SS : Handa- The Loner, Part 13 Pg 35[19/03/19]

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fict

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Loving this unique story. Both Maan and Geet are extreme cases. First time reading Maan this gullible and Geet this allof. waiting for next.

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sgmiss2003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Both Maan and Geet are going through heart break. Both dealing with it differently. Maan trying so hard to be friendly with Geet.But Geet is so rude to him. What could be the reason for her aloofness and cold behaviour. Even her job is at stake. Would Maan be able to break the ice? Waiting to read further.

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

This is a fun story like the role reversal. Geet probably needs to loosen up a bit she doesnt know what in store for so maybe she should live a little.

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KawaiiGeet

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Res

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

"Long time back I could either live or walk around dead carrying the weight of such voluminous things like ego and self pride. I preferred living."

this line...says so much than what one can expect. what had happened that he is like this and she is like that? why has she become such a recluse and he this mellowed. this thing is so self prophesying... makes me eager to just get into the story and know what broke and morphed them the way they are.

amazing writing.

can't believe this girl actually asked for money...just for lemons!!😲

ohh dear geet, what is it that troubles you so much?

please updt soon

now that you have caught my attention well and good...and made me anxious..

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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Shraddha Sinari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Maan I love you yaar... You are the best... Shrugging off sorrow n embracing life to the fullest... Koi tumse sikhe... No comments on Geet...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

thanks 4 da fab update! well written! Maan annoyed with Geet and she is irritated with him! Maan was being nosy and Geet was a bit rude! but why shld she care abt his problems? omg he went back 2 ask 4 lemons! and she demanded payment 4 transport and the lemons! 😆 Poor Maan didn't expect that!! continue soon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

sent you a buddy request! add me 2 ur pm list! thanks

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

awesome update .. maan is very hurt and is trying to find solace in geet and wanted to have a talk with her but she is seriously doesnt pay any heed to him ... 😆he even asked her abt her breakup but she asked him to be in his limits .. really verey interesting and wanted to know abt geet .. why she is like that ? maan asked her lemons and she is charging for it lol ...😆 .. very interesting .. update soon

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Interesting concept ..

Great updates ...Loved all three parts ...

Maaneet aise bhi ho sakte hai meine toh nehi socha tha kabhi ..But it's quite funny and very interesting ..

Geet is ice queen .. Weird , unsocial and out straightly rude ..

And maan soft hearted , emotional , cheerful ...Who loves to help people ..

When geet broke up with dev ...His reaction was funny ..First he tried to manofy her .. Pleading and all ...And then he started cursing her ...Lol kare bhi toh kya bechara frustration kahi toh nikalna tha :p

And maan ...Poor boy ..His gf ditch him because he is too clingy and too good according to his gf oops ex gf ..Waise galat toh nehi hai banda toh chipku hai hi [:P]

But on a serious note ..Why geet is like that ? I m sure there must be some reason ... Otherwise why she need sleepling pill ?

Maaneet's last conversation was funny ..Enjoyed it very much ..Can't wait to read more ...Plz continue soon...

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Madhuri

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Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Part 3 - what a update. Enjoyed reading it. Poor maan. Had to pay double price for two lemons and she was bindhas charged for them. Lol.

He wanted some peaceful sleep. But her mixer sound disturbed him. He didn't think about his loud noise of songs could trouble others. She was right here to keep him away.

Maan noticing her hose. He was surprised to so clean house and what...he wondering about her bedroom. What is he thinking.?

She was not giving anything about herself and he was telling her everything when she was not at all interested.

I liked the last line about her talking with so much. Lo.