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Posted: 7 years ago
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The story was started by me 2 years ago but unfortunately I could not write it further so starting it again hope you people will like it. ...
PROLOGUE
A 14 yr geet enters her new classroom scared of the student of her new class though she is studying in the same school from kindergarden itself but she nver mixed with the students of other section,silently praying that atleast the first day should go well but looks like god is not with her as on the first itself she has to sit with a girl named nandini whom she hated from class 4 because the girl is noisy and geet being the silent one doesn't like but if this was not enough her class teachr appointed the head of her new clss a student who was not so polite maan his face itself speak about his ego and geet never understood as why people hold ego what is this ego?but the major problm was she was most scared from this maan though respected him very much as what he does he did it perfectly without boosting but unknown to her destiny which is going to just turn her ownself and her life...what if the one she hates turns into best friend and what if ...don't know what the destiny holds for HER...
PART 1-pg 1
PART 2- pg 3
PART 3-pg 6
PART4-pg 7
do tell me if any corrections needed
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story dear ... Love teenage stories ❤️ maan has a big fat ego 😲 how they are gonna become frnds?? Waiting for this ... Update soon 😃
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Congrats for new story 👏
I love these kind of teenage stories 😃
Very nice prologue dear
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Continue soon dear
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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welcome back! lovely prologue! shall be waiting
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Nice prologue. Hope you really continue this till the end this time.


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Part 1

it's 2nd week of Geet's school.she sat with nandini just behind her was sitting pari and Preksha though they didn't knew each other but was good to each other.
Pari and Preksha were to everyone and Preksha knew maan from childhood but though they were friends but she also didn't like the ego in him...maan sat with adi and behind them was dev and daksh four...three of them were childhood friend but maan being popular it was easy for him to get along with them...
it was a free period geet and nandini was fighting which they used to do daily maan came and shouted on both of them but it didn't effected nandini in anyway as she was his cousin and she was not new to his shouting but it did effected geet who was not at fault and had to beer his shouting.she was annoyed at him...
(maan ,geet,pari and nandini very well knew Marathi)
here geet nandini and pari are conversing in Marathi
geet:I hate him
pari:shant hoja tere chidne se kuch nii hoga
nandini:woh esaa hi h Pagal h
geet:dusht h khadus h rakshas h
(all this while pari and geet thought maan was unable to get them)
maan(nearing geet): geet wanted to tell u something
geet:what
maan:mujhe Marathi aati h islie agli baar mko kosna hai toh dheere bolna
geet(with shocked expressions):I didn't say anything
maan: haa haa kyu nii mere kaan toh bajte hai haina
saying this maan went from there
nandini:waise i knew that he knows marathi
geet: and all this while u didn't tell me
pari: are you mad nandini he would have blasted on us don't you know him
nandini: i was getting bore so thought of some entertainment
geet: I just remembered the reason I don't like you
nandini: thanks for your feelings
geet just got lost in her thoughts not noticing the eyes which were on her from a long time smiling at her antiques
teacher: all of you listen carefully it's maths test this Monday and as I am your class teacher and maths teacher as well you all have to score good..
geet: ohh my God maths hi hona ta first test muje kuch nii aara yrr
nandini:so what relax they are not going to give you death sentence if you didn't get good marks
pari: yrr ye test hoti hi kyuu h
maan: it's so easy going to get full marks
dev:yrr have to study
maan:it's the easiest thing
daksh:are you not getting over confident maan
maan:we will see what happens in test

precap:geet getting 1 in maths test
Edited by giaa5678 - 7 years ago
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Awesome update yaar .. Padhke mera school days yaad aagaya ... 😳 maan is cr and he shouted on geet and nandini ... Geet scolding maan in marathi but he very well knows marathi ... Nandini and maan are cousins ... So someone is watching geet ??? Koun hosaktha hain ... I think its maan... And next maths test ... So cute yaar ... I love this one ... Maan is being over confident on his success and geet getting first ... Maan will be shocked ... Continue soon ...😃
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thanks 4 da wonderful update, well written! so Geet speaks abt Maan in Marathi bt he understands Marathi! he confronts Geet! Nandini knew this! update soon
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Hayyee its a cute start
Purane dino ki yaad dila di
Awesome. Precap is so funny
So maan seem to b a bright student but not so sure abt geet.
Cont soon nd pm me

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