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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_
Part 3
Nice part...
Why maan changed so much?
I'm curious yaar jeni...
Oh! So he is in love with Geet...
Then why so distant?
And whom is he finding?

o my goodness u make us curious with ur updates now am making u itself curious.. wow

u will get to know y this distance

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_
Part 6
Y kya h...
Geet to maan ko bhi nahi chodne vali lagta hai...
dekhte h maan ka kya hone vala h...
maaneet talks are cute... 😊

THANKYOU dear for your comments

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

Maan is happy after speaking to his Misty and Daadima can see this too
though he tries and portray a straight face , Daadima takes this chance and speak
about marriage and finally Maan agrees but he wants time
Geet again calls Maan and I like how he explains her that they are now GF,BF because they are friends now
Maan learns that his Misty is in KM
Geet has taken good care of Daadima and both Annie and Daadima are happy with her care

i was like waiting for your comments... thank u dear keep reading and keep supporting

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yuvashree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#214

PART 7

Banner by lovelyUmang

BANNER by maaneetfavo

KHURANA MANSION:

Maan goes hiding behind bushes and trees to avoid getting caught in eyes of night guards.. After 5min he reaches near a dark cornor behind the mansion where its pipelines are connected... he checks the pipes so that it wont break off when he is halfway up.. he jumps high and get hold of a huge pipe thanks for his 6feet height and workouts that he reached the first floor corridor in just 2min...

he is wearing a track pant and vest his usual night costume. He walks slowly without making noise... now he is thinking in which room geet will be.. he first goes near guest rooms but no one is their then he goes near annies room with a doubt maybe all are sleeping together like in hostel but no... only annie and other girl is sleeping. Atlast their is only 2 rooms left in the floor. One is his old room that he use when he was staying in Mansion and other room next to his...

The door of the room next to him is slightly open so he peeks his head alone to see someone sleeping on the bed curling like a child and covered in duvet upto neck showing her back to him...

There is no one needed to say that its honey to honeybees.. he knows its his princess.. his heartbeat started to raise simultaneously raising his eager to see her. He slowly close the door without making noise so he won't wake her up from her beauty sleep. Each step that he takes toward her is giving a feel of peace to his heart.. he stops his steps in front of the bed facing her...

He is seeing her after 2.5yrs in bones and flesh a long wait... his eyes gets stuck on her frame like making a pencil art of her in his heart to keep this moment a memory lasting forever... he moves towards her and sits on the edge of bed keep looking at her to sequence his thurst and craving for her lively presence in his lonely life. . .

The moonlight that falls on her face works as a makeover on her already angelic face making it glow, the slow breeze flowing through the open window playing with her hairlocks falling on her face creating a small frown on her face making her look exactly like a small kid. .. ... he chuckle mildly and moves his hand closer to her face to move her hairlocks behind her ear letting his fingertips get the bliss of touching her flawless soft fair skin a little long than necessary.

He was about to withdraw his hand when he felt a slight hold on his hand... he is shocked whether she woken up but no she is sleeping holding his hand between her chin and pillow... he gets more and more mesmerised by her acts... he know he have to go now so he slightly blows air on her face from forehead to chin drawing a straight line...

as expected her hold loosed but before he moves back he hear a slow whisper PRINCE DON'T GO he looks at her face shocked and surprised but she was in deep sleep... he smiles and slightly press his perfect M shaped lips for a kiss on her forehead with all his love and promise to meet her soon and goes back to his room as silently as he came.

KHURANA OUTHOUSE

Early morning maan woke up little before his usual time he goes to do his exercise before getting ready. After finishing his exercise he leaves to shower. He moves towards wardrobe to choose his dress. Everyday he usually wear the first dress his hand touches but today is not everyday and he is not like usual today everything is happening unusual. . . He never remember a day after his return himself being this enthusiastic and happy for breakfast in km

He is keep checking one after another dress on himself because he knows first impression is the best impression.. this is not first time he is going to see his misty but for her its first time to see him.

Atlast he choose a white with black formal office wear hopefully... his eyes again and again goes to clock checking time every few minutes once he goes near mirror to set his hair and check himself onelast time before making his biggest presentation of his life yes he is going to present himself before his princess... hundreds and hundreds of thoughts running inside him "what she will call him dd? Will she like me, what if she dont? Etc..." pushing all his thoughts aside he goes near curtain opening it standing before it

Maan's room

"IAM COMING MISTY AS I PROMISED TO ADI NOW I WONT AVOID U..." he said determined tracing her face in frame

Taking his watch wallet and phone from table he starts to move towards the hall when he gets a call he attends it HELLO adi before he continue his talk he bumps with someone..

KHURANA MANSION (7.40am)

Early morning geet wakes up and quickly takes a shower and small prayer to babaji goes to meet dadi and others in hall.. dadi is instructing staffs sees her coming and smiles at her..

Geet: good morning dadi

Dadi: good morning bete.

Geet: Dadi where is pinky and annie

Dadi: they r getting ready will come now...

both annie and pinky joins after few minutes.

Dadi: annie go and call your bhai for breakfast

Geet dont like sending annie alone so she also joined her.

Khurana Outhouse:

Annie and geet enters Outhouse geet was impressed with its interior and checking it out when annie saw someone in hall and goes there to see adi and start to talk with him..

Geet goes to first floor corridor painting handing on walls and suddenly bumps on someone and was closed her eyes fearing the fall but it dint happen instead she felt two hands holding her securely... she opens her eyes to see a man looking at her straight to her hazel eyes with intense black eyes she lost herself in his magnetic eyes...

their world stoped for both untill they heard someone calling them... Both turned still in same position to see annie and adi standing few feets away gasping at them ...

Sensing their position maan straighten them both turns can't able to face the teasing face of their friends... geet leave from there immediately... maan keeps looking at her retreating figure...

Annie: bhai... how r u

Maan: hmm... am 5n angel, how are you

Adi: can we continue our chat after breakfast someone is waiting...

Annie give a confused look for his statement while maan glare at him..

Adi: i mean Dadi will be waiting for us.., what say maan

Maan: yeah.. lets go

KHURANA MANSION

Trio enters km to see geet and pinky chatting with Dadi and she laughing on seeing maan geet stops. Dadi and pinky turns to see what happened to see Msk coming in...

Pinky: Dhak dhak(dd) says dreamily

Geet mummers haan haan dhust dhanav which maan standing between dadi and her hears he is trying hard to control his smile...

Annie: bhai meet my friends pinky and geet.. and turns to them to introduce Msk

Pinky: Dont even think... who dont know dd i mean MSK,

Annie: ok ok... but meet my other bhai adithya.

Pinky and geet: hai adi,

adi: hai geet, hai pinky

They all goes to have breakfast ( msk in head chair geet to his right dadi to his left annie and adi next to dadi pinky next to geet ) Staffs servers all and left.

Geet: Dadi km and Outhouse both are super its structure and interior are wonderful.. am going to miss you and this house from tomorrow

Dadi: thankyou bete, you can come here whenever you want. I will also miss u all

Geet: i dont think Mr.Khurana will like us coming her often Dadi
maan doesn't like her calling him mr.Khurana. more than that why will i stop her coming here.

Dadi: y do you say so geet.. did maan said anything to you bete

Geet:No Dadi he dint, but i doubt because i see Mr.Khurana liking to stay alone... before Dadi could answer maan spoke

Maan: Nothing like that you, you can come anytime u wish.. you r annies friends and this is her home

GEET: when she herself is staying in hostel with us leaving her home. how can we come her. i know some security reasonz .. Annie signals geet to stop not to make her upset geet stops..after few minutes of silence

pinky: how did you get to wake up on time today?

Annie: haan geet what happened to your dream prince, he left you?

Dadi maan and adi all looks at geet with shocked expression.

Dadi: geet u dint say to me about your someone special..

maans expression changed into pain thinking about his geet liking someone else

geet:Dadi he is my prince who comes in my dreams i myself haven't seen him... and annie my prince never leaves me not after what happened yesterday she smiles with shyness
all become curious to know why this reaction

Annie: what happened yaar?

geet explained in detail what all happened yesterday night someone entering her room to kiss on her forehead... all are looking at her as if watching a horror movies climax
more than all maan was looking at her with shock for thinking him as her dream...

geet: i never felt his presence so real, i felt he was right there in my room. everything was like happened for real... i think its magic of km if i stay her for few more days i will find him soon i guess. my dream prince she said dreamily

annie and pinky: Geet it may be some thief na.. and teases her.. geets face falls hearing about her prince..

Not knowing her prince is keep looking at her sitting next to her and smiling seeing her. right at the moment he wants to take her away from whole world to some place where only they 2 exist... maahi...

Dadi:ok now all eat no more talks and teases

Later all settled in hall where annie adi maan and Dadi talking to eachother after a long time... geet has seen annie missing her family since she started staying in hostel from past 6months...

Dadi: so now all get ready for your next plan

Geet: No Dadi some other time feeling lazy, today fully i want to spend with you after exams we will go.

pinky and Annie: lazzzy geet

Geet: Oiiie am not lazy, here i reschedule my plans so you get time with your always busy bhai but you. she turns to Dadi for support with a cute frown

Dadi: ok ok.. dont tease my geet.

Annie: haan Dadi how can i not tease geetu madam after what i saw today morning

Dadi: today morning what happened annie

geet jumps in between nothing Dadi and points maan with her eyes. which dint go unnoticed by maan who was pretending to read newspaper.. but his eyes ears and heart dint leave his misty from the time he entered km... he is enjoying her antics like kids enjoy cartoon shows, her smile her frown her care for annie and Dadi..

Annie brings her family photo album to show to her friends her mother father dadaji... geet and pinky know they all died in an accident along with adi's parents when annie was 11years old. she saw the surrounding turning emotional

geet: annie your mom and dad are looking like an ideal couple... your mom is so beautiful and your dad is handsome. but i have a doubt

Annie: what doubt geetu

geet: Dadi, why do ur grandkids dont looking either beautiful(looking at annie)or handsome(looking at maan)

hearing this annie starts to chase her all are enjoying there bonding.. adi also started to admire geet, only she can bring back happiness in this family all are enjoying...
later annie also spend full afternoon speaking to her bhai about her studies, exams etc.. adi geet and pinky also become friends and shared numbers,

after early dinner which maan and adi avoided, knowing their habit dadi dint force them, before leaving annie explained what she saw today morning in Outhouse both are elighted as they wish seems possible now...

maan and adi dropped all three in hostel...

Precap: MAAN getting a call from Australia? guess who it will be.

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago

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preyasekar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#215

WOW VERY NICE UPDATE WAITING FOR THE REACTION MAANEET MEETING

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#216

marvelous update! well written! Maan sneaks into KM and admires a sleeping Geet! wt happened on that day? update soon

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Sudha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#217

Late entrant into your ff.

Very nice concept, little mysterious. Wondering what happened in Australia, what is Maan being so secretive about..

lots of doubts, and questions.. how does Maan know Geet and love her, whereas Geet is not even aware of his existence.

Waiting for more to unravel in the story..

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#218

Nice update Yuvi

Liked it !!

Maan sneaks into KM to see Geet. He admires sleeping Geet was felt contented seeing her after years. So, he has seen Geet before too. Maan wanted to impress Geet with his best look and personality and was lost with her thoughts. So, Geet is unaware of his existence whilst he loves her. Geet perspective about Maan didn't change and questioned him about Annie's stay at hostel.

Nice pics.

Looking forward to the next update

:))

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#219

Lovely and Vibrant Chapter

I really liked how Maan sneaked into KM just to admire his princess

while she is dreaming about her prince and she could actually feel his

presence too around her now that already is great

moring came with new hopes and Maan was excited like a teenager smiling and been happy

just at the thought that his Misty is in his home

Maan shocked to know that Geet has a prince and thought of him as a dream

but I'm also sure he liked her thoughts as she says her prince was with her , kissed her forehead

Geet knows that Annie has missed her family so making an excuse so Annie spends quality time

with them was really great .

Annie tells Daadima what she has seen in outhouse and both are happy maybe their dream

of having Geet as Maan's wife will come true

a call from Australia is this about the mission that both Maan and Adi has been working on

is it dangerous to the people close to Maan

will be waiting for the next chapter

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nadia khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#220

Awesome update maan sneak in geet room to see his mishty after 2 yes he was staring at her Geet dreaming about her prince maan kissed her forehead and left he even wore good clothes to impress his jaan who bumped into him giving him a good morning geet telling about her dream prince she felt maan last night shocking maan but he loved her cute antics falling in love with her more geet could see how much Annie craved for family love

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