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Chapter 52

This chapter started on a funny note.

Gigi,Nick,Gaurav,Sean,Tara

The conversation was too good!!

Nick is soo innocent,pure,sweet heart and Gigi is her world.They have a magical bond.Love reading about them.

Liked the way Geet booked the mansions and made all arrangements.

Her entry at airport Geet is a kickass heroine, loved her!and MSK totally blown away with her personality.It was a dhak dhak(heartbeats) moment.

Geet is a fabulous female character, strong, intelligent,successful and yes remarkably beautiful and fascinating women.

The Khurana family is finally catching upon that.

Maan noticing no was coming to his room was heart breaking.It is so odd army men/women lay down their life for all citizens and we as citizens forget to show respect to them for all their sacrifices.Painful.

Geet Maan attraction and chemistry both are growing.But i want friendship to be a start of their relationship or companionship not lust.Maan already respects her and values her may not say it aloud but he does. Geet is attracted but to his body or his character not sure.Please throw light on it.

Tara also observed ,her character can certainly answer the questions in my mind. What is Geet thinging is it just attractioni mean physical attraction or just curiosity about Maan.Does Geet even like him as an individual considers her an equal because nobody can deny Geet is rich and successful where does Maan stand in comparison from point of view of Geet.

Also Maan may be attracted to Geet but he still doesn't know much about her personally or even professionally.

Thanks for the update.

Waiting to find answers to questions in my mind in next chapters.

please give me pw for part 47 n 48

also 49 to 55

please

Ihad commented on it but dint know the page number

iam also trying comment the way you wants

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The more i get to know the the family members of Geet family the more it amazes me.

Cooking on a holiday, my mother is same.You have written the update like you actually living this holiday while doing that i have also been brought along for the ride.

Rhea is smart who has realized geet choice of cuisine and smart enough not to waste time speaking to Savitri. Well portrayed the family dynamics of Maan & Geet 's family.

Adrian and Geet

The more i read, stronger are my instincts its friendship but not love at least not on both sides.They do have a relationship but not a partnership where one cannot live without other.

Adrian is being understanding too perfect for some reason expected some reaction from both Geet and Adrian.Geet upset or missing Adrian which is not there ,Adrian angry or joining her with family something and also is he honestly not led down by Geet forgetting their date ,his reaction is confusing why not ask to spend more time?why no love miss u?Why not angry even if it for sometime and why geet not trying to win him over, isn't this also part and parcel of love (you know Ruthna, Mana and manafoying).May be they are both mature and behaving like adults but love should enable to be childish,emotional with your life partners at least. You know full expression of thoughts without filter.

Sticking to my opinion Adrian is character very fictional too perfect .

Bathroom scene

They try to avoid any closeness, but the attraction is visible and palpable and they can’t deny it for much longer. Superbbb Scene

Geet's reaction makes me wonder if she would have acted upon this attraction if Nick had not come

Poor Maan if Geet fulfilled her curiosity what about MSK 's emotions

As it is not clear what does Geet consider maan a casual fling or just attraction she believes will over once acted upon or is she reacting without any plans?

Out of Control, not sure,But yes want to know More

"Were you kissing man like daddy does to mummy in the bathroom?"OMGGG Is this indication to future track.Hide Seek relationship in future.

Your story telling is excellent,Keeps me glued to this fiction and visualize easily.
Thanks you for such well written chapter, which left me with many more curiosities to look forward.

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The conversation,swimming pool scene,the kiss

Mesmerizing,Captivating just amazing

Geet's behaviour was unexpected.Atleast i did not see it coming.Geet is practical,well organised and a planner and through professional.

But it seems she acting without thinking now totally in control of her intense and undeniable sexual attraction towards Maan. Loved this transformation from planning everything in her life to restless Geet.

She knew she is attracted to Maan but this strongly.Wow

My heart was breaking in tiny pieces after reading Maan is unable to sleep and pills for the same but our strong, bad-ass heroine comes to Rescue aka Geet

Shock one after other

"Looking for someone, Maan?” Clean bowled here, MSK's expression/reaction wish could see this scene on tv/silver screen. Superbb!!Really so well written.👏👏

MSK attracted to her,likes her but will leave her alone as he thinks she deserves better and knows that girls run away from his imperfection/War Scars

“I won’t” Impressed with Geet's Boldness. Temptation is a wild emotion,lust, passion and desperation.Loved Geet's confidence here.But Maan does not believe her.

He does not expect Geet to like him at all. Surprised at her reaction but still sure that he is misunderstanding her signals.He fails to realize the attraction is mutual.
Outstanding character development!
To -a- die -for -Hero

"You know you liked it" Is this the same Geet who is motivated, competitive, fierce, smart, calculated and yet so emotional here.Want to hug her immediately and tell off course Maan not only like but loved it.

I devoured this fiction every chapter, every word.Oustanding Work.⭐⭐⭐

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There was so much happening in this chapter.But i have decided to focus on some aspects that i loved.Yes, that means ignoring Savitri Devi, enough of criticism.You have portrayed Geet as an amazing boss where her center of attention is her employees,work, family and her personal thoughts/life come later.Once again Geet's character did not disappoint me rather i love and adore her. She continues on that path of her life while showing signs of maturity,cheekiness complexity yet always motivated.

And off course still Confused Maan. Brilliantly expressed Maan's mindset.At times it is upsetting and difficult to see him suffer emotionally that way. Provide us readers a relief and give Maan expression of thought policy.Please let him talk to at least to somebody.

Loved the way you have expressed the emotions of both Maan and Geet.

But best part of this chapter that stole the lime light was Theresa and Maan's interaction.I loved the scene Superbb!! Smitten!!

A baby who required attention got it from Maan and also helped MSK to calm down.

So pure, innocent,lovely without any prejudice reached out to maan and smiled. I was infatuated with Maan's cute interaction with Theresa and also Kartik and Maan's relationship.

I love that you have focused on the importance of family and its support in this ff. I enjoyed all the chapters red but it made me happy sometimes looking at such forward thinking family,Geet's success and sad at the same time that she is lonely with all her achievements.

Thank you for this fiction and amazing Chapters.

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Gaurav apologized to Geet fr judging hr without knowing about hr she happily accepted his apology bz she think it's genuine anyone can make mistake

So Geet aware of Maan attractions towards hr but ignoring it's mean she to checking him time to time so that's y she get to know

Adrian Lewis Geet past till now they were lovely Geet collid with someone and hope not Adrian

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Oh wow what an apology especially a genuine one does. Geet let’s go if the past with Gaurav. Loved that. How easy their conversation is now. So love nicks honesty and questioning him in calling everyone son. Haha. Just like I am so glad nick chose that seat. Poor maan already cannotnkeep himself from

Observing her and now it’s her seated close by he cannot but watch her

Oh so geet has observed that maan is falling for her or has a soft corner for her. Hmm will she reciprocate??? Waiting eagerly

but Savitri hmmm don’t like her still judging geet glad at least maans mom is not. Of course Gaurav knows about maans liking geet He wants his grandsons happiness afterall

51– ah so geet has started noticing maan too eh. Nice. But so glad she doesn’t judge him due to his problems. Hmm wait in g eagerly to see their relationship grow more maybe converse more

so love geet showing Karthik that woman can fight and win.

Adrian. Hmm interesting they seemed to be a good match. Wonder what happened. I am

Glad but curious to know what happened

52—hmm very interesting. How come geet chose such a place where everyone has to share. Doesn’t make sense. And now maan and geet are sharing a room. Wow wow. So glad her sister noticed something going on. Waiting for that talk between sisters.

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Haha nick asking if she was kissing maan like his parents. Maan geet are they going to be able to keep their hands of each other especially in close proximity. Hm

sunerl suggesting cooking on a holiday. Just like typical Indian families. Loved how she dragged Karthik with her.

Maans family is something else. So glad Rhea is getting used to geet and getting to know more about her. They are amazed how successful a business woman she is. But Savitri. Hmmm