MG FF - HOW TO NAME IT? - UPDATED PART 11 & 12 PG 83 Dt. 23rd August.

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

#411

Ajay now having wrong company mehga and hr gang behind ajay's money vishal try to make him understand but he become blind in mehga

Ajay lost check and again went to Rita whom can do anything to become Maan's wife

Ajay using hr weakness fr his favor he knows very well his bro never ever fall fr that rita

Maan Geet duno ka ek hi hal subah lazy ho gaye or udhte he they think to call each other

Maan send hr hi massage rahul came fr meeting amd hehave no mood of meeting he only their to inquiry about Geet and the way rahul fr Geet address Maan lose his patient's and beat him Ajay and Louis have to stop him

Maan try to divert Ajay frm just happened he gave him lecture on office work but then even Ajay asked him about girl which Maan said personal question at home

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Moumina

@Moumina

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#412

Hey thanks for pm

Lovely story loved it..

Will be waiting for your update.

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#413

Wow such a nice update glue to screen till I finish reading in one go

This update is showing charecter of Ajay and warning bell is lingering on 2 brothers relationship , I think Riya and Ajay were Dating and he must have given cheque to ria in Nasha by thinking it is money so why he has to give Ria money? My guess is that Ria must be pregnant by Ajay's Child Ajay has ditched her for Meghana and may have told her take this money and don't show me your face again , to because of all this happening Riya is remaining lost all the time, and has gone under depression due to Ajay's betrayal.

Here Meghna Is using Ajay for his money and other friends too doing g same, Vishal being child hood friend give right advice but pyaar Mae pagal Panchi raah bhatak Gaya hai aur Ek ladki ke liye Apne Bhai kio bhi dhokha deneko taiyar Hua hai.

If Vishal is his true friend he should inform Maan about Ajay doing wrong thing otherwise this gang will destroy Ajay and Maan both people's life

their relation will strend and we will see fight between brothers.Here Ajaya's charecter is showing very mean.

He is playing double game one side convince mind he is changed and has come to join office where as he came for blank cheque this point doesn't go in mind as Maan like perfect business peiplp will never sigh on blank cheque they know consequences so here I find one small blooper.on the whole update was very good

Don't delay in update at least I will be happy if u will update daily,

Edited by idunno - 6 years ago

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#414

Thqs for pm s I missed ur new ff n one more thing it's just wow if a say only this then it's unfair as it's more than wow physchia

N maan bussiness what a combination read all chap in one go in first chap 3 guy behind geet I thought they r normal but after reading just my lower jaw fell down n so super

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#415

wonderful double updates 7-8...loved it...wow maaneet were actually mad for each other but could not understand it so hesitate to call to each other...oh no ajay was manipulated by meghna for funding to their night club idea & shame on his brotherhood who was severely cheating his big bro MSK by targeting Rita for false hope to become mrs MSK... alas his bearer cheque was lost (good sign as to run a business is not his cup of tea) where his well wisher friend vishal(real friend) warned him about money minded meghna & co. but he had full trust on them so he was ready for another blank cheque from maan thru Rita... wow geet was in all thought of maan which she could not concentrate in her study...loved geet & ria's convo... in KM maan was shocked to hear when he was told by nakul about ajay late night arrival & early morning departure from KM and he sent message about GM to geet(wow MSK in Love)...in KE all were surprised & happy to see their boss MSK entered in KE with smile so was ajay who was in co,to get another blank cheque thru rita only who was dreaming to become mrs.MSK but she should know her dream was not fulfilled by MSK & was fooled by ajay...maan was waiting for geet's message or ph but nothing...but was unhappy to see rahul in his cabin instead of Chopra...rahul got personal with maan by remembering rebecca's wedding to see geet with him & asked geet's contact which maan had severe fighting with rahul & ajay was shocked to hear maan with girl..maan was happy to see ajay in the office & asked him to take the interest in business for full time himself but he was in his nightclub idea so was nervous to hear from his big bro (its seems how two bros were coming from two opposite pole with very different thoughts...one was purely with his lady love & one was very well in business only...) geet was caught by jenet as she read maan's GM message on her ph & came to know some fishy but geet told her all their togetherness program which jenet called it date in posh hotel to know his richness but geet denied ...awe geet was lying as she was remembering their togetherness means she love maan & like maan also... excited for their acceptance of love... precap must be positive.. excited for next...thanks for pm..!!

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#416

so ria is sad bcoz of ajay...n ajay now dating wth meghna n he is now totally with bad company...he got a blank cheque of maan without informing n now lost it..who took it...is it geet n later she will back it to him...both r remembering yrsterday so mch..smiling n blushing...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#417

Sweet with Maan and geet..

but troubles..

and twist and turns...

well written update 👍🏼

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#418

Chapter 7

Superb Update

Maaneet both missing each other but hesitating to call each other.This Meghna and her brother trapping Ajay and Ajay behaving like a fool and spoilt brat, Ajay lost the blank check signed by Maan and even not listening Vishal who is his true friend, Vishal should talk to Maan and alerted him. Ria is also very disturbed and Geet is trying to comfort her , finally after so much of hesitation Maan send message to Geet, loved it