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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#871

NICE update !!
I guess you are forming a base on how to get this story further without altering the image you have formed of the characters !!
The way you wrote abt geet mingling wit maans family was superb !!!
That is what geet is or atleast in this fiction!!
N the last paragraph where geet expresses that she ll miss him n he expresses it thru his kiss was absolute bang on !!
For maan was never expressive !!
waiting for more!! Update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#872

A Beautiful Chapter

The kiss indeed was perfect and I think though Geet is inexperience it makes it more beautiful because Maan is the only man that has kissed her so for him there will be lots of pride knowing he is the only man doing everything to Geet for the first time

I like how he eases her into comfort

when the time comes for them to make love it would be great if its in Maan's POV

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#873

Fabulous update. Geet got a new job and Maan is supporting her well. The relationship is going strong between them. Maan's family too is fond of Geet , that adds up her happiness. Maan also keeps can eye on her brother Rishab's business.. Love the way the story is progressing.

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#874

Like how their relation is growing .

Their first separation.

Nice update.

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no name

@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#875

lovely update
their relationship going good
loved her equation with his family

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#876

From like to love, is this journey going to be easy or a rocky road? With Maan might not be ready to take the leap... ?

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#877

Thread 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4953441/mg-ff-girl-friday-thread-2-epilogue-pg-146-completed

Edited by Ms.Lizzie - 7 years ago

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#878

sweet update
feeling so good to read their dating phrase
they are so natural now
she having so good bonding with his family that's great
happy that she is applying for new job hope she get one ..
aww 10 days separation

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#879

superb update ...
maaneet's relationship is going smoothly ...
even maan's family is also accepted geet like their long lost child ...all r going good but then I wonder if maan's father going to create any prob ? 10 days gap is actually scaring me :p
p.s. geet was right ...maan is unromantic 😛

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#880

Wow very well written and there is small leap

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