho ke dushman ho tum dono begairat aurtein...Aab main mic leke aau aur speaker pe bolti phiru ke mujhe kitni mohabbat hain...Woh bhi apni hi khud ke pati se...Haww...Kitna bada gunah kar liya na maine...Kiya kahoon?? Ke haan aab toh raato ko neendh nahin aati unke sapno ke bagair...Unke bina kuch aur dikhta hi nahin?? Aur iske baad tum shaitano meri jeena haram kardo hain na??" She sounded so chirpy but the blush on her face was imagined by him distinctly with his eyes getting hazy effortlessly while she spoke further pushing him deep into the very obvious sphere called remorse!
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Sneak Peek~~~~~~~~~~~~~


"Someone said she can't live without me...That she loves me..." Both Meera and Geet heard his defeated voice as soon as they moved their feet!

He calmly looked at a dispirited Geet with his agonized eyes, "Someone promised me they will never leave me...Never...Someone said she is just mine...Only belongs to me..." Causing her astounded by her own heart she discovered herself admiring his childish cribbings! But no it's too late now!

She can't disclose her tears now even if it burns those veins inside her eyes, "That someone..." Maan's breath also got stuck with her pause!

And Finally shattering him once more she completed, "LIED..." With the heaviest stone compressing her!

"Heh" Amidst all this dispute he let a bitter smile escape which had pain written all over it,"You always do this to me...You just lie...You really want to leave me Geet?? Is it about this damn paper?? His ego was fading away with her rejections, "Do hell with this...I don't care...it's not about this don't you realize it damn it..." He fiercely took that cursed report and within seconds tore it apart with sheer rage while his eyes gave up the battles with the tears and let those race without his consent!

"I don't care if you are pregnant or not...But I am not letting you go because of her Geet...I won't..." Gesturing towards Meera he took his steps at Geet's frame when she flashed her palm to him, suspending his approach!

"Now you get this clearly in your head...Yaha se jaane ka faisala mera khud kaa hain Maan...Aur aap mujhe nahin rokenge...I am not your personal property!" Her voice had something!

Something really terrifying! Dark! Repealed! Deadly! Those mystical types where the words literally can numb your veins! Same happened with Maan!

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See dearies, I know we are in a crucial stage here in this story! But to progress the story further this is much needed!

This story is about how fragile our trust can be and even when you love someone from the bottom of your heart still how things can get wrong!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very emotional update. Maan lost all sanity and became blind in his anger and mu. His love for geet has vanished in thin air. Feeling bad for geet. Hope geet goes with but prove her innocense. When he comes to know the truth what can maan do.
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Aaj kya updates ki baarish ho rahi hain
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maan very badly accuse geet in his anger n misunderstanding
he is not ready to listen any thing n see geet's state
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Nice update... Maan may have misunderstood the whole conversation n should have atleast clarified her but i dont think he is the only one at fault.. any person in his place would have took thr same meaning with geet words... She clearly had told she loves dev then what will the person thikns of that statement... He is at fault too becoz he let his anger control him...
I dont like meera interference... Geet all the friends are too nosy.. sometimes i ferl like they dont have tgeir own life n just geet life is there first pinky n now n then meera... She was the one who told about dev at first place... Didnt she know geet is newly married n in which circumstances.. at this time when they needed time n space for eachother she keeps bringing her past infront of her... They can punish dev later too.. now was not the time to discuss him...

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