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Posted: 8 years ago
The progression between maan and geet is so sweet to see that he sees she is clumsy and she sees he is very humble. Oh wow so gues sthe reason for Maan disability is finally here and Geet hearing the truth must be very shocking.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part.. Maan give space to talk to her..Geet is not comfortable with other men.. I think something happened to her..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all

This post is to clear some doubts . I read comments and come to know some points are not clear to readers .

1) - regarding maan . Maan is disabled still he unable to walk , but trained himself very well to not be dependent on anyone . But he show some improvments after therpy like some moments in his fingure and the major was when he stand up as he was so angry with geet .

But the maan in past ( small one) was able to walk & run properly .

2)- how he lost his legs u'll come to know sometimes pain doesn't leave us that easily. I'll slowly unreveal it.

3)- Geet doesn't know a single thing about maan's past the coversation u saw was in past that maan was remebring as he hear name shiv . She just saw his change of emotions and after that how he destroyed room nothing else .

Some characters will enter & introduced in story with time so please keep patince . As time will come i'll introduce characters .

...

Now for pm . I send pm to all those who are in my buddy list . I don't want to bother ANYONE with my unnecessary pm so i was still hesitant . Hence decided to not send pm for my new story . For my new story pm will be sent to only those who will mention / intrested in reading it .

No hard feeling for anyone . The reason in purely because i don't want to bother a single soul . If u feel irritated the u can unbuddy me anytime .

So will meet u soon with a new update of this story . But as i updated today destiny hence no update of this story for today .

Thank u all and sorry i did ANYTHING that made u sad .

Feel free to ask questions / query :)
Edited by Rpian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it
Pls do add me In ur pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the note dear !
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update
Geet was so overwhelmed with maan's care
Geet was little comfortable with maan n she had not forgiven Vikram
Geet was not comfortable with other male members
Who is this shiv malhotra... Is he responsible for maan's condition
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for note..
Plz add me in pm list..
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Posted: 8 years ago
plz do add me to the pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 16


MAAN MAAN MAAN
Arghhh
S- this name made my life hell .
JUST BECAUSE OF HIM i lost my position in busines world . HE FORCED ME TO COME HERE NOW HE NEED TO FACE ME !

Ek baar bach gya tha tumhara beta ab nhi bachega - Shiv say while turning toward HIS WIFE PALLAVI.

All the while her head was lowered .
S- PHLE USSE DUSRO K MOHTAJ BANAYA THA MAINE ABKI BAAR USKI JAAN LE LUNGA!! kash usi din marr dia hota use...

P- maine tumse phle hi kha tha shiv .
He said that day that he will destroy us. BUT U DIDN'T LISTEN ME .
U say he is a child and harmless that day u beat him for running to that extent that he lost his legs . TABHI MAAR DENA THA USEE .

S- Kismat achi thi uski ki vo marne s phle hi TUMHARE PURANE PATI NE use bacha lia . BUT NOT THIS TIME !
if that DCP & Vikram not reached then i was gonna torture him to death .
U have no idea more than my legal business he cause harm to my illigeal business .

..( past continued)

Yash immidatly ran to call vikram to save maan he can't do it alone . Maan went uncoinsious due to schok with some scratch as he push yash , goons immidatly try to stop car to hit him as they know he is son of a business man one single mistake can cost their life . Moreever as their boss order they want maan ALIVE , don't know why .
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They immidatly grab unconsious maan putting him in car they ran from their.

That was the biggest mistake they did . They left yash behind who knew everything about them reached vikram .
Vikram was first schok but come in action immidatly but before they reach maan they saw him again getting gidnapped.

But yash was fast know that place where they were tied along with other childrens .

They act fast but it was still too late . Till the time they reach they find maan beaten up to no extent. His pulse was very low .
Yash cried and blamed himself but vikram consoled him. Chances was low but he survived . SURVIVED TO GIVE 100 TIMES MORE PAIN TO HIS ENEMY !


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Mannet room


Yash first look at maan then at geet , knowing very well that how uncomfortable geet get he look back again at maan who was now in control .

Maan signalled yash to leave for now and yash immidatly left .

Geet all the while look at him with teary eyes . In past days never saw him that much angry . She unable to stop her sob . On the top of it his bleeding hand not knowing it's a good idea to go near him in this condition or not. when she hear him

M- Relax ! I'm sorry for scaring u .

G- aap gussa nhi h ab

Taking a deep breath he nodded in no

G- pakka
M- hmm
G- vo v vo
M- kya hua geet
G- aapka haath .
M- leave it ! I'm getting late where are my clothes
G- aapko chot lagi h bus do minute lagegi
But before he say no she went to take first aid box .


After dressing his hand . She told nakul to clear room . All the while he was noticing her not once she question him WHY?

M- u don't wanna ask what happen?
G- nhi
M- why?
G- i told u about me because i want to say it at all . But that doesn't mean that i can expect same in return . Aapne kha tha u need time! I'll wait for it .

He nodded with a smile on his face . May be she is not like HER!

...
Past is still aadha adhura will reveal what , why , how soon!!
I've written a note last night for all readers who are confused with some facts . U can check pg 31 for ur answers ..
Thank you all
For likes & comments too

Nxt update after 45 likes & 18 comments .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok so before the story undergo a major track . We will first move to so mannet moments . The story is not at all lovey dovey . This pair is in search of love . A battle between sympathy or love. Maan give her a chance but that doesn't mean he will accept her love soon . He will struggle with emotion sympathy or love but with his past .

Any problem / query feel free to ask .
All suggestions and critisms are welcome .
The reason i'm revealing past is just to let u know shades of maan .

And why it's not easy for him to trust on someone.


Ignore grammer mistakes.

Edited by Rpian - 8 years ago

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