With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 9

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

Loved the update to the core
The way maan trying to make himself guilty free when geet s unconscious
Like he was he will not irritates her by singing, teasing, texting... Aww maan knows what he is doing to geet
Raj was listening to maan
Maan has taken hospital on head since they did not attend geet immediately
Loved Raj the was he was consoling maan
Aww maaneet moments were lovely the way maan saying sorry to geet
Geet make maan that she s fine
Did maan break his rule not love anymore wala
Just loved every bit of the story

Originally posted by: sidlik

It is phenomenal Chapter Avi
Truly loved it
Ummm... Chapter looks good when Writer gives it life with her writer and today I can assure you everyone fall in love with you after reading this chapter
Staring from First Maan worries and his unknown love for him was commendable.
Raj consolation like a true dad was great
Maan seems so restless when Nurse was not attending him and the way he says he is Maan Singh Khurana and his Daadi Ma is trustee of this Hospital
Raj asked about what name he is giving still he says He is friend and he doesn't deserve her... Great... good going Maan...I am.with you
Actually I thought Teji also pray active role here as a catalyst but He is passive I think...not to worry I love every bit of this update
And this is fantastic when Maan says It's complicated Dad Aap nahi samjhoge... It's remind me two things First Main Rahu Na Rahu Song where The little kid says to Imran Hashmi and seems like he says same dialogue which small kid says to their parents
And Raj saying to Maan Bachhu he is your father...he will look after you very well
And lastly when Maan confession to Geet not actually confession but the way he shows care was lovely...
Ab main tumhe meri zindagi se juddi har baat keh duga Geet, kuch nahi chuppauga.

Itna pyar karuga, itna pyar ki tum mujhe pyar karne ke liye majboor ho jaogi.

Ab zindagi ki har subah tumse hogi Geet aur har shaam tum pe khatam.

Ye mera waada hai tumse Geet.

I don't understand these line, does he confessed to himself and gives chance to her.
Now it's going more interesting
Will wait for next part already
Take Care
Lots of Love Avi
Good Night

Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi

Lovely update... Maan was so hysteric seeing her condition... He blurted out the half truth too... In this storu i love maan parents role so much... They are supportive n caring n knew how to tackle their kids.. their way of supporting maan geet os awesome...will they take her to km again.. now maan will be on full form with gett.. his decision to tell heris nice...

Originally posted by: indiegirl

Ch 30:
Very nice update, doesn't matter that it is small but very effective as it shows Maan the mirror to his heart... his love for his Geet is portrayed so well and also his admittance that he cannot live without her is greet, his dad has understood his undying love for Geet, even though he does not except it in front of him, but his dad saw his restlessness and anxiety and has realized his love for Geet.. as soon as Geet was out of the concussion he ran to her and could not stop loving her, his worry and fear said it all in his actions...,
Thnx...,

Originally posted by: nish285

<font color="#990033" size="4">hhheeeyyy aviii...pehli baar aapke twist ne dil khush kar diya yaar...😊...aap na aise twist baar baar diya karo...😉😉.</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">.it took only one incident for him to break his vow...and he was thinking to stay away from her all life long......</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">and moving on to the update...i am a little confused here...😲...first maan confesdes dat he cannot live without geet before his dad...and den he somewhat does not confirm the same when his dad asks him ...and rather says dat he failed as a friend inspite of promising dat he would take care of her...i thought he wanted to stay from love because it would make him selfish and he would nt want to put his parents after him...and now he says he is not good enough for geet because she is so selfless and she left everything and came for dadima...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">((****i know dis is a very emoyionally taxing situation for him right now...and he does nt realize dat he did d same for geet and dadima wen darji was sick..***))...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">And den wen he sees geet...his resolve breaks again...(like always...😆...)) and he promises to let her know about his feelings...and to never let her go...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">I am confused ya...has he decided to be a true friend to her from now on...or he would persue her with his love for her and not try to run away from her...?...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">But anyways i ll conclude dat...he was very very scared and tensed to see her like dat...he was emotionally quite messed up with his guilt (of she being in d condition she is right now)...his restlessness and anxiety of seeing his love so lifeless...and den his frustration of not being able to express his feeling for her...and den it just took one sight of geet like dat to make him decide dat he would nt let her go now...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">But all in all...the happy note to end the update is dat v can be expecting some efforts from maan s side to swoon his lady love off her feet...and geet ...now dat she has realized her feelings for maan...may be she ll see maan and his actions in a different light ...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">and i was actually expecting chandan and poonam s story as well on dis update...but its ok...i am very happy and thankful that you gave an update in spite of ur tight shedule...at least getting frequent short perks is better than waiting for long...</font>

<font color="#990033" size="4">and happy belated raksha bandhan...😃</font>

Originally posted by: angeldream14

Maan is such a scared cat

he wants to send every moment with her but doesn't want to admit he loves her

her slight pain makes him go bonkers but still he will zip his lips

Raj need to hit his sons head to shake it up a bit

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 30
Chhota packet bada dhamaka
Dil khush kar dita
Maan ne ikraar bhi kiya
Aur
Inkaar bhi
Par maan bete tum apne asli baap sorry sorry papa se baat kar rahe ho
Jo ke ees school ke principal reh chuke hsi
Pyar kya hota hai samazte hai
Dosti ki hai nibhani to padegi hi
To
Aaag he lagi hui
Eedhar bhi uudhar bhi
Sirf hawa ke jhonke ki kami hai
Rajkiran hai na
Now patiji on paper sambhalenge
Patniji on paper ko
Fabulous update
Please update soon
Can't wait to read more
Waiting

😛 😛

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm n pw. Rocking update. Ye maan ne kya kr diya, daddy ko secret bta diya. Ab raj daddy pakka iska band bajwa denge. Again the chemistry of maaneet may be of few moments but speak alot. When maan saw geet concious i remember the song ABHI MUJHME KHI BAKI THODI SI H JINDAGI. Fire of love is on both side and raj n kiran are more than ready to cook on it. Do we need dr. Teji to treat the head injury of geet. ;-p

Todays pics are too much lovely.

Waiting for next.

Originally posted by: dqno1

thank u 😃
aissa hoga kya?
Avi is a devil writer, yaad rahe 😃