Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

Woahhh ...words nahin aaraha mujhe ... 👏 omggg ithna bada update vo bhi full of maaneet 😳 dreamyyy ... Yeh tho kamaal hain aaj ... Ab mein kya kaho samajh nahin aaraha ... Totally loved this update ...😃 maan is such a cutieee ☺️

He wants to give bath to his geet 😳 but geet ne mana karliya 😆 shaadi tak wait karlo maan nahin tho promotion hojayega sabka ... Abhi bhi reason nahin khola ki kyun maan ne geet ko fasaya 😛😉 haha geet ne maan ko budhu bola 😆 omgg cant stop loving this maan ... 😳 yeh maan. Tho shayar ban gaya ... Ab tho licence bhi mil gayi maan ko isiliye geet ke aas paas rehne ka ek bhi mouka nahin chod raha hain 😳 and movie bhi dekh raha hain dono vo bhi romantic vali .. Hayeee rabba mein marjawa indono ki pyaar dekhar ... Lagtha hain meri nazar lag jayegi dono ko ...🤗 maan kithna caring hain ... 😳 maan ko geet ka dukh dekhi nahin jaathi ... Loved their flashbacks ... Include more matha ji 😛 love to see their childhood love as well as romance ...ab mujhe bhi dekhna hain ki yeh maan kithna lafanga giri kiya hoga bachpan mein ... Haha ... 😆
Maan saying geet that she can take all his time is soo good yaar ... I loved all your conversations omg ... You are great ... Soo soo great ... Ithna acha lines kahi bhi nahin pada meine ... Tumhare writing tho as usual fantastic hain and how can you pen these lines 😳 It was very deep 😳
Awesome yaar ... Dono ki mrmg ki shuruvaat bhi ek dooje ko dekhar hi hua ... 😳 maan took geet to wasroom and geet drifted into past ... 😛 iss flashback mein dono ki age kya hain 😛 yeh maan tho kahi par bhi nahin rukhtha ... I am sure that he would have seen his parents romance in such am early age thats y he became soo naughty lol (just kidding ) 😆 yeh dono ki pyaar ko hamari nazar na lage ...
Fantastic work mam ... Last mein sam ka heart break hua 🥺 acha hua ki iss sam ko abhi patha chal gaya nahin tho bahuth der hojathi aur announcement mein patha chala tho dil tukda tukda hojayega ... 😭 anyways feeling sad for her yaar as a girl ... She loved someone and the feeling is very hard to digest ... But iss ladki ki tarah sapno mein bhi nahin hona chahiye ... She just assume things ... poor girl ... I pity her ... Ab jaldiii next update bhi dedho ... Cant wait yeh chudail kya karegi ab ...
Omgg love you loads for this awesome update 😳 lots of hugs chocolates and kisses for you 😛❤️


Thanks a lot baby for your stupendofantabulous comment!
I am overwhelmed by your response and very much glad that you liked it so much.

Flashback- well i am puttting them into bits and pieces na? 😉

dialoges- Awww really? Again your remark made me so happy sweets. Well may be I am too much filmy or intense as a person hence these thoughts come into my mind which is spoken through Maaneet 😉
Your praises- haayee, itna bhi sir pe maat chadhao mujhe, keep your hopes low yaar. har waqt words theek se form nahi hota btw, ups and down phases chalti rehti hain so just don't expect more that's all I can say. I am humbled by all your wonderful words about my writing, i think u love me na that's why u r spoiling me with all your sweet words. But really really thanks for all your support baby. Waiting for your res on the two other updates. 😳❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: i rok

great update...
maan and geets cute moments..
sameera finding out about maan and geet lets see how she takes this...
i hope she doesnt create rift between the two..
i hope she finds out that they married...
that the love which she saw is between husband and wife...


thanks a lot dear! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Lovely update

Waiting for next update. . .


Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update maan caring for his mishty how romantically he fed her soup taking all the tantrums of his princess geet remember how maan always care for her when she was small and he still pamper her like a doll how lovingly he combs her hair like she was small he loves the smell of her hair the freshness if her breath just like a child how he would get her ready when rano wasn't there to look after her geet overwhelmed with maan love and care for her maan naughtiness is getting hotter by day finally sameera saw something she should have seen before maaneet moment together but alas now she has fallen for maan so bad I am afraid she might do something that she will lose maans friendship aswell
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it!! Articulate writing
Loved Maaneet moments and their endless love for each other.
Maan bore all the trantrums of his seductress and romantically fed her soup adoring her antics and sweet words. Geet was reminiscing her past and Maan's unwavering endurance for her from childhood. It was like she had been like a caterpillar in a cocoon , and he had drawn her out and showed her that she was a butterfly. Sometimes the smallest thing and gestures takes the biggest room in your heart. Geet was overwhelmed and was in euphoric state witnessing Maan's immense love and care for her. He still treats and pampers her like a doll.
Sameera witnessed Maaneet moments, hope she isn't fool enough to build more air castles and it's time for her to return from illusion world to the land of reality. Feeling sad for Sameera though !!
Awaiting for Sameera's reaction and more Maaneet childhood scenes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
ek cheez achi huyi
par ye sam kuch gadbad toh nhi karengi na

udpate de na
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Maan is diverting geet's mind with
His argument to feed her his caring
And loving side is so sweet
Geet is thinking of her past and present
About maan's love for her
Sameera got to witness their love
Hope she doesn't do anything crazy

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh My God! What an update! That too full of Maaneet. I am so much confused which one of your stories I like more. When i read each one I flow with that one. And this chapter is one of the best of mp in my consideration. Love the bonding of maaneet here, maan loves geet so much that he married her way back. Uske haar ek harkato se pata chalta hain ki jab geet ne usse kaha hoga ki shadi karni hain usney kyun khud ko rok nahi paya hoga. Geet itni jayda pyri hain she is a doll. Maan ka jo love hain geet ke liye iss story mein woh lafzo mein mai bayan nahi kar pa rahi hoon par hats off 2 u u have shown it extrmly well. I lvd this update nd i can write on n on abt it. He is brushing her teeth, combing her. He is really in love with her. 4m his soul.
Last mein aise jaga pe rok diya hain ufff. Feel bad 4 sam but happy 2 dat usko pata chal gaya. M sure iske baad bhi uska vram nahi tutega i hv gut feeling.
Awesome update luv u 4 updating all ur stories. Waitin eagrly 4 next. Plz dun torture ur loyal readers nd update soon. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
PRECAP UPDATED - Page 15
Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks for updating precap😃
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