Predestined!#T3!*TEASER @144[CH 43,CH44@pg 99,127]21st Nov

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AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: Iptida

I loved it..
I will reply soon!!😳

will be waiting 😳

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chaitalip

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Posted: 7 years ago

#892

Omg

Awesome update

Drastic change of events

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: Iptida

MP - Yes it is my first baby indeed!! 😃

Wow already have started reading it... Shall wait for your feedback then!!
For some reason that one is apparently everyone's 1st inclination!!
So if you too feel the same give me some insight as in why!! 😆 I am still trying to figure that out! Cause I am clearly inclined towards PD more!! how biased of me!! 🤣 lol

Thanks for all the replies sweets!!

Well...MP maybe all readers who follow you had their first impressions thro MP that's why they are so inclined to it...I bet even if you are more inclined to PD, your First love for writing would be MP only...isnt it?? 😉

Sure...will read and update for MP and Amorous Elixir...😛

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Tris

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Posted: 7 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: Iptida

Thank god!!!
Tum toh maan gayi now am worried about roopa woh toh maan ko kaccha chaba jayegi!!🤣

I am on team maan 😉
N ur ff maans r all very sorted n level headed so i m not going 2 judge him just becaus of 1 or 2 blundrs
Roopa kyu kacha chaba jaegi?
She will undersnd 2
Par agar tumne maneet ko alag kia na ipti tmhari khair nai

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#895

aww.. wht is happening..

Maaneet are so much in love..& Maan sees her pregancy report then her talks of loving someone else.. made his blood boiled .. he is so much angry & hurt that he cannot able to hear Geet's side..
its shocking..

thnx for pm.. waiting for next part

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Shaun

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Posted: 7 years ago

#896

Maan and Geet deeply in love and now both preparing breakfast when Geet gets a text message from Meera now I would have thought Geet will be much more open and trust Maan enough to tell everything I'm not sure why in relationships always unnecessary issues occur

but what was Geet talking about Dev I mean she said she loves him right then how can her husband trust her when she herself says those words

then there is a pregnancy report that confirms Geet been pregnant and this was even before they consummated

now Maan is totally broken once again he is betrayed and surely now he will not give Geet a chance to explain anything she did have time in the morning and every other day

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#897

Terrific update dear

Loved it!! Intense writing.

Didn't anticipate twist at this phase dear. Loved the twist and turn to the core.

Maaneet were still in their buoyant and passionate world in each other's arms. Loved Maan's impish self when it comes to teasing Geet. Geet tried to initiate convo regarding Dev with much hesitation and courage but alas Maan's work came up interrupting Geet's thoughts and convo she initiated. Maan was happy and contented to return back home to his love but alas his happiness was short lived when he came across pregnancy report and Geet's one sided convo. Loved the way you have protrayed Maan's tempestuous and tantalizing state that he felt hallucinating Sameera mocking and deriding him. Maan is totally broken and shattered with thoughts that Geet betrayed him. He trusted Geet with his profound love and last ounce of his breathe hearing Geet's words slaughter him and added fuel to his annihilated self and thoughts. Maan's reaction is justified and can understand his reaction apropos to his unpleasant past which is still haunts him. Maan's conduct his due to the scar his past as left on him , which still beats inside him like second heart to remind him that his past is real and dealing with crime branches he is bound to act and doubt on her. Hope soon or later Maan let's his past go. Geet was livid to witness Maan in wretched state and wanted to justify thyself but alas Maan wasn't in state to listen her justification. Maan's sheer agony and emotions are well protrayed.

Geet would never betray him even in her dreams. Geet's talk and words on phone will have some reason behind it and regarding pregnancy report guess it's some misunderstanding or someone trying to play dirty with her to demean her or it's her and Meera's foreplay to plottings against Dev. What role play does Arjun as in Geet's life and his participation with dev !!? Hope Arjun isn't another antagonist in Geet's life.

Loved Maaneet's scene and their cute bickerings in their parallel world .

Thanks for the fantastic chapter

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: solaceMG

I am on team maan 😉
N ur ff maans r all very sorted n level headed so i m not going 2 judge him just becaus of 1 or 2 blundrs
Roopa kyu kacha chaba jaegi?
She will undersnd 2
Par agar tumne maneet ko alag kia na ipti tmhari khair nai

Last line!! 🤣🤢😭

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#899

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Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Well...MP maybe all readers who follow you had their first impressions thro MP that's why they are so inclined to it...I bet even if you are more inclined to PD, your First love for writing would be MP only...isnt it?? 😉

Sure...will read and update for MP and Amorous Elixir...😛

May be that could be one reason! Though I anticipate it's because of the childhood plot! But you are right too!!

Underline - Hehehe...No...My preferences always fluctuate! And Mp has a permanent place but technically it's not my first story if I shall be honest... You see my IF joining date? I wrote some story at that time actually and was making vms but then did not have feel like being here...
Also stopped writing after 5 to 6 chapters...
Then this year july I again had urge to write as I was getting pissed because of the whole Indonesia fiasco happening.. It stirred the fan in me to the extreme level, I guess! So in that context first is not applicable but yes I would still consider MP first since I published that first! But Mp has some place in my heart it's inexplicable!! ❤️
LOL enough with my bakbak!! 😊 🤣

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