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And you did it again.
While I was smiling and laughing on Maan's predicament with him having a love-and-hate of relationship with Batata Puri, I had tears when I reached the end of the update.
I loved the lines about heart dominating the brain and taking the regime in its control, why not, after all the territory solely belongs to heart 😆
Adi still in Prof Higgins mode, want to drive Maan's love story in his own way, Pinky is more sensible in correcting him.
SD, Batata, Maan and her grandchildren. That was hilarious. The peculiar reactions of everyone there. the cries of the girl with increased intensity every minute. SD even made sure to get the stairs cleaned by him. 🤣
On the other side, Geet is drowning in depression and loneliness, her childhood seems to be a disturbed one..she is trying to reach to Maan, for whatever reason, may be to just get the help to come out of her situation, but she observed he is not back and she waits for him, she played the same RK movies as the night before...then the lines of song played at the exact time, making the situation more lonely and depressed for her..You have chosen the song perfectly for the situation here.
And the impact of the words in the last paragraph..😭 😭
the feeling of loneliness and depression acting as a slow death..
so both the extreme opposite reactions in the same update...written in a fabulous way :)
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
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