Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 13

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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm! excellent update, well written! Geet angry and accuses Maan! Maan's anger is justified! glad Vicky spoke to Geet! Geet realised she was wrong! loved that she apologized and manofied Maan! Maan and Geet hug! both affected by each other! update soon
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part 12


And say maan yes Love but u have to control your emotions beuase now time escape from his hand ...and he have to think about vicky and other family ...

Few tear escape from maan eyes adi took maan in hug to make him calm...Maan mummer mera pehal pyaar adhoora reh gaya adi ...

Around 9 o clock vicky arrivel with dev and and prem ...vicky know maan is sad he can feel it he is one who called in office to cheak maan saying lie or true about office work and when he get there is no any sudden work . He Imm called to adi that's why adi waiitng for maan with his fev coffee .

All night they are talking and luaghing their heart ...after ages they got such chance and they enjoying it ...vicky brough all home made food from KM to all so adi is happies person of earth because he love maan mother cooking.

ALL Make target to Vicky for teasing which deep hurting maan , first vicky try to cut them but maan nodded and asured him that he is ok with it ...maan try to be normal and he is some extend succesd in it ..

Next morning before vicky and adi wake up maan on flight he know now he cannot ake risk to hurt anyone of both family and specially vicky and geet ...so he take decision to went to london for one month he will come back on engegment day .

When all family get to know about maan sudden deptchur all get Hyiper but dadadji make them clam that maan went with his permission only . But all not that happy with maan decsion ...they want him be with them its first family function .

Vikcy and adi was in real shock they not though that maan take such dramatic decision ...

One more soul shuttered with maan sudden decsion which are non other than Geet ...who is all shock and confused state after shoping fisco its like someone ...snatch her soul that one hug change everything which is her brain not ready to accept it . The insult and hurtness given by maan one side other side his behaviour on roka and shoping she is in delima ...

Meera other side saw all this changes in geet she know that something happen with geet but problem is geet is not opening with her meera try every way to make her talk but all went in vain ,geet is not responding to her try . when geet get to know about maan depacher she almost went in cosh...like she withdrow herself from all things bas hamesha khoi rehati thi in deep thought ...day by day it start to make imapcat on her health ..her face start to turn dull ,dark cirule around eyes ...almost raning from eating .. All Handa Family start to turn worried for her .

All try to talk with her yaha they stop subject of marriage but there is no change in geet health .Meera found her smoetime crying also that's start to make her more and more worried ...

At last one day meera called to vicky ...and say him she want to talk on something .Meera and vicky mate in coffee shope nearby handa haveli .

Vikcy found all worried meera ...

Vicky - anything serious and that's make meera emotional he serching for person whoem she will share geet problem ...vicky taken back with meera sudden cry ...vicky in diliem how he will stop her ,can he touch her at last he put alll thought aside and put his plam on her plam ..

Please miss meera don't cry say me may be I will help u in any way ...he really get worried he saw her in shoping day and get that she is really jolly girl that what happen sudden .

Meera trun liteel bit clam after vicky word .vicky give her glass of water meera drink some water ..she feel beeter now burden from so many days she have on her heart .

Meera took deep breath and confess all what is happning with geet ...from that shoping day ...vicky with pasions heard everything and when meera finish her talk a soft smile appear on his face ...

Meera get confused and angry Her didi her geetu problem is not subject of smile ...but in next momnet vicky start to talk with meera which make meera clam .(No confusen please specialy Priya devil its willl come in upcoming part )

After an hour meera along with vicky come to Hnda villa ...he meet with all family and last reqest that he want to meet geet alone ...thou all are confued what to say but meera assured them and he get permisson ...

Vikcy knock on geet room door first he don't get any response so he again knock on door ...but same response at last he say loudily I am vicky and me coming inside ...with that he open room door and entered ...

Its beautful room neet and beautful ...all things are arranged in proper way he look for geet but don't found her than his eyes went to terrece side where he saw her seated on zula ..lost in thought he slowly went to her side ...He is taken back with shock when geet look to him ...lost gaze dark circule around eyes ...he think she may be lost her wight also ...now harldy 8 days for engegment ...

Vicky say in firm tone we need talk misss geet ...next full hour vicky talking with geet ...

After one week ...in XYZ hall ...

All place decorated like dulhan ...all are ready and waiitng for one person which is non other tham MSK who arriveing today for engegment with his roka yes he say yes for relation or marriage ...He is coming back after whole month ...

Only two hour ramined for start the cermony alll is so tense they cannot trust maan after his so called trust ...

Just than they heard voice of dev who saying aa gaya wo gaya ...all Khuranas gather to entrence ...thier maan coming in three piece ...Looking tired and dustubed or to say sad ...family become tense but dadadji say may be becoause of travle .

All almost bambring him with lots of qustion ...maan smile on fmaily helll he miss this whole one month ...he come forward and hug dadadji after taking blesing . all get relax with his gasture

All one bye one hug him ma say him for fresh up and change in other dress ...so ritual get start

Maan stop for while and say before that I want to meet meera first a pin drop silence appear there dadu get tense for handa reaction ..but daraji make its easy and he say yes ...

Maan ask for room ..all say him room number 1 is for geet and room number 2 is for meera ...maan make his way to ...room number ...

Ha ha ah I am devil

Next means last part coming in today itslef ...enjoy ...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update di
Liked it!!
Maan's friends were celebrating Vicky's happiness whilst Maan was lost in his grief and agony. Maan decides to stay away for few days as he couldn't see Geet with Vicky nor be happy in their happiness. Geet was upset and lost thyself in Maan's departure. She wasn't bubbly r lively enough and was missing Maan and his presence in her life. She detached thyself from her family and started to live aloof which made Meera and Handa s concerned for her. What transpired between Geet and Vicky!? Maan was back and says yes to get married to Meera though he was devasted from within.
Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous update dear, maaneet missing each other, but didn't say anything, eagerly waiting for next update
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last part



Maan stop for while and say before that I want to meet meera first a pin drop silence appear there dadu get tense for Handa reaction ..but daraji make its easy and he say yes ...

Maan ask for room ..all say him room number 1 is for geet and room number 2 is for meera ...maan make his way to ...room number ...His step stop near room number 1 and he knock on room ..he put all thoughts of right and wrong aside and entered in room with determination ..

There in room no one is present ...he wait for while and turn to go but stop with sound of bangles ...maan missed his heartbeat ..he feel like his heart stop in any time ..he slowly turn to that sound side .he took deep breath and slowly look to her ...he stand there like spell bounded what he imagin in last one month she looking more beautful but something is changed like no smile on face that talktive eyes turn cold ...that hurt maan most ...why she is sad is she not happy with engegment or what ...is vicky misbehave with her ..but next second his heart push that thought aside no vicky could not act like that ...

I am not belive in bashing around the bush I am coming on point ..My that stunt is reaction of some bad expriense about girl and my fault is I use one majerment for all that is my life biggest mistake ...that time I hurt both family and most of modesty of women shadi and ye dekhna and all ko mazak banake rakh diya and I am sorry for that ...from my heart I am asking forgive ness from with that he hold his own ear ..like geet hold her ear on that other day in their shoping ..

Other side geet is hell confuseion is he is real or its again her imagination ...

Next moment maan seat on one knee and extend his hand ...

Miss Geet Handa I know I am not perfect person for u ...but my heart soul only living for u now I cannot live without u I know I hurt u in very bad way ...for that I am really sorry but today onward ye Msk jiyega sirf Geet ek smile ke liye ...I am person with lots of bad habit ...and I am reqesting please accept this imperfect person in your life as life partner I LOVE YOU MISS GEET HANDA AND I WANTED TO MARRY YOU WANT TO BE LIFE OF MINE jo ishe manchale heart ko ek thrave de ..isko ek nayi zingi de because without geet maan ki zindgi ho hi nahi sakati ...

Geet is hell shock with maan entry and confession her heart is crying to run in maan hug but brain is stoping her with family thought she cannot hurt her family ...

Maan waiited for ans ..he have fear for her ans ...

Tear make way from geet eyes which pain maan heart ...maan thought for while he again hurt her ...he closed his eyes in hurt and pain ...but he open his eyes with shock when he heard geet word ...family will get hurt ... Is means she is fearing for family hurtness its meanse she is ready .

Maan stand on his feet and almost run to her side ...he took her hand in his hand and say hum mana lege apni family ko 4 life will destory if u will engeged with vicky please ...

Geet look to maan eyes ...and say its not that easy ...

Maan say calmily muskil bhi nahi hai geet please geet cannot able to reply she like turn balnk and next moment maan took geet palm in his hand and drag her to downside ...

All froze on their place when found maan draiging crying geet with him all are in shock and anger but one person have smirk on his face ..

Daraji and geet brother stand in front of maan all atmosphear turn tense ...

Maan reply clamly - I know every time I am reason of everyone hurtness ...bahot jada tang karta hu apni ulthi harkoto se app logo ko bas ye meri akhari galati samje lijjiye daraji ...aue apni geet ko muje de dijiye ...uska sambhle ne dijiye ye arrogant MSK ko shayab wahi muje sidhe raste main la sakti hai ...maan bahot pyaar karta hu usko shayed wahi pal se jab main usko dekha jab main khood jan jata I hurt her and u all badily ...

But today I don't want all life with forced realtion she is not happy for be with engaged with vicky ye app uski ankho main pad le sakte hai but she is not accepting this because of only family ...she love family more than me ...

So ajj ye msk apni life apni happiness and apki geet mangta hu ...

A pin drop silent apper in place all are so shock ...maan waiitng for tight slap from darji ...but he hold geet hand more firmily ...

Maan almost colsed his eyes ...but next maoment that place fill with big luagh of daraji maan look him with so much shock ...

Till now vicky standing beside daraji ...

Daraji somehow control his laugh and say vicky bas I cannot hold more ishe jada drama main nahi kar sakta I am not actor yaar ...ahhh ...

Vicky laugh on daradji word and both family joind darji and vicky ...maan feel like what ye shock se pagal ho gaye hai kya ...he once saw to geer she also have soft smile on face ...now maan found something fishy ...he give dead gaze to vicky ...

Vicky stand his hand in air and say hold on U start the drama wa only follow your path ...maan give him confused look ...

Ok chalo pas t main chale te hai ..u make stunt that day and jo karara jawab diya tha GEET BHBHI NE I decided that chahe kuch ho jaye mrs msk to geet handa hi hogi jo Msk ko in control rkhegi ...

So I apologied on your behalf and took one month time from her to give u second chance so a s family also first both family make fuss but than they ...get ready .

Maan feel like his head in speaing he ask - but wo tumarha Roka ...

Vicky give smirk to maan wo wo roka to app present they kya roka main MSK app to adi bhai ke godi main ro rahe they bhool gaye ...maan face turn red in embressment ...

But don't worry mera to roka ho gaya hai wo bahi handa girl se hi apni bhabhi se milna hai kya vicky ask ...poor maan nodded in yes ...

Vicky called out meera ...maan face turn worth watching with name of meera ...maan casred his own forhead ...meera come and stand near vicky she have teasing smile on her face ...

Maan - than why such drama why u all pretend that u and geet are going to engeged ...

Because my bahahi want to know how is u ...app kaise ho ...wiase apki hug ne bahahi bold out kar diya tha ...this word vicky mummer on maan ear only ...

Noe some tublight light in maan head yes ...he is saying uski and meera ki means vicky and meera ki engegment ho jayti if I do not make that stunt ...

Wiase ek clip hai apke liye ...vicky called out light off and ther the clip start of maaneet in room maan purpose ...all huted on maan ..

When light start again maaneet turn red red in shyness ...

But I have one more q maan ask ...why geet is unhappy ...

Vicky bahabi also become Tubelight khood apki pyaar main gir gai but accept hi nahi kar rahi thi yaha tak apna wight lost bhi kar liya ..poori devdas ho chuki jab meera call me and say all things when I meet her ...vicky voice turn hevay with emotions he hold maan hand and say bro u get golden heart girl she is fighting with her own self ...but hide it beacue apke aise choo manter hone se she get hurt that u don't have guts to confess your love ...she is gem bro tc of her ...

Maan pull geet in side hug her mouth open in O shape both fmaily are there ...but he is not caring at all ...

Ok ok msk become worlds biggest gadha ..full but whose this idea to make this video clip ...maan gritted his teeth ...and poor vicky took his feet to back side and next moment maan start to chase vicky in full speed ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting and lovely update di
Liked it!!
Maan instead of going to Meera's room went inside Geet's room to confront her. Maan was astonished to see Geet gloomy and weak and was contemplating reason behind her gloominess. Maan confesses his love for her and was scared to see her response. He confronts his and her family and confesses his love for her whilst their family's reaction made him wonder and was in shock. Vicky disclose s truth about the happenings took place and blessed to have Geet in his life. Maan was overwhelmed with the truth and was happy with turn of events. The ambiance was back to lively and happy self with Maan chasing Vicky.
Looking forward to the epilouge di.
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Excellent update dear, loved it. ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 11 - fascinating update! well written! Maaneet affected by each other! Maan bowled over by Geet's beauty! Maan leaves and Geet sad! Maan shares his pain with Adi! Maan breaks down as he loves his first love!
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Part 12 - dynamic update! wonderfully written! Maan shattered! Adi consoles Maan! Maan decides 2 leave for a business trip for a month! Geet sad and Meera worried! Vicky speaks 2 Geet! Maan is back! His roka is taking place! Maan wants to see Meera!

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