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Posted: 7 years ago
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Precap is very Interesting
looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
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welcome back! thanks 4 da pm!

Part 3

wonderful update! brilliantly written!

Maan never ceases an opportunity to tease Geet! nice that she wished him on his birthday!

Geet distances herself from Maan as he feels he want her to ignore him! but what did he want from Geet?

Maan annoyed with Geet!




Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Sweet story
Geet Maan teenagers and classmates
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept lovely update waiting to read next part update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 4
Something was bothering geet but she kept ignoring it ...
on fine day as she entered class after lunch she saw nandini and pari discussing some thing which actually made geet irritated unknown to herself
geet: what are you both talking about
nandini: about maan's gf
geet:whattt!!
nandini:yes darling
geet:who is she
nandini:i don't have idea
geet:ohh
geet kept quiet that day after listening she was unable to guess what was bothering her but it got maan irritated he was so used to listening her that it made him irritated
after the end of school while going to bus
maan: may i join you
geet: why you have to join me you have your friends
maan tried to reach her by holding her hand which jerked away
geet:just stop what do you think about yourself stay away from me
after a month
in this one month geet and maan completely avoided each other none of them tried to initiate any talk in this one month geet changed her seat away from maan
dev: come na geet seat here maan is not here you come and join us
nandini:come na woh sadoo music practice keliye gaya hai u can seat in his place
geet came to seat on maan's place but unfortunately maan came after 5 mins
teacher: maan don't roam go and seat
which left maan and geet seating on a bench together
geet was quiet and resting her head on desk and maan was completing his writing work
maan:so we have been seating together for an hour without fighting its a big thing i am surprised
geet: what do mean
maan:that from an hour you don't have any problem from me its quiet surprising
geet:what do mean that I initiate fights
maan:ofcourse
geet:no you do such things i hate you
maan:what do you think that I love you
geet: forget it I am leaving
maan :geet
geet:what
maan:stop it ...can't you be normal
geet: i am leaving
as geet started to leave maan held her hand
geet:leave me
maan:stop it...i missed you saying that he put her hair strand behind her ear as it was coming in between his view leaving geet completely shocked
geet sat their until end of the day
also while going to bus he joined her but didn't say anthing
geet got more confused with everything
Precap:
1.geet msging maan
maan and geet getting closer
2.dev started getting insecure
3.nandini getting to know about maaneet
4.maan getting possesive of geet and getting jealous from dev
5.maan: so here is the noodles you demanded to cook me
geet: u bought it for me!!!!
6. maan expressing his feeling
these are not only next chaptrs precap but for next 3-4 chapters and if you have suggestions you are welcome
thank you


Edited by giaa5678 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
thanks for the pm!

Part 4

amazing update. well written! Geet irritated but does not know why! she is upset hearing that Maan has a gf!

Maaneet avoid each other but then have to sit next to each other!

Maaneet argue!

Maan's actions surprise Geet!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely precaps! will wait for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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geet got irritate knowing about maan's gf n starts avoiding him
both are restless with out each other

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on new story 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Fantastic Chapter

Something has been disturbing Geet and when she learns about Maan's girlfriend
it seems like she just wanted to have an argument with him
both have avoided each other for a whole month
but then eventually they ended up speaking

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