Dastaan E Mohabbat/pt 8/pg51/3feb

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

maan told geet he took that decision only to save hr from that vickram he don't accept that

relation but he ready to take hr responsibility but geet refused to take favour after that bz now he have no right geet left him

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Congratulations on new story

Prologue is Interesting while Character sketch

is awesome

Maan going to marry soon

Geet is an orphan and has a daughter too

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Part 1

Maan takes Geet as his friend while she takes him as her husband

she remembers that he said she is his wife and no one should say anything against her

but then she also remembers he saying it was a mistake

Maan wants her to stay for his marriage while she is deeply hurting

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Chapters 2-3

Geet had seen Brij misbehaving with a girl but he claims its his wife

now they wanted Geet to marry an elderly man while Maan still in the village

so he decided to save her once again but failed to realized that by filling her partition

she would always belong to him

for Maan the act was just to save Geet but now her husband rejects her and she feels its best that

they go they separate ways

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jasika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Ok so another new story! Congratulations.😃

C 1 good start. Lovely update.

Geet is Maan's sec and she is managing his wedding. Poor little things.

If Maan doesn't remember their marriage then I am anticipating he was under some narcotics or somethings and was probably with her for one night.

C 2 Maan saves Geet from Brij. Maan marries her out of pity just of the sake to save her from the disgusting villagers. Good part.

C 3 Sad part. Maan tells Geet that he did everything to save her. While she is in tears as she mended himself as her husband. Aww sad for her. Maan is quite immature cause even he tried to save her or doesn't regard her as his wife at least he should have consoled her. But he just left.

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I am amazed to see how you manage to remember so many plots altogether. great job by you.👍🏼 I am having difficulty remembering which one i am following or not...hehe

But i can understand you as when I sit to write so many plots distract me as well!!

Thanks for the pm dear. Continue soon. 😊

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Thanks for the pm dear

Update was really very nice

Loved itt soo much

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: cutical
Ops geet luv maan but maan going to marry that nikita
Maan married gewt to save her
Di plz nt make maan ma...y to nikta in tgese two yrs maan nt fewl any thin fr geet plz let nt happen this marige
Dobt want to cry mre n depress plz dont gave us a saddy sadsy uodate
Maaneet ko mika fo or nikkta ko nikal fo im nt liking het plz bring a twist n let happen tge marrife maan with nikita
Plz its a request plz...

wo toh baat ki baat hai

phle past to h pdle lo pura

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Iptida
Ok so another new story! Congratulations.😃

C 1 good start. Lovely update.
Geet is Maan's sec and she is managing his wedding. Poor little things.
If Maan doesn't remember their marriage then I am anticipating he was under some narcotics or somethings and was probably with her for one night.

C 2 Maan saves Geet from Brij. Maan marries her out of pity just of the sake to save her from the disgusting villagers. Good part.

C 3 Sad part. Maan tells Geet that he did everything to save her. While she is in tears as she mended himself as her husband. Aww sad for her. Maan is quite immature cause even he tried to save her or doesn't regard her as his wife at least he should have consoled her. But he just left.

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I am amazed to see how you manage to remember so many plots altogether. great job by you.👍🏼 I am having difficulty remembering which one i am following or not...hehe
But i can understand you as when I sit to write so many plots distract me as well!!

Thanks for the pm dear. Continue soon. 😊

yhi toh

when u write

u get many new ideas

thank u so much liking this story

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priya_pmlist

@priya_pmlist

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: etrika
Congrats for the new story
Read the parts...maan getting married to nikita😡
But married to geet also but just to save her..
Sad to see them part ways...but their destiny will bring them back together...

Waiting 4 next 2 c where geet goes

Do add me in ur pm list

thanks dear

adding in list done