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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 6 (II)(unedited)

geet went to the kitchen and started the process. she was very nervous about today groom's meeting. she was thinking atleast 'iss narak muze mukti milegi'.
she took out the the boiled milk with kesar in the hall. in between, she made gajar ka halwa.
mama"geet, geet puttar jara idhar to aana"
geet "ji aayi..."
mama "jaldi aaja, teri mami bhahr hai, tuze kuch dena hai"
geet came rushing nearing her mamu. in the family, only her mamu was treated her well.
geet " ji boliye, kyon bula rahe the?"
mama " beta, tune aaj gajar ka halwa bana diya tu muze teri maa ki yaad aagayi.. wo bhi iss tarah halwa bana thi"
geet "mama..."
mama " geet , kuch mat bol. muze bolne de.. muze kabhi muaka nahi milega... teri mami aur shamesher nahi hai.. muze tuze kuch dena hai. ye file aapne pass rakh lo,
jab teri shaadi ho jaayegi to tuze dene ke liye bola tha.."
geet"mama,aap aaj inte senti mat bano.."
mama" puttar, chup bethe , muze bolne de. shayad muaka mile na mile.. ye dhyan mai rakha na iss file ke bare mai kiso bhi pata nahi chalna chayiye.. jab tu 21 saalki ho jayegi
tab ye kholna... "
geet "????"
mama gave file to geet and she had many qustions but before she could ask further mami came back.
mami "aa ji sunte ho. wo ladke wale aa ra hai"
mami was enterning in the house so mama looked at geet and signaled to hide file. so geet hurrriedly kept the file in her kurta .
mami while coming in hall seen geet standing and looking here and their.
mami" geet, tu ithe kya kar rahi hai? maharani ko tyaar hone se furst mili to mehemano ke liye khana banaya ... "
geet "ji.. ji.. haha mami... , wohi puchne ?"
mamai" geet... " she just angrly looked at her while taking her name. " ye mat bhul tu puchana aur sochna nahi sirf hukum manan hai"
she further added that ye mat samaz ki tu se apni man marzi ki mauka mila hai, wo sirf dekhne ko aa rahe hai... tuze yaha hi rahna hai..." while scolding mami reached for geet's hand
and pressured hard .
geet "ouch, mami dukh raha hai"
mami " yaad rakhna sikhna padta hai na.. apni jagah yaad rakh " and she pushed on the floor.
TO BE CONT...



Edited by great_love - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice part
mami is very crual
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Posted: 7 years ago
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great update! well written! feeling 4 Geet! Mama is nice but mami is so cruel!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice update
again mami behind Geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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updating 😃😃😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Please post next update




posting mid-night 😊😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanx for commeting.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanx for commting 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jssood

nice part

mami is very crual



thanx for commting 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

great update! well written! feeling 4 Geet! Mama is nice but mami is so cruel!


update soon



thanx for commeting. 😊😊😊

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