Mortal Promises!#T3!*UPDATED CH41,42 @pg121[CH40, Eb1@pg55,85]T4 added

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Iptida

Tum dono bacchio ka res kabtak milega mujhe! 😆
I am now focusing on that! 🤣

Maine unres kardiya baby

Check page 25 😊

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#162

Adorable is the only word that comes to my mind reading this chapter

Lovely scripted

Continue soon buddy

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

fantastic update...the flashback of their childhood and the day they confessed was very sweet...geet was childish and her dreams regarding marriage was as cute as a naive child but for Maan it was his aim to fulfill all her dreams...I just loved the way Maan explained her the difference between ishq pyaar and Mohabbat and they shared their first kiss😳 their love for each other is so divine since childhood they love each other and Maan has claimed her as his Dulhan since the day she was born she is Maan ki geet since then and forever and he so possessive about her that is why he doesn't wants her to talk to Dev as he can feel he has some feelings for her and this is what he was saying when they had that fight regarding Dev...Maan was ready to have any punishment for hurting his doll though unintentionally but his sweet wife can't be angry on him for long and seeing his love for her how can anyone punish him as all he deserves is just love...Maan was so happy seeing the gifts she brought for him as they are priceless for him and geet asked him to make her wear the bangles he brought for her...just loved the update thnx for the pm dear...

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Beautiful gif !!

Loved the way u have highlighted blue color dear with black & white background touch.

Splendid update dear

Loved it!! Eloquently penned.

One of the best chapters of MP.

Maaneet's love for each other was expressed and protrayed exquisitely. The depth of their relationship was beautifully shown through their gestures and words for each other. The beauty of Maaneet's relationship is that their heart beats for each other filled with myriad of emotions and love. Their life has been anchored around limitless bliss that their love for each other defines their romantic streaks and their passion for each other. Loved their sweet and cute distinction between ishq, pyaar and Mohabat. Geet was naive and innocent to understand Maan's words but could sense and understand his amorous love that he harbours for her from the bottom of his heart and soul. Loved Maan's possessive traits for his doll. Even after lots of love and assure filled words from Geet, Maan couldnt stop cribbing about Geet and dev's friendship. Finally Geet filled in details about dev's proposal fiasco to Maan making him feel relaxed and contented. Loved their cute cribbing and rants. Maan was pretending to be angry on her whilst Geet was pacifying him with her cute antics and sweet words. Her each actions melts him. Geet made his day more bright and happy by presenting him her gift, her demeanor brought beautiful smile in Maan's face. Loved the way he made her wear bangles with all his love and admiration.

This chapter was like a sense of expressing their ever lasting love for each other in graceful and elegant way!! Poetry in motion. ❤️

Thanks for the beautiful dedication Ipti. Best gift ever !!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#165

hi there! thanks 4 the pm! wonderful gif! mind blowing Maaneetlicious update! excellently written! Loved Maaneet's explanation of Ishd, pyaar aur mohabbat! Maaneet love is pure and selfless! liked how he showed the depth and sincerity of their intense love! Maan loves his doll so much! indeed Maan ki Geet... glad that Geet expressed her feelings so freely! Maan certainly possessive abt his Geet! Geet explains abt Dev! Geet cribs when Maan wants her 2 concentrate on her studies! Maan just adores his Mishty and her antics! ahh fav scene when Maan complained 2 Geet's babaji! fab moments! Maan's world revolves around Geet! beautiful confession! Maan apologises for hurting her and she assures him! Geet decides to give Maan the gift now rather than wait! Geet knows him so well! he is awed by her gift! he made her wear the bangles and Geet overwhelmed! indeed serene loving moments! Geet's thoughts well portrayed! update asap

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#166

Beautiful Chapter

Filled with so much of love , I loved the explanations on Ishq , Pyaar , Mohabbat

Maan been possessive over his innocent Doll I loved that too and her explanation about Dev

that was good .

oh how both express their love they have such purity in them

Oh and how he apologizes to her that was so endearing and I loved how Geet tells she loves him the most in the world

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#167

geet not only you

we also love maaneet so much

beautiful part

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Beautiful , lovely n mind blowing update

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#169

Very cute update...

sry for late & short reply.. Have exams going on

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#170

Super update
So cutely Geet trapped him with her words n so many questions, naughty maan answering in his own way. It's a beautiful update, just went in flow still wanna read more
Waiting for next update

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