Predestined!#T3!*TEASER @144[CH 43,CH44@pg 99,127]21st Nov - Page 88

Originally posted by: solaceMG

1st of all thnx a lot 4 such huge ud
Its a treat 2 read like this n thax 4 not stopping between the ud
Its a shocking blockbuster episode according 2 me
Totally perfect if i talk 4m the story pov n i did not even dreamed of happening this
What a twist my god! Superb
Tho i am extremely shocked n shaken that u just created a mu in my favorite story n fav version of maaneet
But i cant clap enough how wonderfully its been written 👏
Maaneet r still lost in their passion land n he is so caring all he cares about is her well being
A very gd husband n she is no less
She has become a lot bold n comfortable with her beloved hubby
He did not let her cook even so adorable
She got text 4m meera about dev n meera is right
So geet wanted 2 tell maan about dev but his work calls him and he leaves
He planned a surprize 4 his jaan n comes back with a jovial heart
He thought 2 surprize her further so he tiptoed n entered their home
There he saw an envelope n got 2 know geet is pregnant
Shocked 😲 why why why
I m sure its a mu she is loyal 2 him i am hoping there is no twist in this
I think the report must be wrong or sameera is behind it cause she recently called maan
Maan is in denial he could not even process then he hears geet saying awful stuff over phone
Who is she talking 2? Who else calls n knows maan is khadus?
Geet says she loves dev n 2 get him back she is ready 2 take any step 😭
Ye sunke mere ko rona arahi hai maan ki halat to me soch bhi nai parahi hu
Maan called her name n she is stupefied seeing maan
Geet's reaction in this whole update shows that she is pretty baffled n us ko samjh nai arhai hai k is cjiz ko wo deal kaise kare
Maan k lie i feel cry my heartbeat totally increased 4m the momenr he is remembering everything releated 2 geet n her love
I just loved it how beautifully you prtrayed maans broken state of heart
Awsmely done with dramatic touch
Geet ki me apse pyar krti hu ye line kan me gunjh raha
memories r hunting him then he snaps n remebers sam
Imagines how she must b laughing because of his broken trust
I can understand maan i dont blame him 4 such reaction cause his character is like that only
N he does have trust issues from the start
bt he should at least give geet a chance n listen 2 her
Bt since he thinks she betrayed him n that one line dev ko pane k lie kuch bhi karehi so maan is not trusting her
Another parallel universe me ek aur lovely maaneet
Pd me promise tutne ki bat ati hai kyu ki geet ka wada maan ko yad ata hai then use shayed lagta hai promises bas tutte ha
I love our mp maaneet with all my heart yaha bhi dadi ko judge bana k tom n jerry fighting
Mortal promises part was excellent loved it. Do show more parallel maaneets
Geet is afriad seeing maan like that all froze then wo chillati hai n maan shuru karta hai apni swal
Is is totally heartbroken
Awe he even cried 😭 kyu babaji kyu aisa huua mere maanet k sath aosa
Maan wants 2 hate geet because even after all this all he is feeling is love
I feel he is very distrbed by sam n has intense trust issue
Because i dk what happen what happen with him
So cant reallu judge him
Geet tries 2 calm him but nothing is working at this moment maan is veey hurt probably most hurt till
aftr this super dhamakedar ud cant wait 4 the next ine
Plz update soon this was epic one
I loved the sudden twist n waiting 4 story 2 reveal
Thanx a lot fir this epic story n ud
Wairing eagely 👏 👏

Originally posted by: peru.c.patel

Nice update

Originally posted by: solaceMG

Mera sir ghum raha hai
Me thodi der bad aungi
Plz check pm

Originally posted by: Iptida

😭 do you hate it??
This was the very base plot of this story!! 😕

Originally posted by: solaceMG

Ye kia kia tumne 😭
Itna acha lovey dovey the dono
Buhuhuhuhuh
😕 😭

Unexpected twist to a lovely romance
Why geet talked in phone like that is still a mystery which might be cleared layer on
And about man hope he is able to bear this pain till truth comes out

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

OH Ipti

Sorry doll...I went into a shock (Actually went into coma for some time...I mean...i went to sleep...🤣) and thanks to this fresh morning and I am giving my comments in detail..

Coming to the update, I didnt hate it dear...it was amazing and well written and their turmoil and emotions are well explained.

After a long time you have included Maneet from other world..just liked it...😳

Hmmm...comming to Geet...I am sure all what Maan has heard her talking is a false...

How can she be pregnant and that too 3 weeks? Something really confusing here...

Moreover, she tried to talk to Maan about something related to Dev and unfortunately there was a knock in the door and Geet couldn't talk about it... and when Maan comes back to give a sweet surprise to Geet...he gets engulfed with so many negative things around.. His past experience with Sameera is also adding fuel to the negativity.

Now, what will happen? I am sure Geet is not pregnant...Wish this misunderstanding gets cleared as early as possible.

Waiting for the Precap and next update.😊

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hello sweets,
🤗 Good noon! Hope you are fine...Replied you on page 125 as well!!

I haven't read it completely yet...I tried last night and yeah I also went to coma I mean I too slept 🤣

Geet - Of course the talk she had over phone that has another side as well!! 😉
Otherwise the story telling would have been different from my side!

Pregnancy - well well!! The very next two updates shall clear it!

Maan - I know a lot of stories must have Maan's past and PD too has since it's a parallel concept, however his past is something dark. Plus he works in a crime branch right so he is bound to have frail trust!! On the top- how long does he know Geet??

Underline- Red > Aww I am glad that you liked it...It's from my another story which you put into your reading list - MORTAL PROMISES 😳

Violet > I seriously don't like dragging things...Sobbing stories or stretching a thing...But at the same time I shall try to keep it real as well! The MU is going to be cleared within next 2 to 3 updates that's what I can say!!

Thanks a lot sweetie for such wonderful response!! ❤️ I am glad that you liked it!

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Buhuhuhu Aab yehi toh plot hain😭
Thoda sa jhel lo beta!!😆</font>

Plot awesome hai 😉
I loved the twist kyu ki its unexpected