Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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iifr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#321

superb update

geet is coming in pleasant mood at college without knowing what store her for today poor her

i just hate that sasha and riyana dumb and thick headed😡

Such a horrible trick play by them on geet because she have maan attention and on top of that they make her fall down😡

maan come in nick of time to save and cover the damage inflicted upon geet

Poor geet she is humiliated in front of all class

Maan helped her and that stupid bimbo shasha want to be in geet place such a despo😡

Geet should take action against them and maan should not leave both of them

Maan loved geet so much without caring of smell he carry her😊

Geet is also in confused state

Maan is taking geet home and trying his best to talk to geet

But geet is very ziddi type and hurt very much😕

Maan is telling geet about her GM decision still geet is angry

Maan is so much possessive about geet and start to kiss her and still geet is not melted😆

They share very close and intimate kind of relation

Come on geet now you should forgive maan becoz he is also hurt by ur behaviour

Thanks for pm

Edited by iifr - 8 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#322

sasha n riyans played prank on geet

maan savr her but she think maan is behind it

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Jasbir Kaur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#323

Awesome update dear n thanx for pm

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Finally u r back with your super awsme ud
Fantastic chapter. M just loving how with each ud new shades of maaneet in bein introduced
After reading this one i am a little confused with maan n geet ok uspe bad me ati hu
Geet k maan se shayed karib hone k wjah se uski ullu jaise classmates ne usko target ki so she was bullied by them n maan came to save his damsel in distress
The way maan didn't even care abt anything n took geet into his arms that alone shows he is deeply in love with her. My god ekbar bhi usne koi smell kisi chiz ki fikar nahi ki. He even opened his shirt and geet ko dhak diya usse. Bichari geet feel so bad for her.
Maan na srif geet se bohot jayda payar karta hai blke boht hi saccha selfless purest form of love hai uska jo k hmre mom dad humse karte hai
The way you have depicted the whole scene that is just commendable.. this is why i wait 4 ur each ud
Maan is takinv geet home n raghav ko bhi pata chalta hai n all phir maan is again trying 2 make geet talk 2 him
But what is geet's prb ok may b she is immature n so being stubborn par maan aw kitna cute n possessive hai
So geet does find him hot
Acha ye sasha aur riyana ke baat k bad m more sure that geet ne maan ko galat samjha hoga kyu ki yaha sasha is totally sounding like a despo
Maan is very much possessive n he does miss her a lot
Loved the line where he is feeling that she is his elixir. Just beautiful.
Confusion wala part ab hai geet n maan seem very ease with their closeness aisa kia wo bachpan k dost hai is wajah se hai or they r bf gf? Kyu ki the way maan is holding authority over geet its like that
Aur phir he kissed her as well. When he is whispering that part dont compel me wala he is brushing his lips with geet right..that is damn romantic made me feel chills geet is so strong
Mai hoti to kab ki melt ho jati waise wo bhi freeze ho gai thi par what does she mean by dont you do that again , when maan was staring at her lips? They seem really in love, sharing a intimate bond but unaware of their love for each other.
Overall its a passionate chapter. Loved it to the fullest.
Thx 4 pm and ud.love u ipti 4 giving us such wonderful writing

Hi baby,

Maan- of course he is a possessive soul. Just imagine him being all alone since childhood and Geet being only the source of his warmth so how much caring he would turn out for Geet you can perceive.

Geet - Well, she is just hurt cause she too loves Maan extremely very much hence is afraid to give in.. She is afraid that he might leave her again..
Her side is going to be revealed very soon.

Your confusion - Yes, they are intimate because of their friendship... Do they love eachother as lovers?? I don't need to tell that i guess the chapters would answer them and so shall the readers...
What do you think?? I am leaving this fact totally onto my readers and their individual thinking. And Yes, when he was whispering those possessive terms to Geet indeed he was brushing his lips with her lips... And what she meant by that don't do it again shall be revealed too...

Thank you sooo much for such a lovable awesome biggg comment.. I really appreciate it baby!! Love you a lots too!!! ❤️

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Already waiting 4 next

Once it hits 60+ likes you will receive an update baby! 😃

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: vrishtigoel
Omg this story is just amazing
But before saying anything I have a small confession to make
U know.. I am so much in love with "mortal promises".. that since u were not able to update that because of your other stories.. I had kinda developed an unexplainable dislike towards this new one even without reading it.. (soo sorry).. i came here only for the pm.. but once I started reading it .. I read all the 5 parts in one go.. it really surprised me and kept me totally hooked.. even if its set in a school backgroudi love the intensity with which these two feel for each other.I am totally looking forward to this story
It's really different from the usual stories I find.. and indeed very well written.. simply love maan and geets characters..

Hello dear, welcome to Amorous elixir!!
I am glad that you are liking it so far and it kept you hooked!! 😊

Your confession - Hehehe that's a cute one...😛 Though you got one thing wrong. I was not updating MP because of the low response dear... Also My interest moved from that one... As I am writing all these stories and all of these 5 stories are my babies!! But I also get some preference with some story line!!! So no...Not because of these new stories I was not holding MP... May be I love MP more too hence I am careful with it's updates!! 😳😃

Thanks a lot for your comment. Hope I can live upto your expectation!

Underline- Thanks just took me to cloud nine!! Thanks again!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Such a stale prank it was
Maan n Geet got some time n Maan spoke all his heart to Geet
Along with kisses n the lip one too...😳

Gosh!! Finally someone noticed the kisses!! 😆

Thanks a lot sweets for your lovely comment! 😳

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

commented on chap 4 on page 39

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: fict
Awesome part. Geet became a target because of Maan's attention but loved the way he took care of her afterwords. They do share a very strong bond and thats the reason hurts also are big. Past revelations make it clear that Maan was forced to move and now that he is back, he is going to claim her as his. waiting for next.

Underline - Absolutely right!👍🏼

Thanks a lot for your awesome comment!

Yes shall update soon!! 😳

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#330

Yeh school Hai ya koi mazak Hai jha k student is tarah ki harkatey kartey Hai
Where is school authorities and teachers
Jha par do student asey behave Kar rahi Hai jaisey k they are world's Queen grrr
Kissi ko hurt Khushi Kasey milrey Hai yaar
Geet accusing maan wow now where this came from
Am sure he insanely deeply and passionately possessively love with geet